2017届高考英语一轮复习《全优课堂》写作技能步步高写作层级特训：要诀4.4.满分作文登场（新人教版含答案）

　　第三部分　要诀四

　　(2017湖北)

　　请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。

　　Small things make a big difference.The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.

　　注意：

　　①无须写标题；

　　②除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；

　　④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

　　⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

　　考场作文

　　From a thing some days ago, I knew that it isn't too hard to become a responsible member of the society.

　　I can still remember ①a incident which happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon.I was on my way to the bookstore and was ②waiting the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car (1)and it drove off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid.I also joined in without hesitation.③Comparing with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.

　　As a member of the society, I realize that (2)responsibility plays a very important role in creating a better society.

　　1．错误聚焦：

　　(1)incident的首字母发元音音素，故应将①a改为______。

　　(2)wait是不及物动词，故应在②waiting后加介词____________。

　　(3)“与……相比”，属习惯用法，故将③Comparing改为______________。

　　【答案】(1)an　(2)for　(3)Compared

　　2．高分靓句：

　　(1)将画线(1)改为非谓语动词作状语的形式：________________。

　　(2)将画线(2)改为强调谓语动词形式：______________。

　　【答案】

　　(1)driving off quickly

　　(2)responsibility does play a very important role in creating a better society

　　参考范文：

　　During the last summer vocation I experienced many things but it was one small thing that was the most unforgettable.

　　On a sunny Saturday, I was taking a bus to visit my uncle.So many people were there on the bus that some persons had to stand, including an old woman.On seeing this scene, I offered my seat to her without hesitation because I thought respecting the old and helping others is a virtue in traditional Chinese culture.When seeing the smile on the woman's face, I felt very proud.

　　From this small thing I came to understand that small things make a difference to the world.Only when everyone places a high value on responsibility for the society can we create a better society to live in.

　　(2015湖南长郡中学高三第六次月考)

　　Share with others, and sadness will be greatly lessened/reduced while happiness will be doubled.

　　请根据以上的话写一篇不少于120词的英语短文，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

　　注意：

　　①无须写标题；

　　②除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；

　　④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

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　　【答案】

　　One possible version：

　　We are living in a world in which sharing is so important that we can never emphasize its importance too much.By sharing we can often greatly lessen our sadness and double our happiness.

　　When it comes to this topic, memories flood into my mind.There was a time when I was caught in the sadness of failing an important exam, my world turned grey and I lost interest in everything until my best friend came up to comfort me.Encouraged and moved by his kindness, I shared with him, which relieved me of troubles soon.Little by little, I regained confidence.The following months witnessed my efforts, and I finally made progress in another important exam.

　　As you can see, it was sharing with my friend that helped me out of the dark moment and brought back my confidence.Sharing is beautiful, not only physically but also psychologically.