2016年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：21（含解析）

　　1．书面表达（满分25分）

　　假定你是李华，你的一位美国的朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年，即将回国。现在由你给她发E-mail，邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会，要点如下：

　　1．祝贺她顺利通过考试，她的学习进步很大，为她娇傲；

　　2．感谢她帮助你们学习英语；

　　3．时间：星期六晚六点

　　4．地点：阳光俱乐部（The Sun Club）302房间

　　5．路线：在你所住宾馆门口乘坐332路公共汽车可直达。

　　注意：

　　1．须包括以上主要内容，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；

　　2．词数：100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

　　3．参考词汇：欢送会——farewell party

　　Dear Jane,

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　2．

　　基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）

　　假设你叫李华，最近在某英文购物网站上购买了一双鞋子，但出现了一些问题。

　　[写作内容]

　　请给网站写一封投诉信，包括以下内容：

　　l.写信的目的；

　　2.投诉内容：

　　申购情况 实际情况

　　颜色 黑色 白色

　　号数 9 8.5

　　到货日期 4月10日 4月20日

　　3．要求：重新邮寄或退款；

　　4.询问：若寄回，谁承担奇费?

　　[写作要求]

　　只能使用5个句了表达全部内容。（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入句子总数。）

　　[评分标准]

　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

　　Dear Sir．

　　Thank you for your consideration

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Jim计划要到北京观光。请你根据下列表格中的信息，在信中向他介绍一下北京。

　　面积 16，808平方公里

　　人口 超过1700万

　　名胜 故宫，颐和园、天坛等

　　交通 公共汽车、出租车、地铁等

　　体育场馆 31个：曾于2008年8月8日，在位于北京东北部朝阳区的国家体育场（又名鸟巢）举行第29届奥运会开幕式

　　注意：1．词数120左右。

　　2．信的开头已经为你写好。

　　3．信中内容必须包括表格所提供的要点。（可适当增加内容）

　　国家体育场

　　the National Stadium

　　鸟巢

　　Bird’s Nest

　　Dear Jim,

　　Learning that you are coming to Beijing for a visit, I’m very glad to offer you some information about the city

　　_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　_______________________________________________________________________________

　　Best wishes,

　　Li hua

　　4．根据以下提示，以Travel为题写一篇100字左右的短文。

　　1.当工作累了时，你可以旅游，领略大自然的美丽，呼吸新鲜空气，还可以交友。

　　2. 有时旅游也会有烦恼，天气多变，有时可能被雨淋。

　　3.旅游时应准备充分，了解天气情况，有个旅伴可以互相照应，避免出事。

　　5．近年来选秀类的电视节目吸引了很多人的注意力。有的在校学生为了实现自己的明星梦辍学参加。请谈谈你对这一现象的观点。

　　注意：1词数120~150；

　　2可适当增加细节。

　　参考答案

　　1． Dear Jane,

　　Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. All you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English. We’ll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.

　　It’s a pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00p.m.? We’ll have dinner together. By the way, you may take Bus No.332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.

　　I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】略

　　2．

　　Dear sir,

　　I am writing to complain about a pair of sneakers I recently purchased from your website. What I ordered was a pair of black size-nine shoes but I received a pair of white, size-8.5 shoes. Worse still, there was a ten-day delay in delivering my shoes, which should have reached me on April 10th. For the above reasons, I demand either a new pair of black size-nine shoes be posted me immediately or I be give a full refund. By the way, if I send back the wrong shoes, will your company pay for the postage?

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　3．

　　One possible version:

　　Dear Jim,

　　Learning that you are coming to Beijing for a visit , I’m very glad to offer you some information about the city.

　　Beijing, with an area of 16,808 square kilometers, has a population of over 17 million. There

　　are a lot of places of interest for you to visit, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace, the Temple of Heaven, and so on. And it’s very convenient to go wherever you want to by bus, by taxi or by subway. So far, 31 Olympic stadiums have been built to host the 29th Olympic Games. Located in Chaoyang District, northeast of Beijing, the National Stadium is also called the Bird’s Nest, where the opening ceremony took place on August 8th , 2008.

　　I’m really looking forward to your coming here and I’m sure you will be deeply impressed by a new Beijing!

　　Best wishes,

　　Li hua

　　【解析】略

　　Travel is a very good activity. When you’re fed up with your work or study, and when you’re free, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature. You can breathe fresh air and make some friends.

　　But sometimes, it is not a good thing. The weather often changes. You may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold while traveling.

　　Therefore, you should prepare yourself carefully before the trip. You’d better find a companion so that you can help each other and may avoid accidents during the travel.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：考查了提纲类短文写作，本文是关于旅游的话题，考生只要求翻译要点即可，难点在于选择合适的词汇来表达所需要的词义，要选择一些高级的词汇如be fed up with厌倦…;因为要点给了出来，对考生的谋篇布局能力要求不高，只需要用合适的连接词连接全文，也要使用多样化的句型让文章有变化。

　　5．One possible version:

　　Attending TV Does No Good to Young People

　　Nowadays TV shows are popular in China and have attracted many people. Some teenagers even give up their studies to attend these shows in the hope of becoming famous overnight. Some people think these shows provide young people. As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion.

　　It should be admitted that some young people like Li Yuchun has stood out from the numerous attendants, but that doesn’t mean attending the shows is a good way to become successful for young people. The following reasons can support my view. Firstly, some young people hunt after fame at whatever cost. Secondly, TV shows can destroy the youngsters’ values. They think attending the shows is a shortcut to success, so they may look down upon the way of achieving success by hard work. Finally, if the young people fail in these shows, they will suffer a psychological unbalance.

　　In a word, entering for TV shows is not a good way for young people to make a success. I suggest young people should think twice before deciding to attend show.

　　【解析】略