2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错1

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

　　1.短文改错

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　One day I happened to find a chatting room on

　　76．

　　my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried

　　77．

　　to chat with some of them . To my surprised, I found

　　78．

　　the oral English of some junior students were better

　　79．

　　than me . I asked them for advice and they told me

　　80．

　　to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I

　　81．

　　would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. 82．

　　Day by day I learned from many useful words and

　　83．

　　expressions . With time went by , I found that I could

　　84．

　　even communicate some college students freely . 85．

　　2.

　　下文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除: 把多余的词用斜线〔〕划掉。

　　修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Most students feel like nervous before taking an important exam. Some feel dizzy or tiring, some lose their appetites for food and other even suffer from sleep problems. All the symptoms have terrible effects in their exams. How can they get rid of these bad symptoms? Personal, it’s important to make a careful plan in advance to review what they have learned, what will help them reduce the pressure. Besides, they should arrange their time properly. They shouldn’t stay too late because only enough sleep makes them energetic and enable them to perform well in an exam. What’s more, a balanced diet can contribute to their perform in exams. They are supposed to eating nutritious food such as eggs, milk, meat, carrots, walnuts, etc.

　　3.短文改错

　　I was real sad when I found my bicycle went wrong again. Tired of repairing it again and again,

　　I decided buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a

　　friend called Jack. The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. It looked

　　so cool that I could hardly wait to ride it. The shopkeepers told us that it was the latest bicycle.

　　He wanted to charge me for 800 yuan, that was too high for me. I just couldn’ t afford such

　　an expensive one. Then I choose another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not perfect,

　　so it was much better than the old one.

　　4.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作 文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的 增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线〔〕划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Last Saturday, our school had organized all of the Senior 1 students to visit

　　the children at a local orphanage. We took many books that was popular among

　　children, as well as many kinds of school supplies and toys, to children.

　　They were delighted to receive these gift. We played some games together and give

　　performances. Before leave the orphanage we took photos with them and gave

　　them our contact details but we could keep in touch with one another.

　　That day, each one of us had an enjoyable time. We gave the children their

　　care and help; for return ，they gave us their smiles and love. These voluntary

　　activities made a deeply impression on us.

　　5.下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Boys and girls,

　　May I have your attention, please? I have anything important to tell you. Next Sunday afternoon, class was going to hold an English story-telling competition in lecture hall. Everybody is required to take part in the activity. Two foreign teacher will be invited to act as judges. The activity will benefit from you in many ways. For example, it will give us a good chance to practicing your oral English and train your communication skills. However, it will inspire your interest at English. The requirements are as follows. First, the story can be original. That is, the story must be made up by yourself. Second, the story must be presented in English. Finally, your story should be finished within three minutes. That’s all, thank you.

　　6.短文改错

　　Li Hua,

　　I feel great honored to be trusted with your personal affairs. Here is some advices for you:

　　First of all, you should talk to your parents or let them know where your interest is. If they know what you really want to do in the future, they are possible to change their mind. Secondly, don't worry too many about them because too much anxiety may affect your studies. Besides, you can talk to your teachers and your best friends such that they can help you to persuade your parents.

　　Personally, what you want to major in and what profession you would like to enter in depend on your own interest because they were part of your life. I hope you can follow my own interest and realize your dream in end.

　　Yours,

　　Wang Lei

　　试卷答案

　　1.76．√

　　77. there→where

　　78. surprised→surprise

　　79. were→was 80. me→mine 81. But→So/And

　　82. practise—practising

　　83. 删除from”

　　84. As→With or went→going

　　85. communicatewith

　　2.

　　Most students feel like nervous before taking an important exam. Some feel

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　　dizzy or tiring, some lose their appetites for food and other even suffer from sleep

　　tired

　　others

　　problems. All the symptoms have terrible effects in their exams. How can they

　　on

　　get rid of these bad symptoms? Personal, it’s important to make a careful plan

　　Personally

　　in advance to review what they have learned, what will help them reduce the

　　which

　　pressure. Besides, they should arrange their time properly. They shouldn’t stay∧

　　up

　　too late because only enough sleep makes them energetic and enable them to

　　enables

　　perform well in an exam. What’s more, a balanced diet can contribute to their

　　perform in exams. They are supposed to eating nutritious food such as eggs,

　　performance

　　eat

　　milk, meat, carrots, walnuts, etc.

　　3.

　　I was real sad when I found my bicycle went wrong again. Tired of repairing it again and again,

　　really

　　I decided ∧ buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a

　　to

　　located

　　friend called Jack. The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. It looked

　　A

　　so cool that I could hardly wait to ride it. The shopkeepers told us that it was the latest bicycle.

　　shopkeeper

　　He wanted to charge me for 800 yuan, that was too high for me. I just couldn’ t afford such

　　which

　　an expensive one. Then I choose another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not perfect,

　　chose

　　me

　　so it was much better than the old one.

　　but

　　4.

　　Last Saturday, our school had organized all of the Senior 1 students to visit

　　the children at a local orphanage. We took many books that was popular among

　　were

　　children, as well as many kinds of school supplies and toys, to ∧ children. They

　　the

　　were delighted to receive these gift. We played some games together and gave

　　gifts

　　give

　　performances. Before leave the orphanage we took photos with them and gave

　　leaving

　　them our contact details but we could keep in touch with one another.

　　so

　　That day, each one of us had an enjoyable time. We gave the children their

　　our

　　care and help; for return, they gave us their smiles and love. These voluntary

　　in

　　activities made a deeply impression on us.

　　deep

　　5.

　　Boys and girls,

　　May I have your attention, please? I have anything important to tell you. Next Sunday

　　something

　　afternoon, our class was going to hold an English story-telling competition in∧ lecture hall.

　　is

　　the

　　Everybody is required to take part in the activity. Two foreign teacher will be invited to act as

　　teachers

　　judges. The activity will benefit from you in many ways. For example, it will give us a good

　　you

　　chance to practicing your oral English and train your communication skills. However, it will

　　practice

　　Besides

　　inspire your interest at English. The requirements are as follows. First, the story can be original.

　　in

　　must

　　That is, the story must be made up by yourself. Second, the story must be presented in English.

　　Third, the story should be interesting. Finally, your story should be finished within three minutes.

　　That’s all. Thank you.

　　6.1. great —> greatly;

　　2. advices —> advice;

　　3. or —> and;

　　4. possible —> likely;

　　5.many —> much

　　6. such —> so;

　　7. in去掉; 8. were —> are;

　　9. my —> your;

　　10. in the end