2016届广东省高考英语二轮原创复习课件：写作基础

　　第四招：运用主从复合句

　　要使文章漂亮，在写作中不可能不使用主从复合句，从句有状语从句、名词性从句和定语从句。 【典型例句】用主从复合句合并下列各组句子。 1.(1) China is the third largest country in the world.

　　(2) Everyone knows it.

　　用定语从句合并：As everyone knows， China is the third largest country in the world. 2. (1) It was raining hard.

　　(2) We kept on working.

　　用状语从句合并：Although it was raining hard， we kept on working. 【课堂练习】用主从复合句合并每一组句子，然后将这5组句子合并成一篇5句话的短文。 1. I live in a small town. It is about 20 kilometers away from the city.

　　2. In the past，we planted many trees here. Now，no trees can be seen except heavy smoke and dark rivers. 3. Since ten years ago， many factories have been built. Heavy smoke and waste water from the factories are let into the sky and the rivers without anything done to them.

　　4. Some more factories are going to be set up. People told me that.

　　5. The government should take measures to stop the town from being further polluted. This is my opinion.

　　I live in a small town which is about 20 kilometers away from the city. Although we planted many trees here,

　　no trees can be seen now except heavy smoke and dark rivers. The reason is that since ten years ago,

　　many factories have been built,

　　from where heavy smoke and waste water are let into the sky and the rivers without anything done to them. It is said that some more factories will be set up here. I think the government should take measures to stop the town from

　　being further polluted. 【课外作业】 用主从复合句合并每一组句子，然后将这5组句子合并成一篇5句话的短文。 1. The drought is likely to continue till May and no substantial rainfall is expected ahead of the rainy season. The drought started from last autumn.

　　2. It has left 18 million residents and 11.7 million heads of livestock in the region with water shortages and caused direct economic loss of 23.7 billion yuan. Experts estimate. 3. The government would organize more than

　　1，100 engineers and workers from across the country to dig wells in the country’s southwest. It is reported.

　　4. More than 1, 600 wells will be drilled. They will provide 200,

　　000 cubic meters of drinking water per day for 2 million people and 1 million heads of livestock.

　　5. 1, 400 of the wells are expected to

　　finish digging by May 10. One of the engineers told me.

　　The drought，which started from last autumn，is likely to continue till May and no substantial rainfall is expected ahead of the rainy season. Experts estimate that it has left 18 million residents and 11.7 million heads of livestock in the region with water shortages and caused direct economic loss of 23.7 billion yuan.

　　It is reported that the government would organize more than 1,

　　100 engineers and workers from across the country to dig wells in the country’s southwest. More than 1, 600 wells will be drilled，which will provide

　　200,

　　000 cubic meters of drinking water per day for 2 million people and 1 million heads of livestock. One of the engineers told me that 1, 400 of the wells are expected

　　to be finished digging by May 10. * * * * * * * * * * *

　　信息整合四招

　　第一招：使用介词短语

　　高考作文，特别是基础写作，提供的信息点多，但句数有限，熟练掌握以下四种整合信息的方法非常重要。 合并句子我们可以用：(1)介词短语作定语。(2)介词短语作状语。 【典型例题】用介词短语将下列句子合并成 一句。 (1) Waste water is making the river worse and worse.

　　(2) The waste water is from a factory. (3) The factory lies on the river. 合并：Waste water from the factory on the river is making the river worse and worse. (定语) 【课堂练习】根据括号中的提示合并每一组句子，然后将这5组句子合并成一篇5句话的短文。 1.Xiaxi Town is not big but beautiful. It has an area of about 8 square kilometers. (介词短语)

　　2.There is an old tower there. The tower

　　lies in the east of the town. There is a river behind the tower. (介词短语位于句首的完全倒装句；定语从句)

　　3.The sun rising from the river was very beautiful. Yesterday we took a bus there to visit the tower. (并列句)

　　4.We started early. We wanted to enjoy the sunrise on the top of

　　the tower. (介词短语)

　　5.As soon as

　　we got there，we began to take photos. (介词短语) Xiaxi Town,

　　with an area of about 8 square kilometers,

　　is not big but beautiful.

　　In the east of the town lies an old tower,

　　behind which there is a river. The sun rising from the river was very beautiful,

　　and we took a bus there to visit the tower yesterday.

　　We started early for the purpose of enjoying the sunrise on the top of the tower. On arriving there, we began to take photos. 【课外作业】 用介词短语合并每一组句子，然后将这5组句子合并成一篇5句话的短文。 1. A professor gave us a talk this morning. He came from Beijing University. He talked about how to learn English well.

　　2. He told us his own interesting experiences of learning English. We laughed a lot. 3. His talk lasted an hour. He asked us some questions.

　　4. His talk was vivid and instructive. I learned a lot from his talk.

　　5. I went back home. I decided to work hard at English.

　　A professor from Beijing University gave us a talk on how to learn English well this morning.

　　On hearing his own interesting experiences of learning English,

　　we laughed a lot. During the one-hour

　　talk,

　　he asked us some questions. I learned a lot from his vivid and instructive talk.

　　On my way back home, I decided to work hard at English. 第二招：使用非谓语动词

　　在写作中，正确使用非谓语动词，无疑为文章增色不少。非谓语动词包括不定式 (未来)、现在分词 (主动) 和过去分词 (被动)。 【典型例题】用非谓语动词将以下各组句子分别合成一句话。 1.(1) He looked up.

　　(2) He saw a bird in the tree.

　　用不定式合并：He looked up to see a bird in the tree. 2.(1) I don’t like the man.

　　(2) The man is wearing a pair of dark glasses.

　　用现在分词合并：I don’t like the man wearing a pair of dark glasses. 3.(1) The temple is visited by thousands of people every year.

　　(2) It was built 1, 000 years ago.

　　用过去分词合并：The temple，built 1, 000 years ago，is visited by thousands of people every year. 【课堂练习】用非谓语动词合并每一组句子，然后将这5组句子合并成一篇5句话的短文。 1. I’m writing to you. I want to express my sincere thanks to Good Man.

　　2. Yesterday morning I was knocked down by a car. I was walking on the road at that time. 3. I was seriously injured. I couldn’t stand up.

　　4. A man saw what had happened to me. He stopped a taxi and sent me to a hospital.

　　5. I don’t know his name. I call him Good Man.

　　I’m writing to you to express my sincere thanks to Good Man. Yesterday morning I was knocked down by a car while walking on the road. Seriously injured，I couldn’t stand up. Luckily，a man stopped a taxi and sent me to a hospital when seeing what had happened to me. Not knowing his name， I call him Good Man. 【课外作业】 用非谓语动词合并每一组句子，然后将这5组句子合并成一篇5句话的短文。 1. On the morning of last Sunday，I went to the park. I wanted to take a walk there.

　　2. After one hour’s walk， I got tired and sat down on a stone by the road. I wanted to have a rest. 3. Suddenly I saw an ant. She was trying hard to move another ant who was dead.

　　4. She failed many times. She managed to carry him away.

　　5. I saw that little creatures also have sincere love as human beings. I was greatly moved.

　　On the morning of last Sunday，I went to the park to take a walk. After one hour’s walk， I got tired and sat down on a stone by the road to have a rest. Suddenly I saw an ant trying hard to move another ant who was dead. Having failed many times， she managed to carry him away. Seeing that little creatures also have sincere love as human beings， I was greatly moved. 第三招：使用并列连词

　　在写作中，我们运用并列连词合并句子是最常用的手段。常用的并列连词有and， but， or，

　　nor， so， yet，

　　for， as well as， both…and，not…but， not only…but (also)， either…or， neither…nor，(and) then， since等。 【典型例句】用并列连词合并下列各组句子。 1.(1) He is a friend in word.

　　(2) He is a friend in deed， too.

　　用as well as合并：He is a friend in word as well as in deed. 2.(1) I know her.

　　(2) I am her best friend.

　　用not only…but also合并：Not only do I know her， but (also) I am her best friend. 【课堂练习】用并列连词合并每一组句子，然后将这5组句子合并成一篇5句话的短文。 John wanted to settle down. His wife also wanted to settle down.

　　2. He got a job as a manager in New York City. He was looking for a house to live in. 3. He found a house not far from his office. The house was not far from his children’s school.

　　4. The house was not big. The house had a beautiful garden.

　　5. His wife liked their new home. His children also like their new home very much.

　　John, as well as his wife, wanted to settle down. He got a job as a manager in New York City and he was looking for a house to live in. He found a house neither far from his office nor far from his children’s school. The house was not big, but had a beautiful garden. Not only his wife but also his children liked their new home very much. 【课外作业】用并列连词合并每一组句子，然后将这5组句子合并成一篇5句话的短文。 1. Today，two of my friends went fishing by bike. I also went fishing by bike.

　　2. We started off at 8: 00. We got to Longwang Lake at 8: 30. 3. It was a little hot. The fish didn’t seem to have a good appetite. I only got 10 fish during the day.

　　4. We had lunch in a little restaurant by the lake. We returned home at 5：30 p.m.

　　5. I was very tired.

　　Two of my friends and I went fishing by bike today. We started off at 8:00 and got to Longwang Lake at 8:30. I only got 10 fish during the day，for it was a little hot and the fish didn’t seem to have a good appetite. We had lunch in a little restaurant by the lake and returned home at 5:30 p.m. I was tired，but I felt happy.

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