2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错47

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

　　1.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she

　　dislikes me. He doesn’t want to my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me

　　because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem

　　is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?

　　Please give me some advices.

　　Yours,

　　Mary

　　2.

　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　1. 请按标准格式改错，每处错误及其修改均限一词。

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Though great progress has made in science these years, there

　　are still many people lived in poor conditions. They make their living

　　by collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to school

　　because they have no enough money to send their children to there.

　　Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?

　　The answer lies on the population explosion. A president of a developing

　　country once said: “It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to

　　produce child without limit.” Although these few words sound simple enough,

　　but they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.

　　3.

　　短文改错

　　We are all busy talk about and using the Internet

　　76. ________

　　which set up in the 1960s. At first, the Internet was

　　77. ________

　　only used by the government, but in early 1970s,

　　78. ________

　　the universities, hospitals and banks were allowed to

　　79. ________

　　use it, too. Otherwise, computers were still very expensive

　　80. ________

　　and the Internet was difficult to use it. By the

　　81. ________

　　start of the 1990s, computers become cheaper and easier.

　　82. ________

　　Today it is easily to get on-line and it is said

　　83. ________

　　that millions of people use the Internet every day.

　　84. ________

　　Send e-mail is more and more popular among students.

　　85. ________

　　It has now become one of the most important parts of people’s life.

　　4.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.

　　Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested. It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best.

　　5.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for

　　everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she

　　dislikes me. He doesn’t want to my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me

　　because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem

　　is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?

　　Please give me some advices.

　　Yours,

　　Mary

　　6.

　　文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

　　注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.

　　试卷答案

　　1.

　　Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for riends

　　with

　　everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she

　　dislikes me. He doesn’t want to∧my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me

　　disliked

　　She

　　be

　　because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem

　　friendly

　　is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?

　　Or

　　Please give me some advices.

　　advice

　　Yours,

　　Mary

　　2.

　　Though great progress has∧ made in science these years, there

　　been

　　are still many people lived in poor conditions. They make their living

　　living

　　by collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to school

　　things

　　because they have not enough money to send their children to there.

　　Why∧ you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?

　　do

　　The answer lies on the population explosion. A president of a developing

　　in

　　country once said: “It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to

　　we

　　produce child without limit.” Although these few words sound simple enough,

　　children

　　but they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.

　　clearly

　　3.

　　76. talk---talking

　　77. set 前加was

　　78. early 后加the

　　79. 去掉the

　　80. Otherwise ---However

　　81. 去掉it

　　82. become 前加had

　　83. easily---easy

　　84. 85. send 改为sending

　　4.

　　Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.

　　students

　　Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors

　　or

　　first so that they can learn what they are interested∧. It will also make it possibly for them to take

　　in

　　possible

　　their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the

　　believe

　　environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from

　　graduating或加who

　　leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to

　　choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a

　　cannot或can’t或后加not

　　good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if

　　we

　　a

　　5.

　　Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she

　　dislikes me. He doesn’t want to ∧my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me

　　disliked

　　She

　　be

　　because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem

　　friendly

　　is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?

　　Or

　　Please give me some advices.

　　advice

　　Yours,

　　Mary

　　6.

　　I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after

　　with

　　school. She holds∧view that senior three students have to make fully use of

　　the

　　full

　　every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am

　　her

　　allowed to do that, I’ll∧ unable to control myself and forget all about my

　　be

　　study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas.

　　eyes

　　In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works.

　　watching

　　work

　　Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at

　　has

　　删除at

　　abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.