2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错37

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

　　1.

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There was

　　76.

　　a time that I swam like a rock. This went on until one day

　　77.

　　when I was fishing with a friend at pond,

　　78.

　　I fall into it. If my friend had not come to my rescue,

　　79.

　　I would have died. Ever since then, I have come

　　80.

　　to know the important of learning to swim. I haven’t

　　81.

　　attended in any training class but learned it on my own.

　　82.

　　Now I have no difficulty swim at all. Though my

　　83.

　　self-invented styles looks awkward(笨拙的), at least they

　　84.

　　can keep us floating. Thinking of this, I am very satisfied.

　　85.

　　2.

　　此题要求改正所给句子中的错误，对每一行做出判断，如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（ √ ）；如有错误（每句只有一处错误），请按下列情况改正：

　　此句多一个词,把多余的词用斜线( ＼ )划掉; 然后在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉;

　　此句缺一个词, 在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ), 然后在句子后面的横线上写出该加的词;此句错一个词, 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该行句子后面的横线上写出改正后的词.

　　Dalian, a city by sea, is quite beautiful and the air

　　76._____

　　there is so good to breathe. It is easy to go here by

　　77. _____

　　train. Beside, you can take a bus or plane as well.

　　78. _____

　　Together with my parents, I went to Dalian for a trip in

　　79. _____

　　last month. We visited many interesting place, having

　　80. _____

　　lots of fun. Dalian is such wonderful a city that even many

　　81. _____

　　foreigners go and work there. I met some foreigners

　　82. _____

　　there and talk with them. Most of them said they

　　83. _____

　　enjoyed our stay in Dalian. After staying there for ten days

　　84. _____

　　we returned home, tired and happy.

　　85. _____

　　3.下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。

　　I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.

　　4.短文改错

　　One day a child was playing with a vase in great value. He careless put his hand into it. Hard as he tried, he could not pull it out. His father tried his best, too, but their efforts were in a vain. They were thinking of breaking the vase whenever the father said,“now , my son, why have one more try? open your hand or hold your fingers straight as you saw I doing, and then pull.”to his surprise, the child says, “I can’t hold my fingers straight like that, because I don’t want to drop my penny.” Thousand of us sometimes are so busy hold on to the world’s worthless penny that we cannot achieve liberation.

　　5.

　　文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　John's goal in life was become a successfully doctor. He knew he had to finish high school at first，so he put his heart into his studies——in particular，biology，chemistry，and maths . Because he worked hardly at these subjects，John became good at it. However，John forgot that he needed to master some other subjects beside those he had been chosen. As a result，John fails both English and Latin in the end of the second school year. But he had to review these subjects and he was almost able to graduate like planned. John learned a good lesson.

　　6.下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way.

　　Within five minute, the old man began to move a little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.

　　试卷答案

　　1.76. extreme 改为extremely

　　77. that改为when

　　78. at之后加a

　　79. fall改为fell

　　80. 正确

　　81. important 改为importance

　　82. 去掉in

　　83. swim改为swimming

　　84. looks改为look

　　85. us改为me

　　2.76.by the ^sea

　　77.here—there

　　78. Beside—Besides

　　79.去掉in

　　80.place---places

　　81.such—so

　　82. V

　　83.talk—talked

　　84. our—their

　　85.and—but

　　3.cousin – cousin’s

　　rich – richer

　　on --- in

　　put ---put it/that

　　enjoy to --- enjoy

　　Faced --- face

　　Late --- Later

　　slow --- slowly

　　knows --- knew

　　ever --- never

　　4.1.第一句：in→of

　　2.第二句：careless→carelessly

　　3.第四句：去掉a

　　4.第五句：whenever→when

　　5.第五句：why与 have之间加 not

　　6.第六句：or→and

　　7. 第六句：I→me

　　8.第七句：says→said

　　9.第八句：thousand→thousands

　　10.第九句：hold→holding

　　5.

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　　that he needed to master some other subjects beside those he had been chosen. As a result，besides

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　　these subjects and he was almost able to graduate like planned. John learned a good lesson.

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　　6.

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　　He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man

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　　to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him

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　　where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to

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　　call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the

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　　mouth-to-mouth way.

　　Within five minute, the old man began to move a little and doctors also arrived. They said

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