2016届高考英语二轮复习课件：书面表达七 3

　　· 英语 路漫漫其修远兮 吾将上下而求索 高考二轮总复习 第一部分 微专题强化练 七　书面表达 第一部分 3　(半)开放式作文 考 向 分 析 考 题 引 路 强 化 训 练 2 3 1 易 错 防 范 4 考 向 分 析 年份 体裁 话题 命题形式 命题趋势 2015湖北 夹叙夹议文 质疑促进学习 半开放 命题角度从考生日常的生活学习逐渐转变到思想层面。要求更高，形式更灵活。 2015浙江 议论文 与同学有不同 观点时选择 半开放 考 题 引 路 Writing 1 (2017·福建) 如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。 “Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.” —Sir Winston，Churchill 内容要求： 1．你对该引语的理解； 2．你的相关经历； 3．恰当的结尾。 注意： 1．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2．文中不能出现考生的具体信息； 3．词数：120左右。 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that_________ __________________________________________________ 立意与点拨： 项目 内容 “三定” 体裁：议论文　时态：一般现在时和一般过去时(讲述个人经历)　人称：第一人称 确定结构 三段论：阐释名言→事例论证→得出结论 确定要点 ①名言含义：面对失败，我们不应该泄气，而是应该鼓足勇气，充满热情地继续坚持下去 ②个人经历：学习骑自行车的例子 ③名言启迪：如果我们不尝试，我们就不可能成功，最重要的是学会坚持 答案： This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures.Rather，we should keep trying with enthusiasm.Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures. At the age of twelve，I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it.However，it was harder than expected.The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still，I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice，I did better and better.Looking back，I feel had I lost heart I wouldn't be able to ride a bike. Actually，we can't succeed in everything we try.What's important is that we should stick at it. Writing 2 (2015·浙江) 在班级活动中，当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时，你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人，还是尊重大多数同学的意见？请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题，用英语写一篇100～120个词的短文。要求如下： 1．从以上两种做法中选择一种； 2．以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。 注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则，按考试作弊行为认定。 When I Have a Different Opinion __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ 立意与点拨： 项目 内容 “三定” 体裁：议论文　时态：一般现在时和一般过去时(讲述个人经历)　人称：第一人称 确定结构 三段论：作出选择→举例证明→重申选择 确定要点 ①选择一种作法 ②对应个人经历 ③重申选择 答案： One possible student version： When I Have a Different Opinion

　　We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea，I would choose to stick to it. By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.

　　Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day. Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.

　　An alternative student version： When I Have a Different Opinion

　　We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.

　　The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism, I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more. 强 化 训 练 （点此链接） 易 错 防 范 审题急促，主次不分 根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。 (1)眼睛是心灵的窗口。 (2)学会如何保护眼睛。 __________________________________________________ 易错分析：学生由于急于答题，所以往往审题不认真，极易把写作重点放在眼睛的重要性上。 答案： People often say, “Eyes are the windows of soul”. All of us understand the importance of the eyes. But how to protect eyesight still remains a question among us students. If you want to take care of your eyesight, you must pay attention to the following points. Firstly, you should not use your eyes continuously for long periods. After you have read for a long time, about two hours or so, you take a rest by looking atsomething more distant. Secondly, you should keep your book about a foot away from your eyes when you read it.

　　You should also keep in mind: “Don't read in a dim light or in the sun; don't read in a moving bus or in bed.” Doing eye exercises regularly will help you keep good eyesight. If you fail to keep these rules, you will become short­sighted sooner or later. 解析：从题目的要求看，本篇作文要求写成说明文。重点要放在如何保护眼睛上。例如：不要看书时间太长，眼睛与书的距离要适当，走路坐车时不要看书，要常做眼保健操等。如何保护眼睛这个问题比较好写，因为考生有这方面的知识和体验。开放式作文的答题思路与汉语作文非常相像。首先要明确主题，然后根据主题搭建文章的主体结构，即写作提纲，接着进行文章血肉的填充。在拟写作提纲时，要突出主题，有层次，先写什么，后写什么，要层次分明。