2017届高考英语牛津译林版一轮写作能力提升课件：第19讲 如何写发言稿

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　　英语 第19讲　如何写发言稿 一、魔法导航 发言稿在近几年的高考作文中一直占有一席之地,它是一种口语化的应用 文。它要求内容完整,要点齐全,语言具有感染力、号召力。一篇完整发言稿 的写作步骤主要包括以下四步: 第一步:Introducing Yourself/Starting the Meeting/Opening Remarks We haven't met before,so I'd like to/I want to introduce myself.I'm from... 第二步:Preparing the Audience I'll start with...and then move on to...Finally,I'm going to.../I'll begin by describ- ing...then go on to...and I'll end with... 第三步:Delivering the Message I must emphasize/stress/make it clear... ——胸有成竹,出口成章 I'd like to turn to/I'd like to stress... 第四步:Winding Up Finally,I'd like to summarize the main point... 二、常用句式  开头常用语: (1)The topic of my speech is... (2)It's nice/wonderful/exciting/inspiring to speak/talk about... (3)As we all know,.../It's known to us all that... (4)Everyone desires to...and so do I. But what is the secret to... As far as I'm concerned, there are...factors.

　　(5)...suggest that...I think that...  结尾常用语: (1)To sum up/To conclude/All in all/In conclusion/In a word... (2)What I want to stress/emphasize is... (3)Personally, I think it necessary/important/valuable/useful/beneficial/vital/a good idea for sb. to... (4)As for myself, I will/must/should... (5)Dear...,let's try our best/do our best/spare no effort/do what we can to... (6)As for my suggestion, I think... (7)As..., we should be aware of the importance of...So long as... 三、典题示例  真题在线 (2017江西) 假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华,母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动,特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈 自己的体会。请根据以下提纲准备一份英语发言稿。 1.学会学习:方法、习惯等; 2.学会做人:真诚、友善等; 3.其他方面:考生自拟。 注意:1.词数120左右; 2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Good morning,everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.  

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　　 审题谋篇 体裁 发言稿 中心人称 第一人称 主体时态 一般现在时 一般过去时 要点 布局 第一段:引入话题(已给出)。 第二段:从学习方法、学习习惯等角度阐释如何学会学习。 主题句:概述未来三年面临的挑战。 扩展句1:提高学习效率(注意结合个人经历)。 扩展句2:养成良好的学习习惯,如提前预习和及时复习等。 第三段:具体说明如何学会做人。 主题句:学会和他人相处。 扩展句1:要尊重老师,关爱同学(注意结合个人经历)。 扩展句2:说明真诚的意义。 第四段:根据自身情况选择其他方面说明未来应注意的事情。 主题句:我们应该积极锻炼身体、参加课外活动等。 扩展句:说明这样做的好处。 第五段:总结上文,展望未来生活。 考场作文: Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school. Our school life in senior high school is different from what we lived in the junior middle school. In order to study well, we should form good habits such as ①preview before lessons and ②review lessons in time. What's more, we should learn some useful ways to study, like using some reference books. Besides, we should be-come ③useful person. We should be sincere and friendly. In this way, we can get along well with others and win true friendship.Of course, we should do exercise and keep ④health. If we do all the things well, we can spend a happy time in senior high school. Thank you! 文章提升: 1.修改错误: 1)such as是介词短语,故应将①和②分别改为     和    。 2)person是可数名词,useful发音以辅音音素开 头,故应在③useful前加冠词    。 3)keep作“保持”讲时是系动词,后接形容词 作表语,故应将④health改为    。 2.提升建议: 将画线部分改为倒装句:     　      阅卷现场 参考范文: Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school. In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly, we should learn to learn effi- ciently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively in- volved in class, and review what had been taught after class. In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. Not only are they helpful in building up our body, but they can also enrich our school life. No pains,no gains. I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here. Thank you!  答案 1.修改错误:1)previewing;reviewing　2)a　3)healthy

　　2.提升建议:Only in this way can we get along well with others and win true friendship. 四、高分秀场 (2015山西高三第三次四校联考) 假如你是星光中学的学生李华,将参加主题为“My Chinese Dream”的英语演 讲比赛,请撰写一篇演讲稿,主要内容包括: 1.梦想成为一名山村教师,帮助山村孩子; 2.山区偏僻,教育落后; 3.父母和朋友都反对; 4.我会…… 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.开头和结尾已为你写好。 Good morning, everyone!    

　　Thank you!  答案 One possible version: Good morning, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “My Chinese Dream”. As we know, the education of rural areas is falling behind other areas. And the children there are longing for knowledge. Therefore, the problem about the lack of teachers is especially serious. It puzzles me that parents and friends aren't in favour of my idea of being a rural teacher. And they think I am foolish. I under- stand their thoughts and feelings, but I think the children in rural areas are in great need of me. I will study hard to go to college, thus realizing my dream. I won't regret my choice. I will struggle for my dream. Come on and join me! Thank you!