2016届江西浮梁县高考英语二轮复习短文改错演练（6）

　　江西浮梁县2016高考英语短文改错【二轮】演练（6）

　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。

　　Today I was having a PE lessons when I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at

　　that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had

　　difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help

　　of my classmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know I’m wrong. We

　　can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in

　　return. In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.

　　【参考答案】2.

　　Today I was having a PE lessons when I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that

　　lesson

　　great

　　moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had

　　had

　　difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help

　　walking

　　and

　　of my classmates. As∧ result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know I’m wrong. We

　　a

　　worse

　　can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in

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　　return. In this way,

　　we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.

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　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Christine was just a girl in one of my classes. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange. She didn’t talk many. Her hair was black and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater, although in the summer. She was, in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed care what the rest of us thought about her. Like the rest of my classmate, I didn’t really want to get closed to her. It was only when we did their chemistry project together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did .

　　【参考答案】4.

　　试题分析：本文叙述了作者的同学Christine在大家的眼里是非常奇怪的一个人，她穿着奇怪的服装，话语不多，也不在乎别人对她的看法，可就在作者与她进行一次化学的合作项目时，才理解为什么她总是把自己打扮成那个样子。

　　【小题1】考查短语。句意：除了她是非常的奇怪，我对她了解不多。except for +名词或代词，不跟句子，所以应去掉for，except that+句子。

　　【小题2】考查固定短语。句意：她的话语不多。这里用来修饰动词用much， many修饰可数名词。

　　【小题3】考查动词。句意：她穿着黑色的运动鞋。worn是wear的过去分词，它的过去式是wore，这里短文叙述的是过去的事情，所以应该用过去式。

　　【小题4】考查副词。句意：她穿着黑色的运动鞋及黑色的毛衣，甚至实在夏天。although后跟句子，even是副词，后可跟介词短语。

　　【小题5】考查形容词。句意：她实际上很招人喜欢的。attractively是副词；attractive是形容词，在这里作表语。

　　【小题6】考查动词短语。句意：她从不考虑其他的人是怎样看她的。这里是seemed to do似乎做某事。

　　【小题7】考查名词。句意：像我的其他同学一样我真地不想接近她。classmate 是单数；classmates是复数，因为the rest of+可数名词的复数，故用classmates。

　　【小题8】考查固定短语。句意：像我的其他同学一样我真地不想接近她。get close to sb接近某人。是固定短语。

　　【小题9】考查代词。句意：就在我们在一起做化学项目时，我才真正地理解她为什么打扮成那样。这里their他们的；our我们的。形容词性物主代词应该与主语we一致，所以用our。

　　【小题10】考查动词。句意：就在我们在一起做化学项目时，我才真正地理解她为什么打扮成那样。根据前面的谓语动词was与did 可知这里叙述的是过去的事情，所以应该用过去式began。

　　短文改错 共10小题 每小题1分 满分10分

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（A )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（ )划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Time flies as an arrow. I’m already in Grade 3 after I realize it. It is only a little more than seven months before I graduated from our school. At the present, I’m busy review my lessons in order to take the college entrance examinations. I hope attend Beijing University, that is considered to be one of the best. Most of my classmate are studying very hard to realize our dreams. I do believe everyone will be able to enter a very well university.

　　【参考答案】5.

　　as –like

　　after—before

　　graduated—graduate

　　at the present --the 去掉

　　review—reviewing

　　hope后加to

　　that—which

　　classmate—classmates

　　our –their

　　well---good

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线〔〕划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Dear Editor,

　　I'm writing to tell you about a shocked incident that happened in Beijing Zoo in the afternoon of Feb 23rd.

　　I was visiting the zoo that afternoon while I heard bears roaring terribly. I hurried to the place where the bears lived at. I saw the black bear badly injured and one of them roll on the ground painfully. It was hurt too serious to move a foot. The people around was shocked, angry and blaming the wrongdoer. I learned that was a student from a famous university in Beijing who caused the trouble. He pulled sulfur and acid onto the bears or pretending to feed them.

　　What an shame! Animals are our friends and something must be done to prevent them from being injured.

　　Sincerely Yours

　　Li Hua

　　【参考答案】6.Dear Editor,

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　　Sincerely Yours

　　Li Hua

　　【2016模拟题】第一节

　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出改加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：

　　1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　As students, all of us will be faced a problem after passed the college entrance

　　examination. Should we choose a good major and a good university first? Here are

　　some different ideas. Some more prefer to choose a major first so they can learn that

　　they are interested in. In this way they can put their hearts into study and got their

　　favorite jobs in the future. Other believe that the environment is important to one’s

　　develop and that graduates from key universities

　　are more likely to find good jobs.

　　As long as I’m concerned, the best choice is a good university if we can’t obtain all.

　　【参考答案】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　faced后加with；

　　passed---passing；

　　and---or；

　　some后的more去掉；

　　learn后的 that---what；

　　got---get;

　　Other---Others;

　　develop---development;

　　long---far;

　　all---both

　　【2016模拟题】第一节

　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；      

　　2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者 (从第 11 处起) 不计分。

　　Have you ever seen blue ice cream topped with black fruits? That sounded foreign and not delicious at all! That’s the power of colors．It can neither make your dinner more delicious or to spoil the whole table． Scientists have found that blue must make people lose appetite．If you don’t want to eat too many at your classmate’s birthday party，put his cake on a blue plate．You’ll stop eating soon．Why is it that people don’t feel like eat when they see blue? It’s all in their mind. People relate the color of food they see the food in their memory. There are almost no blue leafy vegetable and no blue meat, so people get a “foreign” or “strange” feeling about the blue food itself．So what should go into dishes? You need to think it over after helping your mum with dinner to make a better decision．

　　短文改错1. sounded—sounds

　　2. neither---either

　　3. or后的to删除

　　4.must---may/might/can/could

　　5. many—much

　　6. his—your

　　7.eat---eating

　　8.the food前添加to/with

　　9.vegetable—vegetables

　　10.after---before