2016年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：30（含解析）

　　1．《21Century学生英文报》记者采访了你校“争做好学生好公民” 活动， 并邀请你就活动前后同学们的言行变化写一篇英语报道，同时发表你个人看法。

　　活动前 活动后

　　1．上课迟到，作业拖拉。 1. 准时到校，作业认真。

　　2．不问候老师，课后喧哗。 2. 尊敬师长，帮助他人。

　　3．乘车插队，上车抢座。 3. 乘车排队，上车让座。

　　注意：

　　请根据以上提供的信息写篇报道，个人看法可自由发挥。

　　词数：120左右；开头已写好，不计入总词数。

　　参考词汇：活动 campaign; 抢座位 scramble for seats

　　At the beginning of the term, a campaign “to be a good student and a good citizen” was launched in our school, and great changes have taken place since then.

　　2．请从下列人物中选择你最喜欢的一位，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。要求根据所给信息作适当发挥，且需包括以下三部分内容：

　　1．对该人物的简单介绍；

　　2．喜欢该人物的理由；

　　3．从该人物身上得到的启示。

　　Thomas Edison Helen Keller William Shakespeare

　　inventor;

　　creative; diligent;

　　full of wisdom

　　ordinary but great woman;

　　disabled; optimistic;

　　eager to learn writer;

　　talented; imaginative;

　　man of all ages

　　“Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine perspiration.” “…if I had the power of sight for three days.” “Life is a stage…”

　　3．假设你是学校“English Club”的成员。近期俱乐部成员和英语教师要一起召开英语学习经验交流座谈会。请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己学习英语的经验，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。

　　自己学习英语的经验 1. 英语学习的目的

　　2. 英语学习的方法

　　3. 课外自学的途径

　　对学校英语教学的建议 （请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议）

　　注意：

　　1. 要包括所有要点，可适当发挥，但不要简单翻译。

　　2. 词数不少于60词。开头和结尾已经写好，不计总词数。

　　3. 文中不得提及考生姓名及所在学校。

　　Dear teachers and sehoolmates,

　　It’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.

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　　Thank you for listening.

　　4．假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：

　　1．外出购物

　　2．替房东还书

　　3．Tracy 来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消

　　2）此事已告知Susan

　　3) 尽快回电

　　注意：1. 词数100左右；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　Mrs. Wilson,

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　　Li Hua

　　5． Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

　　近年来选秀类的电视节目吸引了很多人的注意力。有的在校学生为了实现自己的明星梦辍学参加。请谈谈你对这一现象的观点。　

　　注意: 1. 题目自拟，包括以上全部要点可适当发挥，使上下文连贯。

　　2. 词数: 120词左右。

　　1．At the beginning of the term, a campaign “to be a good student and a good citizen” was launched in our school, and great changes have taken place since then.

　　Before the campaign, we used to be late for school and failed to hand in our homework in time. Often, we forgot to greet our teachers and after class we made loud noises. Worse still, we jumped the queue when waiting for buses and scrambled for seats on board.

　　However, the campaign have changed us a lot. We are no longer late for school and are more careful in our homework. We have learned to show respect for the elders, help others, wait in line for buses and give up seats to other passengers.

　　The campaign is a very good experience, from which we have learned a lot. More importantly, we have got rid of many bad habits and have become better students at school and better citizens in society.

　　【解析】 略

　　2．

　　Sample 1: Thomas Edison

　　Born in America, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. He was once thought to be a boy who was not worth educating. In fact, he was a man full of imagination.

　　I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world. He had more than 1,000 inventions. In his life time, he was always eager to know how things worked, which helped him to earn the nickname “the Wizard of Melo Park”. He was also so diligent that he worked day and night. And this explained why he had so many great inventions.

　　What impresses me most is his famous saying: “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine perspiration”. Probably I cannot be an Edison myself, but I can be a hardworking learner. From him, I realize the secret to success is not when or where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life.

　　(157 words)

　　Sample 2: Helen Keller

　　Every time I read “… if I had the power of sight for three days”, I cannot help being moved by its author Helen Keller, an ordinary but great American woman.

　　I admire Helen because she was optimistic about life. She became deaf and blind when she was 19 months old. Since then she lived in a world of darkness and silence, and communication seemed only a dream for her. But she never gave up and struggled to lead an active life. Under the guidance of her teacher, Ms Sullivan, Helen learned to read and write and became a famous writer. For a disabled person like her, this was really a wonder!

　　Helen has set an excellent example to all of us. Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.

　　(143 words)

　　Sample 3: William Shakespeare

　　Do you know Hamlet? Have you read The Merchant of Venice? These two great works are both written by William Shakespeare, my favourite English writer and the man of all ages!

　　Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world. I like him because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world; I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English language; I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life!

　　Since “Life is a stage”, we are actually all actors and actresses. On this stage, everyone has his own role to play, and I will try my best to play my role well.

　　(135 words)

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：本文属于人物传记类短文写作，属于半开放性的作文，对考生的要求较高。要求考生自行组织要点，在进行串联写作。写作时要使用合适的连接词连接起全文，同时注意按照时间顺序来组织全文，使文章更有条理。

　　3．

　　Dear teacher and schoolmates,

　　It’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you. I’m interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future. Naturally it’s very important for me to learn English well. As everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building. I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible. After class, I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio. Besides, I’ve learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.

　　Now, I’d like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. Secondly, I hope our teachers ean recommend more interesting books and magazines in English and give us more free time to read them. Finally, I suggest we have more English activities, such as games and English contests.

　　Thank you for listening.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：，，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型文章更有档次。

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　　【解析】略

　　5．

　　Attending TV Shows Does No Good to Young People

　　Nowadays TV shows are popular in China and have attracted many people. Some teenagers even give up their studies to attend these shows in the hope of becoming famous overnight. Some people think these shows provide young people more chance to show talents, while others believe that attending these shows does no good to the young people. As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion.

　　It should be admitted that some young people like Li yuchun has stood out from the numerous attendants, but that doesn’t mean attending the shows is a good way to become successful for young people. The following reasons can support my view. Firstly, some young people hunt after fame at whatever cost. Secondly, TV shows can subvert the youngsters’ values. They think attending the shows is a shortcut to the success, so they may despise the way of achieving success by hard work. Finally, if the young people fail in these shows, they will suffer a psychological unbalance.

　　In a word, entering for TV shows is not a good way for young people to make a success. I suggest young people should think twice before deciding to attend shows.

　　【解析】略