2015届高考一轮复习英语同步练习：短文改错练习（1）

　　2015高考英语：短文改错练习（1）及答案

　　D1 短文改错记叙文

　　【英语卷(解析）·2015届浙江省温州市十校联合体（温州中学等）高三上学期期初联考（201708）】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分1 0分）

　　下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不给分。

　　It can be seen, more and more people own mobile phones in China now. At the end of 2002, there were 20 millions mobile phone users. By 2005 a number reached up to 30 million. People have found mobile phones convenience. They can get in touch to each other whenever and wherever they like. There’re different functions to meeting different needs, such as surf the Internet. However, it may bring us some trouble. For an example, the radiation from the phone may do harm our health. In spite of this, the number of people having mobile phones are increasing steadily.

　　【答案】【】

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　　【】1. It→As

　　正如我们看见的，现在中国越来越多的人拥有手机。这里是非限制性定语从句，用As引导。

　　2. millions→million  到2002年底，有2千万的手机用户。数词后面加million

　　3.a→the到2005年，这个数字到了3千万。这里是特指“手机用户的数量”，a→the

　　4.convenience→convenient人们发现手机很方便，使用find +宾语+形容词：convenience→convenient

　　5. to ---with

　　get in touch with sb ,与某人取得联系。

　　6. meeting→meet有不同的功能满足不同的需求。这里是不定式做目的状语

　　7. surf→surfing such as后面接动名词： surf→surfing

　　8.去掉an For example“例如”：去掉an

　　9.our前加to手机的辐射会对我们的健康造成伤害。Do harm to“对…造成伤害”，our前加to

　　10.are→is 拥有手机的人的数量还在稳定上升。主语是the number of…，谓语是单数：are→is

　　第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　One day my uncle had been riding a horse in rain when he reached a small restaurant. Wet and coldly, and he wanted to warm himself very much. However, the restaurant was too crowded with people that he could not get near the fire. “Taking some fish to my horse!” he called out to the waiter. “Sorry, sir. But a horse didn’t eat fish!” the waiter answered. “Never mind, just do as I tell you,” my uncle said. The crowd of people felt surprising at the strange order. To see a horse eat fish, all of whom ran out. Having the whole room to himself, my uncle sat down besides the fire and began warm himself.

　　【答案】【知识点】D1 短文改错记叙文

　　【文章综述】讲述一个人骑马到了一个餐馆，又冷又湿，想一个办法让自己取暖的故事。

　　【答案解析】

　　76. rain前加the

　　考查形容词。In the rain在雨中；

　　77.coldly → cold

　　考查形容词。句意：又冷又湿，他非常想温暖一下自己。Cold形容词做伴随状语。

　　78.去掉and

　　考查句子结构。And应该连接两个句子，但wet and cold只是伴随状语，故去年掉and.

　　79. too → so

　　考查固定结构。句意：然而这个餐馆如何拥挤以至于不能靠近火源。So …that 如此以至于。

　　80. Taking → Take

　　考查祈使句。句意：给我的马一些鱼。

　　81. didn’t → doesn’t

　　考查动词的时态。句意：对不起，先生，马不会吃鱼。表示客观事实，故用一般现在时。

　　82. surprising → surprised考查形容词。句意：许多人对这个奇怪的菜单感到很吃惊。修饰人用surprised。

　　83. whom → them

　　考查代词。句意：为了看看马吃鱼，所有的人都跑出去了。Them代指的是人们。

　　84. besides → beside

　　考查介词。句意：屋子里只剩下他自己，坐在火堆旁边开始暖和。

　　85. warm前加to或warm → warming考查动词的用法。Begin to do 或begin doing 开始做某事。

　　短文改错

　　I took part in a geography research study group in last term. Our

　　76 ________

　　topic was environmental pollution and protection. We took a variety

　　77 ________

　　of pictures showed the present pollution conditions of our city. To

　　78 ________

　　our surprised, there are still a lot of people doing silly things to our

　　79 ________

　　surroundings. Some people throw the rubbish anywhere they like,

　　80 ________

　　some cars give off harmful gases, and waste water is poured in

　　81 ________

　　rivers by some factories. Worse still, people sometimes had to make

　　82 ________

　　their ways through dusty winds as a result of pollution. Through

　　83 ________

　　our research, we come to know what everybody must pay attention

　　84 ________

　　to our environment and some measures should be taken to protect.

　　85 ________

　　【参考答案】76. 去掉第二个in.

　　77. 正确.

　　78. showed—showing 或showed---which showed.

　　79. surprised—surprise.

　　80. 去掉the

　　81. in---into

　　82. had---have.

　　83. ways—way

　　84. what—that或去掉what. 85. protect后加it.

　　There is a teacher who I can never forget her in my life. That

　　76.________

　　was in my old days whenever I was in the middle school and I

　　77.________

　　once had lots of teachers who were very strict to us except

　　78.________

　　one female who was young, pretty as well kind-hearted.

　　79.________

　　It is very hard of me to describe what she was like, but she had

　　80.________

　　her own personality that quickly conquered us all. She asked

　　81.________

　　us to elect our monitor. She let us to decide where to go for

　　82.________

　　an outing. She didn’t get angry even if any of them was late for

　　83.________

　　school. It was not long until most of us behaved very well

　　84.________

　　because we did find her an elderly sister who we can rely on.

　　85.________

　　【参考答案】76. 去掉her

　　77.

　　whenever → when

　　78. to

　　→

　　with

　　79. well ∧ as

　　80. of → for

　　81.

　　√

　　82. 去掉第二个 to

　　83. them → us

　　84. until → before

　　85.

　　can →

　　could

　　第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）

　　I am worker at the tap water company. I find that

　　76.____________

　　people were becoming more and more careful about

　　77._____________

　　health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear

　　78.____________

　　and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again.

　　79.____________

　　Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the

　　80.____________

　　protection of water resources .For the sake of our

　　81.____________

　　health ,we should take good care our water resources

　　82.____________

　　and environment .There is a saying “whether we do

　　83.____________

　　not careful protect our environment the last drops

　　84.____________

　　of water we will see them will be our own tears.”

　　85.____________

　　【参考答案】

　　I am ∧worker at the tap water company. I find that

　　76.______a ______

　　people were becoming more and more careful about

　　77.______are____

　　health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear

　　78.____appears_

　　and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again.

　　79._____or_____

　　Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the

　　80.__Unfortunately_

　　protection of water resources .For the sake of our

　　81.___ √_____

　　health ,we should take good care∧ our water resources

　　82.______of___

　　and environment .There is a saying “whether we do

　　83.____if_____

　　not careful protect our environment the last drops

　　84.___careful___

　　of water we will see them will be our own tears.”

　　85. them

　　短文改错

　　As students, we have classes from early morning

　　till late afternoon. Therefore, take a ten-minute break

　　76. _____

　　between class is definitely important, even necessary.

　　77. _____

　　Otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired.

　　78. ______

　　During the ten-minute break we did something to get

　　79. ______

　　rid of tiredness. What we need is to have real rest,

　　80. ______

　　instead of getting even tired. So don’t do anything that

　　81. _______

　　will make you too excited. My ten-minute break is always pleased.

　　82. ______

　　I usually do some simple exercises. Sometime I have a free chat

　　83. ______

　　with my classmates or just take a walk during the break.

　　84. ______

　　When the new class begins, I feel freshly again.

　　85. ______

　　【参考答案】

　　take---taking.

　　77.class—classes.

　　78.or—and.

　　79. did—do.

　　80. real---a real

　　81. tired—more tired.

　　82. pleased—pleasing.

　　83. Sometime—Sometimes.

　　84. 正确。

　　85. freshly---fresh.

　　【短文改错】

　　Dear Anish,

　　Here are the information about Manchester University 1.______

　　It is about 200 miles far away from London and it 2______

　　has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school 3____

　　or near the school.They have all sorts of course.4___ ___

　　I`m sure you will find one you like it.I know you 5___

　　are particular interested in human rights.So I will 6____

　　see that there is anything on their website 7____

　　I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport 8____

　　when you arrived.You met him a few years ago, but he 9___

　　has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look 10___

　　forward to seeing you again.

　　【参考答案】KEY 6

　　Dear Anish,

　　Here are the information about Manchester University.___is___

　　It is about 200 miles far away from London and it ___far___

　　has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school__right__

　　or near the school.They have all sorts of course.___courses___

　　I`m sure you will find one you like it.I know you __it__

　　are particular interested in human rights.So I will ___particularly__

　　see that there is anything on their website ___if/whether__

　　I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport _to___

　　when you arrived.You met him a few years ago, but he __arrive_

　　has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look __and_

　　forward to seeing you again.