【金版教程】2017高考英语二轮复习训练：4-3-1 提纲作文a（含解析）

　　建议用时：35分钟

　　一、按写作步骤完成下面写作任务

　　[2015·江西九江一模]近日，你们班就“学校每天清晨开展冬季跑操活动”进行了一次讨论。请根据以下内容，给学校英文报编辑写一篇短文：

　　支持(大部分)：增强体质；磨炼意志；放松自我……

　　反对(少数)：单调；天气寒冷；学业繁重……

　　你的观点：……

　　注意：1.词数100左右(开头已写好，不计入总词数)；

　　2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　Recently our class had a heated discussion about the Winter Morning Jogging Activity in our school._________________________

　　_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　第一步：审题。

　　1．本文是________类作文

　　2．体裁是________

　　3．人称是________

　　4．时态是________

　　答案：1.提纲　2.议论文　3.第三人称　4.一般现在时

　　第二步：联想词汇。

　　1．支持：________

　　答案：in favor of

　　2．增强：________

　　答案：improve

　　3．磨炼：________

　　答案：develop

　　4．放松：________

　　答案：relax

　　5．反对：________

　　答案：be against/be opposed to

　　6．单调：________

　　答案：dull

　　7．寒冷：________

　　答案：cold/frozen

　　8．学业繁重：________

　　答案：much heavy study

　　第三步：连词成句。

　　(一)完成句子

　　1．Most students ________ this activity.

　　大多数人都支持这一活动。

　　答案：are in favor of

　　2．They believe ________ can improve physical health.

　　他们认为冬季活动能增强体质。

　　答案：the activity in winter

　　3．This can ________.

　　这能够磨炼意志。

　　答案：develop a strong will

　　4．It's a good way ________.

　　这是缓解压力的好方法。

　　答案：to relieve stress

　　5．They think ________.

　　他们认为这一活动太单调。

　　答案：the activity is too dull

　　6．There is ________.

　　他们学业繁重。

　　答案：so much heavy study

　　7．________.

　　外面天气寒冷。

　　答案：It is so cold outside

　　8．They would rather ________.

　　他们宁可在室内学习。

　　答案：stay in the classroom to study

　　(二)根据要求用以上8个句子进行句式升级

　　升级一：用not only...but also...连接2、3……

　　_______________________________________________________

　　答案：They believe that the activity can not only help improve physical health but develop a strong will.

　　升级二：在升级一与4中加上过渡词

　　_______________________________________________________

　　答案：Besides/In addition, it's a good way to relieve stress.

　　升级三：用so...that句式连接6、7、8

　　_______________________________________________________

　　答案：There is so much heavy study and it's so cold outside that they would rather stay in the classmoom to study.

　　第四步：做好衔接，连句成篇。

　　_______________________________________________________

　　One possible version：

　　Recently_our_class_had_a_heated_discussion_about_the_Winter_Morning_Jogging_Activity_in_our_school. Opinions are divided on this topic.

　　Most students are in favor of this activity. They believe that the activity in winter can not only help improve physical health but develop a strong will. Besides, it's a good way to relieve stress. On the other hand, a minority of the students are opposed to it. They think the activity is too dull. In addition, there is so much heavy study and it's so cold outside that they would rather stay in the classroom to study.

　　As far as I'm concerned, I support the activity because it benefits us greatly.

　　The modern society requires many qualities of us,

　　so bookworms can't keep up with the times any longer.

　　二、课下练笔——仿照即时演练的步骤，完成下面书面表达

　　[2015·山东青岛联考]请以“What I Consider Important in Life”为题，写一篇作文，作文必须包括以下内容：

　　1．你认为什么是生活中最重要的东西；

　　2．你为什么认为它重要。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

　　What I Consider Important in Life

　　There is no doubt that different people have different goals in their life, and they may have various answers to this question._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　One possible version：

　　What I Consider Important in Life

　　There_is_no_doubt_that_different_people_have_different_goals_in_their_life,_and_they_may_have_various_answers_to_this_question. My opinion is that the most important thing in my life is health.

　　First of all, life is short for everyone. Without good health, we won't have enough time to accomplish what we plan to do.

　　We are entering a new century, blessed with new opportunities and faced with challenges. Without a healthy body, how can we catch up with the rapidly changing world? Meanwhile, when we have got wealth and fame but without a healthy body, we will suffer from pains caused by certain illnesses all day long. So wealth means nothing in this case. Beyond any doubt, health is more important than wealth.

　　To conclude, I personally believe a healthy life is the source of happiness. So let's join hands to make our life healthier, both in body and mind.