2017届高考英语一轮复习创新模拟练习：专题15 短文改错（全国通用含解析）

　　专题十五　短文改错

　　模拟精选题

　　Passage 1　(2016·山西重点中学协作体模拟)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Having a good teacher do mean a lot to us students and I am lucky enough to have the one—Miss Brown, my English teacher.

　　Miss Brown is a charming lady always worn a big smile on her face. In the first class she introduced her and then asked us to say something about ourselves with English. When it was my turn, I felt too shy and fearful that I didn?t dare to say a word. She came up to me and said, “Don?t afraid. You can make it. Just have a try.” At last, I did it quite good. She praised me for that I had done. Never shall I forgot my first English class in senior high school.

　　答案　

　　Having a good teacher

　　mean a lot to us students and I am lucky enough to have

　　one—Miss Brown, my English teacher.

　　Miss Brown is a charming lady always

　　a big smile on her face. In the first class she introduced

　　and then asked us to say something about ourselves

　　English. When it was my turn, I felt

　　shy and fearful that I didn?t dare to say a word. She came up to me and said, “Don?t

　　afraid. You can make it. Just have a try.” At last, I did it quite . She praised me for

　　I had done. Never shall I

　　my first English class in senior high school.

　　Passage 2　(2016·汉中市二次质检)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Smiling is auniversal language but can give us courage, confidence and comfort.

　　I still remember how upset I am when it was my turn to recite a poem before class.Feel nervous and shy, I forgot almost everything. I decided to give up, but all my classmates, especial my teacher kept smiling at me encouragingly. Their smile warmed me so much that I got over the difficulty and eventually made it up. I think smiling not only makes us happy but also help build up our confidence. Furthermore, they will improve the relationship between us. It is smiling that brings harmony us. Only when you smile at the world does the world smile at you. Therefore, keep smiling and show your best to the world.

　　答案　

　　Smiling is auniversal language

　　can give us courage, confidence and comfort.

　　I still remember how upset I

　　when it was my turn to recite a poem before class. nervous and shy, I forgot almost everything. I decided to give up, but all my classmates,

　　my teacher kept smiling at me encouragingly. Their

　　warmed me so much that I got over the difficulty and eventually made it

　　. I think smiling not only makes us happy but also

　　build up our confidence. Furthermore,

　　will improve the relationship between us . It is smiling that brings harmony

　　us. Only when you smile at the world

　　the world smile at you.Therefore，keep smiling and show your best to the world.

　　Passage 3　(2016·临沂一模)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　This morning I saw off my aunt at railway station.There were many passenger in the waiting room.I saw an old lady crying sad because she had lost her ticket and not able to afford another one.I was thinking about helping her when a man come up to comfort her.Then he bought her a ticket with his own money.The old Lady was so moving that she could hardly say a word.She grasped his hand and asked for his name or address.But he only smile and said，“It’s my pleasure.” Then he left away quickly.I was greatly moved by such a man he warmed others with his love.

　　答案　

　　This morning I saw off my aunt at

　　railway station.There were many

　　in the waiting room.I saw an old lady crying

　　because she had lost her ticket and

　　not able to afford another one.I was thinking about helping her when a man

　　up to comfort her.Then he bought her a ticket with his own money.The old Lady was so

　　that she could hardly say a word.She grasped his hand and asked for his name

　　address.But he only

　　and said，“It’s my pleasure.” Then he left

　　quickly.I was greatly moved by such a man

　　warmed others with his love.

　　Passage 4　(2016·株洲市质检)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在

　　删除：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Hi Lana，

　　I am 61 years old and I am fromNew Zealand. I start teaching in China last February.I decided that I reached 60 years I would like to do something different. I was lucky to have got a degree in English, that helped me find a job as a teacher in China. Now I work with two Canadian teacher. One, 57, has been here for four years, and the other, 63, have been teaching here for 6 years. He married with a lovely Chinese lady. The Chinese people are hard－working but the students are so willing to learn.

　　How an interesting country to live in!

　　I feel safer here than anywhere I lived. I have found her tips on teaching so usefully.

　　Thank you!

　　Dave

　　答案　

　　Hi Lana，

　　I am 61 years old and I am from New Zealand. I

　　teaching in China last February.I decided that

　　I reached 60 years I would like to do something different. I was lucky to have got a degree in English,

　　helped me find a job as a teacher in China. Now I work with two Canadian . One, 57, has been here for four years, and the other, 63,

　　been teaching here for 6 years. He married

　　a lovely Chinese lady. The Chinese people are hard－working

　　the students are so willing to learn.

　　an interesting country to live in!

　　I feel safer here than anywhere I lived. I have found

　　tips on teaching so .

　　Thank you!

　　Dave

　　Passage 5　(2016·宁夏六盘山二模)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Dear Joe，

　　Thanks for you mail. Im glad to know you were interested in the 2017 Florida Winter Camp. It will be held from January 27 to February 13, during that time you will get a wonderful experience. You will have chances to improve your speaking English in the courses provided. Also, activity are arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family, but you can learn American English in authentic situations. However, a trip to the local Disneyland will certain add up the fun of the camp. Join in the camp and you will have the knowledge of American culture and life. You are sure to benefit from it.

　　Yours truly，

　　Li Hua

　　答案　

　　Dear Joe，

　　Thanks for

　　mail. I’m glad to know you

　　interested in the 2017 Florida Winter Camp. It will be held from January 27 to February 13, during

　　time you will get a wonderful experience. You will have chances to improve your

　　English in the courses provided. Also,

　　are arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family,

　　you can learn American English in authentic situations. ， a trip to the local Disneyland will

　　add up the fun of the camp. Join

　　the camp and you will have

　　the knowledge of American culture and life. You are sure to benefit from it.

　　Yours truly，

　　Li Hua

　　Passage 6　(2016·漳州八校联考)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Dear Peter，

　　I am writing to ask that you are able to do me a favor.I want to have a penfriend，hopefully，a girl in her early twenties，and with interests similarly to mine.In my mind，he is someone interesting in traveling，swimming，and playing table tennis.However，it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been kept one at home for some time.With such a pen friend，I hope I can share with her our experiences in traveling，taking care pets，or whatever we have in common.I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her countries.I am looking forward to hear from you soon.

　　Best regards，

　　Li Hua

　　答案　

　　Dear Peter，

　　I am writing to ask

　　you are able to do me a favor.I want to have a penfriend，hopefully，a girl in her early twenties，and with interests

　　to mine.In my mind， is someone

　　in traveling，swimming，and playing table tennis.，it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been

　　one at home for some time.With such a penfriend，I hope I can share with her our experiences in traveling，taking care

　　pets，or whatever we have in common.I

　　I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her .I am looking forward to

　　from you soon.

　　Best regards，

　　Li Hua

　　Passage 7　(2015·潍坊3月)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多11处起)不计分。

　　Dear Jack，

　　Welcome to my school！Upon your arrival，there will be a party for you organizing by my classmates.You may attend to English classes to feel a differently learning style.After that，you can go to your host family that you can experience the Chinese way of life.You can have meals together chatting about whatever interest you.

　　The host family will also show you off some famous scenic spots.You can see people selling kites everywhere because our city was home to kites.There are varieties of kites to choose.So isn’t that a good idea to buy some for your friends？Write to me unless you have any questions about the schedule.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　答案　

　　Dear Jack，

　　Welcome to my school！Upon your arrival，there will be a party for you

　　by my classmates.You may attend

　　English classes to feel a

　　learning style.After that，you can go to your host family

　　you can experience the Chinese way of life.You can have meals together chatting about whatever

　　you.

　　The host family will also show you

　　some famous scenic spots.You can see people selling kites everywhere because our city

　　home to kites.There are varieties of kites to choose ．So isnt

　　a good idea to buy some for your friends？Write to me

　　you have any questions about the schedule.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　Passage 8　(2015·大连一模)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　In the summer holiday，we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there.Its a long and bored journey.But the moment I arrived，I fall in love with the city.Its such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue.If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind to blowing on your face.The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship.You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted.Moreover，I think the driver there drive too fast in the street.You can never be too careless when crossing the street.

　　答案　

　　In the summer holiday，we travelled to Qingdao and paid

　　visit to my uncle there.Its a long and

　　journey.But the moment I arrived，I

　　in love with the city.Its

　　beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.The streets are

　　and the sky is blue.If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind

　　blowing on your face.The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship.You may also do some fishing as

　　as it is permitted.，I think the

　　there drive too fast in the street.You can never be too

　　when crossing the street.

　　Passage 9　(2015·山东省实验中学模拟)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　As we all know，everyone have a dream.I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school.Nowadays with modern life go rapidly，many people suffer from different kind of diseases，both mentally and physically.As a result，doctors are in great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become successful doctor，helping to save peoples lives.Although to be a good doctor was very difficult，I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health.To make my dream come true，I have told me over and over again that Ill concentrate more to studies.After all，only by working hardly can one succeed.

　　答案　

　　As we all know，everyone

　　a dream.I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school.Nowadays with modern life

　　rapidly，many people suffer from different

　　of diseases，both mentally and physically.As a result，doctors are in great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become

　　successful doctor，helping to save peoples lives.Although to be a good doctor

　　very difficult，I will do whatever I can to keep everyone .To make my dream come true，I have told

　　over and over again that Ill concentrate more

　　studies.After all，only by working

　　can one succeed.

　　Passage 10　(2015·泰安期末)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Id like to give you some advices on how to learn Chinese well.

　　First，it was important to take a Chinese course，as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practising with your fellow students.Then，it also help to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible.It will make you familiar to Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!

　　Besides，it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easy.You can also make more Chinese friends，they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try to speak Chinese as many as possible.

　　答案　

　　Id like to give you some

　　on how to learn Chinese well.

　　First，it

　　important to take a Chinese course，as youll be able to learn from the teacher and

　　with your fellow students.Then，it also

　　to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible.It will make you familiar

　　Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!

　　Besides，it is a good idea

　　learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more .You can also make more Chinese friends， will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try to speak Chinese as

　　as possible.

　　Passage 11　(2017·昆明一模)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多11处起)不计分。

　　Its pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.I have found that some of my classmates study deeply into the night.What’s more，they did not spare any time to exercise during the day.But they are less energetic than the others in class and cant always stay focusing on their lessons.Worse than that，some of them seldom have breakfast，with which is also a bad habit and will certainly do harm for their health.

　　Obvious，its important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet.We must learn to make wise use of our time，and only in this way can we keep fit and study well.I hope my advices can help you.

　　Thanks for listen.

　　答案　

　　Its

　　pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.I have found that some of my classmates study

　　into the night.What’s more，they

　　not spare any time to exercise during the day. they are less energetic than the others in class and cant always stay

　　on their lessons.Worse than that，some of them seldom have breakfast，with which is also a bad habit and will certainly do harm

　　their health.

　　，its important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet.We must learn to make wise use of our time，and only in this way can we keep fit and study well.I hope my

　　can help you.

　　Thanks for .

　　创新导向题

　　Ⅰ.原创新题

　　Passage 1

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Dear teachers and schoolmates，

　　Its great honor for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.I want to learn English well to take a better job，but I learn English in some difference ways.In class，I learn new words，useful expressions and grammar and take efforts to understand the texts under the help of our English teacher.After the class，I do a lot of exercises prepare for the college entrance examination.You also read news and watch videos on the Internet and from other source.I have a lot of fun especial when learning English with cartoon movies.

　　Thanks for listening!

　　答案　

　　Dear teachers and schoolmates，

　　Its

　　great honor for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.I want to learn English well to take a better job， I learn English in some

　　ways.In class，I learn new words，useful expressions and grammar and

　　efforts to understand the texts

　　the help of our English teacher.After

　　class，I do a lot of exercises

　　for the college entrance examination. also read news and watch videos on the Internet and from other .I have a lot of fun

　　when learning English with cartoon movies.

　　Thanks for listening!

　　Passage 2

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　It seemed that everyone is studying hard for the College Entrance Examination.There are such many books to read.Nowadays，many a parent expect too much of their children.They hope their sons or daughters study hard in order to get great colleges.It is the reason what parents are strict with their children.They don’t know what they do with has become a heavy burden on their children.On my opinion，that isnt right.Instead，I think parents should create a proper learned environment for the children and allow me to play from time to time.Only in this way can the child do their best and succeed at last.

　　答案　

　　It

　　that everyone is studying hard for the College Entrance Examination.There are

　　many books to read.Nowadays，many a parent

　　too much of their children.They hope their sons or daughters study hard in order to get

　　great colleges.It is the reason

　　parents are strict with their children.They dont know what they do with has become a heavy burden on their children. my opinion，that isnt right.Instead，I think parents should create a proper

　　environment for the children and allow

　　to play from time to time.Only in this way can the

　　do their best and succeed at last.

　　Passage 3

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　The day before yesterday，my father invited to a restaurant by his good friends.At the restaurant they didn’t stop drinking until both of them were drunk.My father didn’t realize the serious of driving a car after drinking.He decided to send his friends to their home.And then he drove home.While driven home，my father felt uneasy.Before he realized that would happen，my father run into a house near the road.The police came and examined the amount of alcohol my father had drunk.It was over the normally standard.So the police fined my father.After that，my father regretted what he had done but made up his mind never to drink again before driving.

　　答案　

　　The day before yesterday，my father

　　invited to a restaurant by his good friends.At the restaurant they didn’t stop drinking until

　　of them were drunk.My father didn’t realize the

　　of driving a car after drinking.He decided to send his friends to their .And then he drove home.While

　　home，my father felt uneasy. he realized

　　would happen，my father

　　into a house near the road.The police came and examined the amount of alcohol my father had drunk.It was over the

　　standard.So the police fined my father.After that，my father regretted what he had done

　　made up his mind never to drink again before driving.

　　Ⅱ.预测导向题

　　Passage 1　(2016·沈阳二中月考)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Many young boys and girls had the habit of smoking，though they are middle school student.As we all know，smoking do harm to human beings.More and more people have realized that how serious this problem is.But they are never boring with it.Some people think smoking is a kind of fashion，and other think smoking can refresh himself.In fact，smoking causes many illnesses.The most serious illness is caused by smoking is lung cancer.Meanwhile，smoking is the waste of money.Whats worse，careless smokers may cause danger fires.

　　答案　

　　Many young boys and girls

　　the habit of smoking，though they are middle school .As we all know，smoking

　　harm to human beings.More and more people have realized

　　how serious this problem is.But they are never

　　with it.Some people think smoking is a kind of fashion，and

　　think smoking can refresh .In fact，smoking causes many illnesses.The most serious illness

　　caused by smoking is lung cancer.Meanwhile，smoking is

　　waste of money.Whats worse，careless smokers may cause

　　fires.

　　Passage 2　(2016·河北定兴中学月考)

　　假定英语课上老师要求10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　I went shopping yesterday afternoon.It is seven oclock when I was going home by bus.The

　　bus was full of passengers，all of which kept silent.A mother with her little son were sitting nearby.All of sudden，the son cried loud.The mother tried to do what she could to make him stop crying.Thus，the son went on crying.After a long time，a man sitting next of the mother said angrily，“Why dont you give the child what he wants it.” The mother answered quietly，“I would if I could，and what he wants is your hat.” Heard this，all the passenger burst into laughter.

　　答案　

　　I went shopping yesterday afternoon.It

　　seven oclock when I was going home by bus.The

　　bus was full of passengers，all of

　　kept silent.A mother with her little son

　　sitting

　　nearby.All of

　　sudden，the son cried loud.The mother tried to do what she could to make him stop crying.，the son went on crying.After a long time，a man sitting next

　　the mother said angrily，“Why dont you give the child what he wants .” The mother answered quietly，“I would if I could， what he wants is your hat.”

　　this，all the

　　burst into laughter.

　　Passage 3　(2015·青岛一模)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　The saying that practice makes perfect mean that after you have plenty of practice in what you were doing，you will be perfect in it.If you want improve your study and work，remembering that the most important thing is how to put the knowledge you have learned into practice.For example，when learning a language，though you can make full use for your talent，practice is necessary.If you only learn grammar rules by the heart and don’t do enough exercise，its certain that you can’t understand the language perfectly.But if you real practise a lot，maybe you will understand them much better.In this way，you can apply that you have learned better.

　　答案　

　　The saying that practice makes perfect

　　that after you have plenty of practice in what you

　　doing，you will be perfect in it.If you want

　　improve your study and work， that the most important thing is how to put the knowledge you have learned into practice.For example，when learning a language，though you can make full use

　　your talent，practice is necessary.If you only learn grammar rules by

　　heart and don’t do enough ，its certain that you can’t understand the language perfectly.But if you

　　practise a lot，maybe you will understand

　　much better.In this way，you can apply

　　you have learned better.

　　Passage 4　(2015·贵阳模拟)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Im very grateful for my parents.They not only gave me life，but also brought me up with endless love and support，feel so proud of my every improvements.I still remember once I was seriously ill.They were so worrying and almost kept me company the whole night.Now I’m Grade 3. Lucky for me，my parents can understand my stressful condition but often communicate with me with encouraging words.Furthermore，they give me enough personal space，which I appreciate it so much.

　　I should study hard.When I grow up，I will become an useful person and make my parents lived a happy life.

　　答案　

　　Im very grateful

　　my parents.They not only gave me life，but also brought me up with endless love and support， so proud of my every .I still remember once I was seriously ill.They were so

　　and almost kept me company the whole night.Now Im

　　Grade 3.

　　for me，my parents can understand my stressful condition

　　often communicate with me with encouraging words.Furthermore，they give me enough personal space，which I appreciate it so much.

　　I should study hard.When I grow up，I will become

　　useful person and make my parents

　　a happy life.

　　Passage 5　(2015·洛阳模拟)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　A recent survey shows that many students have got into some bad living habit，which do great harm to their health.

　　As we all know it，health is more important than wealth.Without a healthy body，you cannot do everything even if you are a millionaire.In order keep healthy，its necessary to get rid of unhealthy habits and form good ones.

　　First of all，eat a healthy breakfast is a great way to start the day.You should eat more fruit and vegetables，which are rich of vitamins.Secondly，getting enough sleep.Early to bed and early to rise make you feel great all day long.Lastly，take exercise every day to make your body strong.

　　As long as you form health habits and keep them，youll have a strong body and live the healthy life.

　　答案　

　　A recent survey shows that many students have got into some bad living ，which do great harm to their health.

　　As we all know it，health is more important than wealth.Without a healthy body，you cannot do

　　even if you are a millionaire.In order

　　keep healthy，its necessary to get rid of unhealthy habits and form good ones.

　　First of all， a healthy breakfast is a great way to start the day.You should eat more fruit and vegetables，which are rich

　　vitamins.Secondly， enough sleep.Early to bed and early to rise

　　you feel great all day long.Lastly，take exercise every day to make your body strong.

　　As long as you form

　　habits and keep them，youll have a strong body and live

　　healthy life.

　　Passage 6　(2017·宝鸡一模)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线(____)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Here are the information about Manchester University.It is about 200 miles far away from London，and it has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school or near the school.They have all sorts of course.I’m sure you will find one you like it.I know you are particular interested in Human Rights.So I will see that there is anything in their websites.I’ll send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport when you arrived.You met him a few years ago，but he has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look forward to seeing you again.

　　答案　

　　Here

　　the information about Manchester University.It is about 200 miles

　　away from London，and it has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school or near the school.They have all sorts of .Im sure you will find one you like .I know you are

　　interested in Human Rights.So I will see

　　there is anything

　　their websites.I’ll send my friend Charlie

　　meet you at the airport when you .You met him a few years ago，but he has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt

　　I look forward to seeing you again.