2017届高考英语一轮复习北师大版写作专题讲座课件：第七讲 高级词汇和较复杂结构的写作与训练

　　一、使用高级词汇

　　词汇量能反映一个人知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标准。考生要想取得高分，就要强化使用复杂、高级的词汇。常用方法如下： 1．多实少虚 写作中多用specific words，少使用general words，多用蕴含感情色彩的词语，少用中性词。如good指人时可用以下形容词替换：kind, honest, generous, selfless, brave, warm­hearted, sympathetic, honorable, humorous, smart, gentle等；good指事物或事情时可用以下形容词替换：great, fantastic, splendid, marvelous, excellent, wonderful, meaningful, enjoyable, nice等。以下句子中的形容词虽然都可以用good代替，但远不如原句出彩。 I hope everyone can have a

　　time. He is a

　　teacher. This is really a

　　idea to go climbing Mount Hua this weekend. wonderful warm­hearted nice 2．短语优先 多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us. →I can no longer

　　the way he speaks to us. He

　　what I said in the class. →He

　　what I said in the class. put up with didn't listen to turned a deaf ear to 3．弃旧取新 写作中要恰当得体地使用高中学过的、较长的词汇。 We all

　　the same chance. →We all

　　the same chance (opportunity)． We have

　　homework to do at the weekend. →We have

　　homework to do at the weekend. have possess

　　a lot of endless 4．避免重复 尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。 I like reading while my brother

　　watching football matches. →I like reading while my brother

　　watching football matches. likes enjoys We've built a new experiment building beside the old one and we've also

　　a library where the old playground used to be.

　　→We've built a new experiment building beside the old one and we've also

　　a library where the old playground used to be.

　　built set up 二、使用较复杂结构

　　1．在一篇文章中要适当地改变语法结构来增加文章表达 方式的多样性。 (1)改变时态和语态 The bell is ringing now. →There goes the bell! (2)使用名词性从句 It disappointed everybody that the player was badly injured in the first round. →The fact that the player was badly injured in the first round disappointed everybody. (3)使用较高级的状语从句 I won't believe what you say.

　　→No matter what you say,

　　I won't believe.

　　(4)使用定语从句 The girl is spoken highly of.Her composition was well written. →The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.

　　(5)使用虚拟语气 You didn't take my advice, so you failed in the exam. →If you had taken my advice, you wouldn't have failed in the exam. (6)使用倒装句 Some valuable books and my credit cards are in it. →In it are some valuable books and my credit cards. (7)使用强调句型 He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. →It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. 2．改变句子开头的方式。不要一味地采用“主语—谓 语—宾语”的文法语序。可以适当地把一些成分(如状语)提前，放在句子的开头，这样使整个句子读起来跌宕起伏，增加书面表达的表现力。 We met at the school gate and went to the Hongxing Farm together early in the morning. →Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went to the Hongxing Farm together. The young man couldn't help crying when he heard the bad news. →Hearing the bad news,

　　the young man couldn't help crying. 3．通过整合的方式，把几个松散的句子用一定的连接 方式连接起来，也可以对所学的英语句式加以简化，使写出来的句子更加准确、得体、简洁、灵活。 We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess. →After a short rest,

　　we had great fun singing and dancing,

　　telling jokes and playing chess. * *