河北省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+书面表达（38）

　　河北省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：

　　短文改错+书面表达（38）

　　短文改错

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误, 在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）, 如果有错误（每行只有一个错误）, 则按下列情况改正：

　　该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词, 并也用斜线划掉。

　　该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线, 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　DI am one of your mobile newspaper user. I know your

　　1._________

　　mobile newspaper is a first English mobile newspaper

　　2._________

　　that is designed teenage readers in China. It is very

　　3._________

　　popular among teenagers. You had provided a good service for 4._________

　　teenagers. Every day, we are able to receive the late English

　　5. _________

　　news and stories from the mobile newspaper, which make

　　6. ________

　　it convenient for teenagers to learn English. However, I

　　7._________

　　wonder that you can add some new columns (栏目) we

　　8._________

　　teenagers are interested in them. We will appreciate being

　　9. _________

　　able to reading more in such columns.

　　10. _________

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Hua

　　书面表达2011年3月11日13时46分，日本本州岛附近海域发生里氏9.0级地震，强震及引发的大规模海啸己给日本带来巨大的灾难。请你给你远在日本的好友Alex写一封信表示关怀和慰问。

　　内容包括：

　　1．地震和海啸造成了人员伤亡，数万人无家可归；

　　2．表达对好友及灾区人民的关注和安慰；

　　3．鼓励他们渡过难关、重建家园。

　　注意事项：

　　1．词汇：tsunami海啸；rebuild重建

　　2．词数100左右，不包括己给出的开头和结尾；

　　Dear Alex,

　　I am awfully sorry about the severe earthquake which struck the coast of Japan on March 11th. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Please remember that I’ll always be by your side when you need any help! Take care.

　　Yours Sincerely,

　　Li Hao

　　短文改错Dear Mr. Li,

　　I am one of your mobile newspaper user. I know your

　　1. users

　　mobile newspaper is a first English mobile newspaper

　　2. the

　　that is designed∧teenage readers in China. It is very

　　3. for

　　popular among teenagers. You had provided a good service for

　　4. have

　　teenagers. Every day, we are able to receive the late English

　　5. latest

　　news and stories from the mobile newspaper, which make

　　6. makes

　　it convenient for teenagers to learn English. However, I

　　7. √

　　wonder that you can add some new columns (栏目) we

　　8. whether/if

　　teenagers are interested in them. We will appreciate being

　　9. them

　　able to reading more in such columns.

　　10. read

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Hua

　　书面表达Possible version:

　　Dear Alex,

　　I am awfully sorry about the severe earthquake which struck the coast of Japan on Marchextensive and severe damage in your country, causing the loss of lives and leaving tens of thousands of Japanese homeless.

　　Faced with such a horrible natural disaster, the Japanese people remain so calm and strong–willed that we all admire your courage and strength. Here in China people are very concerned about the present situation in your country and we are all determined to make every bit of our effort to help. I am sure that with a strong determination and the support from every corner of the world, you and you country can go through the difficulty and a better hometown will be rebuilt soon.

　　Please remember that I’ll always be by your side when you need any help! Take care.