2017届高考英语一轮复习《全优课堂》写作技能步步高写作层级特训：要诀4.5.满分作文登场.邀请信（新人教版含答案）

　　第三部分　要诀四

　　(2005全国卷)

　　假设你是李华，正在英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上的一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。以下是该则广告的信息。

　　注意：1.词数100左右，信的格已为你写好。

　　2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　3．参考词汇：牛津 Oxford；费用 fee

　　Dear Sir/Madame，

　　(1)I am a Chinese student and I am taking short­term English training courses in Oxford. I plan ①pay a visit to London on Sunday. I've read your advertisement and have some questions. When will I shop in the tour? Is there any special price for students? (2)Besides, I want to know the entrance fees and lunch arrangement. Is the lunch included in the ￡45?

　　And I am not clear the time to return.

　　I'll appreciate ②that if you can give more information about the day tour to London.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　1. 错误聚焦

　　(1)“计划做某事”的短语是：plan to do sth，故①pay前面应加____________。

　　(2)“如果你可以……我将不甚感激”的句型应该是：I'll appreciate it if you can…，故②that应改为____________。

　　【答案】(1)to　(2)it

　　2．高分靓句

　　(1)将画线句子(1)改为一个简单句：____________________________.

　　2)将画线句子(2)合并成一个句子：Besides, I want to the know whether the ￡45 cover________________________________________________________________________.

　　【答案】

　　(1)I, a Chinese student，am taking short­term English training courses in Oxford

　　(2)the entrance fees and lunch

　　参考范文

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　I'm writing for more information about the day tour to London. As a student at Oxford University, I'd like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed and lunch? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I'd like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　假设你是李华，你的英国网友Tom从报纸上看到了有关中国微信的报道，来信向你询问有关微信的情况，请你以李华的名义写一封回信，内容包括：

　　1．微信是一种免费应用程序；

　　2．微信的功能：聊天、分享、支付和转账；

　　3．微信给人们带来的好处。

　　微信：WeChat

　　注意：1.词数：100词左右；

　　2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

　　Dear Tom,

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　　Yours，

　　LiHua

　　【答案】

　　One possible version：

　　Dear Tom,

　　I am very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you showed interest in Chinese WeChat. WeChat is a popular free smart phone application. As long as the smart phone is connected to the Internet, people can use it to chat, post or share photos and articles. Besides, it also has the online payment function. Nowadays many services can be paid through WeChat, which brings users much more convenience. What's more, people can pay back money through WeChat Wallet or by sending others WeChat Red Packet(formerly called “Lucky Money” or “Red Envelopes ). You know, during the Chinese Spring Festival, millions of people spread the joy of giving and receiving red packets. With time going on, I believe WeChat will make our life more beautiful and convenient.

　　Yours，

　　LiHua