江西省萍乡市莲花县2017高考英语书面表达一轮选编：1（含范文）

　　江西莲花县2017高考英语书面表达一轮选编（一）及参考范文

　　书面表达假定你是李华，因陪母亲看病，不能参加明天下午关于美国文化的讲座。请写一封 短信向老师Miss Clinton请假。

　　内容主要包括：

　　不能听讲座，跟老师表示歉意；

　　向老师陈述缺席理由；

　　询问老师是否有讲座录音或影像，以便日后补听讲座。 注意：

　　词数100左右；

　　可以适当増加细节，以使行文

　　3. 开头语已为你写好。

　　Dear Miss Clinton,Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【语篇解读】 书面表达体裁为请假条，题材贴近考生生活。

　　【命题立意】 本试卷书面表达的目的在于考查考生应用已有的语言知识完成一篇应用文（请假条）写作的综合能力。

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Miss Clinton,

　　I am very sorry that I will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon, which is on American culture.

　　My mother is ill, and I will take her to hospital tomorrow since my father is on a business trip. I will take care of my mother until she is better, so I have to ask for several days’ leave. I am very interested in the topic of American culture. It is really a pity that I miss it. I wonder if there will be any recording of the lecture. If so, I can listen to it when it is convenient.

　　Thank you very much.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【评分标准】

　　1. 本题总分为25分, 按5个档次给分。

　　2. 评分时, 先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次, 然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次, 最后给分。

　　3. 词数少于80和多于120的, 从总分中减去2分。

　　4. 评分时, 应注意的主要内容是: 内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性、上下文的连贯性。

　　5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予

　　以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

　　6. 如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

　　【内容要点】

　　1. 正确使用表示歉意的语句。

　　2. 陈述理由：母亲生病，陪她去医院看病。

　　3. 询问是否有录音，以便过后补听讲座。

　　4. 语气符合学生向老师请假的情况。

　　【各档次的给分范围和要求】

　　第五档

　　21分—25分 完全完成了试题规定的任务。

　　--覆盖了所有内容要点；

　　--应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；

　　--语法或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高词汇 所致；具备较强的语言运用能力；

　　--有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；

　　完全达到了预期的写作目的。

　　第四档

　　16分—20分 完全完成了试题规定的任务。

　　--覆盖了所有内容要点；

　　--应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求；

　　--语法结构和词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或较高词汇所致；

　　--应用了简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；

　　达到了预期的写作目的。

　　第三档

　　11分—15分 基本完成了试题规定的任务。

　　--虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容；

　　--应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求；

　　--有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解；

　　--应用了简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯；

　　整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。

　　第二档

　　6分—10分 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。

　　--漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容；

　　--语法结构单调，词汇项目有限；

　　--有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解；

　　--较少使用语句间连接成分，内容缺少连贯性；

　　信息未能清楚地传达给读者。

　　第一档

　　1分—5分 未完成试题规定的任务。

　　--明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求；

　　--语法结构单调，词汇项目有限；

　　--较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解；

　　--缺乏语句间连接成分，内容不连贯；

　　信息未能传达给读者。

　　0分 未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。

　　【广东省高三考前冲刺卷】

　　读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)

　　阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　Some years ago，leaving the farm to work in the city，three brothers were employed by the same company and on the same pay.But three years later，they received different wages.So their father was confused and decided to pay a visit to the boss，who told him that he would let his sons explain for themselves.

　　The three brothers were asked by the supervisor to go to the airport to get a cargo inventory at different times.Jim，who received 500 dollars a month，got the information on the phone instead of going to the airport himself.Frank，the 1,000 dollars a month brother with a list of more cargoes.George，the 1,500 dollars a month brother came back with detailed information and also did something extra without being told.

　　写作内容

　　1．概括该故事的内容要点，该部分的词数大约30左右。

　　2．就“态度决定一切”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点，该部分的词数大约120左右。

　　(1)你认为是什么导致三兄弟的薪酬差异；

　　(2)你从这个故事得到什么启示；

　　(3)你对“态度决定一切”如何理解；

　　(4)举一对比事例说明不同的学习态度产生不同的结果。

　　写作要求

　　你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。

　　评分标准

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

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　　读写任务【参考范文】

　　Three brothers，who worked for the same company，received different wages due to their different attitudes towards their work，which shows right attitude is of great help to one’s life.

　　Their different attitudes towards their work result in their different wages.From the story I can conclude that those who take positive attitude towards work will be rewarded.

　　Different attitudes lead to different results.Take Xiao Hua as an example.He is my classmate.Not only does he put his heart into study but he is also helpful both to teachers and students.So he has become a top student in our class，even in the grade.With his diligence and concentration，he is bound to succeed in entering his ideal university.However，Xiao Li，also my classmate，never cares about his study because he is addicted to playing games，and he turns a deaf ear to the teachers’ advice.As a result，he falls far behind others in his study.

　　In my opinion，attitude is everything.No matter what you do，you must do it well even if you may fail many times.Sooner or later you will be rewarded for your positive attitude towards your work or life.

　　2016书面表达训练

　　假如你是李明,你校教师Mr. Smith邀请你本周六上午去听关于美国历史的讲座，但你因故不能参加。请根据以下提示写一封邮件向Mr. Smith说明情况。

　　1.表示歉意； 2.说明理由：去火车站接来看你的母亲； 3.表示遗憾：对美国历史很感兴趣，遗憾错过这次机会； 4.希望得到讲座的录像(video)或课件(PPT),以便课下学习。

　　注意：1.字数100字左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.书写整洁。

　　Dear Mr. Smith,

　　__________________________________________________________________________

　　.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Mr. Smith, 

　　I’m so sorry that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on the American history this Saturday morning, because my mother will come to see me that day. We haven’t seen each other for quite a long time and I have promised to meet her at the railway station, for she is not familiar with this city.

　　As you know, I’m deeply interested in the American history, so it’s really a pity to miss the lecture. But I wonder if I could borrow the video or have a copy of the PPT. It would mean so much to me to watch the video or PPT and learn what’s covered in your lecture.

　　Best wishes to you.

　　Yours sincerely, 

　　Li Ming

　　【广东省高三考前冲刺卷基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)

　　假设你是李华，是广州白云中学的学生。请你围绕“构建和谐社会”的主题，用英语给全校学生写一封倡议书。写作内容

　　主题 构建和谐社会

　　人与社会 热爱祖国，关心家乡，积极参与学校活动

　　人与人 尊老爱幼，尊敬师长，团结同学，互相帮助，诚实守信

　　人与自然 节约能源，保护环境

　　写作要求

　　1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；

　　2．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入句子总数。

　　评分标准

　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，语篇连贯。

　　Build a Harmonious Society

　　Dear fellow students，

　　Our government is going to build a “harmonious society”．

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　　Let’s start right now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day，every hour，and every minute!

　　Li Hua

　　From Guangzhou Baiyun High School基础写作参考范文Build a Harmonious Society

　　Dear fellow students，

　　Our government is going to build a “harmonious society”．

　　I think it is everyone’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal.First of all，we should love our motherland，take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school’s activities.Secondly，we should show our respect for the old people，care for the young and help each other.Thirdly，all of us must be honest to others and always keep our word in our daily life.

　　Finally，we should work together to save energy and protect our natural environment.

　　Let’s start right now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day，every hour，and every minute!

　　Li Hua

　　From Guangzhou Baiyun High School

　　阅读理解阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C、D）中，选出最佳选项。My heart beat with that feeling, pumping it like blood to my body as my fingers flew across the piano keys. As the piece neared the end, I stood up to take my final bow. For a second, the room was quiet. Yet, even in that one second, I had enough time to doubt whether I had done everything perfectly. Then, suddenly, the applause came.

　　“Thank you… so much,” I said, turning to Olga, my piano teacher for six years. “You’ve been an amazing student all these years,” she said, “and I hope that whatever you do, you never stop practicing.”

　　I leaned forward, promising I would always keep playing because I loved piano, and hugged her.

　　It turned out to be that promises weren’t as meaningful as I’d hoped for them to be. Right after quitting, I kept up my strict practicing schedule. Soon, it began slipping away from me. After all, the reason I had stopped taking lessons was that my schedule was busy with homework. Not long after, I stopped practicing altogether. It was pleasing not to have to stress about piano anymore. But something was shifting inside of me. I was empty inside.

　　One day I met Michelle, who had also taken piano lessons from Olga for quite a while.

　　“So, are you still taking lessons from Olga?” She asked.

　　“Um, no, actually I just quit a while ago,” I replied quickly.

　　“Oh, that’s a shame,” she responded, “You used to be so good — I remember your performance a year ago; it was breathtaking.”

　　Two days after talking to Michelle, I subconsciously(潜意识地)sat down on the bench and started playing. I wasn’t even trying to make the notes sound musically correct…I was simply doing what I should have been this entire time: playing, just to be playing.

　　As the music spread, a familiar feeling rose inside me.

　　1. According to the passage, the quiet room made the writer doubt

　　.

　　A. whether she ended the music a little earlier

　　B. whether she expressed her feeling in music

　　C. whether she played the piano perfectly

　　D. whether she was polite to make a bow

　　2. Why did the writer stop practicing the piano?

　　A. She lost interest in playing the piano.

　　B. She was satisfied with her performance.

　　C. She thought Olga to be too strict with her.

　　D. She was busy with her homework.

　　3. After stopping the piano, the writer felt

　　.

　　A. she seemed to have no purpose in life

　　B. she got rid of the pressure of life

　　C. she had more time to do other activities

　　D. she changed herself into another person

　　4. Michael seemed to think

　　.

　　A. the writer could become a famous pianist

　　B. it was a pity for the writer to stop practicing

　　C. the writer should be ashamed of her decision

　　D. the performance of the writer made her heart broken

　　【语篇解读】 本文是记叙文，主要介绍了一个很有音乐天赋的女孩，放弃练习弹钢琴后的感受，以及最终重新开始弹钢琴的故事。

　　1.C【命题立意】 细节理解题。考查考生对具体信息的判断能力

　　【试题解析】 根据第一段倒数第二句话可知，因为作者演奏完之后全场寂静，因此作者怀疑自己演奏的是否完美。

　　2.D【命题立意】 推理判断题。考查考生推理判断的能力。

　　【试题解析】 根据文章第四段第四句话可知作者因忙于功课而停止了练习弹钢琴。

　　3.A【命题立意】 细节理解题。考查考生对具体信息的判断能力。

　　【试题解析】 根据第四段最后一句话可知，因为停止弹钢琴，作者感到了生活空虚，因此好像生活没有了目的。

　　4.B【命题立意】 推理判断题。考查考生推理判断的能力。

　　【试题解析】 根据文章的倒数第三段第一句话和第二句话，可知她认为作者不练习弹钢琴太可惜了，因为她弹得那么好。