任务写作要求考生就某一话题发表看法,部分考生对此感到无话可说,或表达的观点过于肤浅,不够深刻。我们建议,考生要熟悉课文话题,并从中提取、积累一些表达观点的高级句式,在遇到相关写作话题时,灵活套用已积累的句子,不但能提高写作速度,也能使表达的观点更加深刻。下面以2011年广东高考英语任务写作为例,谈谈如何把从课文提炼出来的材料用来表达自己的观点。
借用课文材料表达自己观点 [2011年广东卷] 以约120个词讲述一次你(或你的朋友)想家的经历,内容包括: ⑴时间、地点和起因; ⑵想家给学习和生活带来的影响; ⑶你(或你朋友)是如何应对的。 如果考生积累了模块七第五单元(Traveling Abroad)中一篇课文(Keep it up, Xie Lei—Chinese student fitting in well)的观点和句型,这时便能派上用场了。
经典例题 课文原句:(画线部分是表达相关观点的优美句型) 1. It was the first time she had ever left her motherland. 2. Studying here is quite different from studying in China, so you need some preparation first. 3. You have to get used to a whole new way of life, which can take up all your concentration in the beginning.
4. “Sometimes I felt like a child,” she said. “I had to learn how to use the phone, how to pay bus fare, and how to ask a shopkeeper for things I didn’t know the English for. When I got lost and had to ask a passer-by for directions, I didn’t always understand. They don’t talk like they do on our listening tapes,” she said, laughing. 5. Xie Lei lives with a host family who give her lots of good advice.
6. Living with host families, in which there may be other college students, gives her the chance to learn more about the new culture.
7. When I miss my family, it’s a great comfort to have a substitute family to be with. 8. Xie Lei’s preparation course is helping her to get used to the academic requirements of a Western university.
9. I have been so occupied with work that I haven’t had time for social activities. I think it’s important to have a balance between study and a social life, so I’m going to join a few clubs. Hope
fully I’ll make some new friends. 考生只需使用本课文的相关句型并稍加改写,即可完成该篇高考作文。如: 1.时间、地点和起因。 Two years ago, I went to America to participate in a Summer Camp for a month. It was the first time I had ever left my family.
2.想家给学习和生活带来的影响。 (1) Missing my family took up all my concentration on study, in which case I performed poorly in my several exams and class activities.
(2) Feeling homesick and lonely prevented me from getting used to the academic requirements of the western courses, so I was always absent-minded in class and scolded by my teachers.
(3)Worse still, homesickness made it difficult for me to get used to the new way of life. I had to learn how to use the phone, how to pay bus fare, and when I asked a passer-by for directions, I didn’t always understand. Therefore, I felt lonely, anxious and upset. 3.你(或你朋友)是如何应对的。 (1)To fight against homesickness, I made up my mind to occupy myself with the courses and social activities, which really helped a lot.
(2)I was active in making new friends(也可改写为establishing friendship with more fellow students). When I missed my family, it was a great comfort to have many friends to share my joys and sorrows.
(3)When I felt homesick, I turned to my friends, who gave me lots of good advice and comfort.
(4)Besides, joining a few clubs (也可改写为taking part in some after-class activities) distracted me from missing my family, which also gave me the chance to learn more about the new culture.(也可改写为enriched my life experience at the same time.)
由此观之,我们建议考生备考时注意以下几点: 1.设立作文积累本。按单元话题复习课文时,不妨从课文中提取高级句型和观点进行归纳、背诵,养兵千日,用在一时。 2.在课外阅读或做阅读理解题目时,做个英语学习的有心人,提炼相关话题的句型和观点,并按话题把它们归纳到积累本中。
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