2016届江西浮梁县高考英语二轮复习短文改错演练（5）

　　江西浮梁县2016高考英语短文改错【二轮】演练（5）

　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　’d like tell you something about the holiday we have arranged it for you. For those who wants to ski, you can rent skis on the spot, and boots too. Surely it is better if you have your own boots. Don’t forget it can get quite cold in the day, so warm clothes are must. The ski-poles are often very hot when it is sunny, so be care not to get burnet. The hotel booking for you is very comfortable, and the nights do get very cold sometimes, so be prepared. For those looking for another activities, there are lovely walks, good views and interesting birds up the hill. Finally, I’d like to mention what we offer excellent opportunities to try delicious and unusually food.

　　【参考答案】1.

　　第二句：like和tell中间加to；it去掉

　　第三句：wants改成want

　　第五句:

　　must 前加a

　　第六句：care改成careful

　　第七句：booking改成booked；and改成but

　　第八句：another改成other

　　第九句：what改成that;

　　unusually 改为 unusual

　　短文改错（共10 小题； 每小题1分， 满分10分）

　　要求： 增加： 在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）， 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

　　删除： 把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

　　修改： 在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　Dear Jim,

　　I am so exciting that you will come to China.

　　I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you.

　　I’ll meet you at the airport and then you will take No.8 Bus for my home.

　　You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city.

　　It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you.

　　During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks.

　　I am sure we will have greatly fun together.

　　I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.

　　Yours

　　John

　　【参考答案】1、

　　【小题10】句意：我相信我们在一起可以玩的高兴。修饰名词fun，用形容词great

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　　考点：考查短文改

　　I’m very much glad to hear that your shopping centre will build non-smoking supermarket. In my opinion, it’s a good idea to do so, for it can not only help the smokers to smoke less, and it can also do good to other customers’ health. Since you had given up selling cigarettes, the customers don’t like smoking are sure to support you. In addition, smoke in the shopping centre may cause fire, which is dangerous to both your possessions and the safe of the customers. In a word, the non-smoking supermarket will not effect your business. To the contrary, it will help you attract more customers who want to keep health.

　　Best wishes!

　　短文改错

　　假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。

　　文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　I went shopping in the center of the city yesterday afternoon. It was six o’clock before I was going home by bus. The bus was full of passenger, all of whom kept silent. A mother with her little son were sitting nearby. All of a sudden, the son cried loudly. The mother tries to do what she could make him stop crying. However, the son went on crying. After a long time, a man sitting next to the mother said angrily, “Why don’t you give the child what she wants.” The mother answered quiet, “I would if I could, and what he wants is your hat.” Hearing of this, all the passengers burst into laughter.

　　【参考答案】3.

　　1. before ---- when

　　2. passenger---- passengers

　　3. were---- was

　　4. tries ---- tried

　　5. make 前加to

　　6. seating ---- seated7. she ---- he

　　8. quiet ---- quietly

　　9. and ---- but

　　10.去掉of

　　When I was 15 years old. I went to Hangzhou with three American．I became their guide．First, we went to the West Lake．They wanted to look around the lake by the boat．After buying the tickets，we got into a boat．We went around seeing the beautiful sight．After that．we go shopping．The sellers mustn’t speak English．Though it was very hard，I tried my best listen to their words careful and translate the sentences．They bought some scarves what are made of silk．Next，we went to a park but took some pictures．When we felt hunger，we went out of the park and had lunch．After lunch，they visited some buildings and learned more about ancient architecture of China

　　【参考答案】第三部分

　　When I was 15 years old. I went to Hangzhou with three American．I became their guide．First, we went to the West Lake．They wanted to look around the lake by the boat．After buying the tickets，we got into a boat．We went around seeing the beautiful sight．After that．we go shopping．The sellers mustn’t speak English．Though it was very hard，I tried my bestΛ listen to their words careful and translate the sentences．They bought some scarves what are made of silk．Next，we went to a park but took some pictures．When we felt hunger，we went out of the park and had lunch．After lunch，they visited some buildings and learned more about ancient architecture of China.

　　【2016模拟题】第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Not

　　having passed the exam, Xiao Ming remained in the classroom after school. When asking, he told me he didn’t dare to go home because of he was afraid of being scolded or beaten by his dad. Hearing that he said, I felt sorry for him and couldn’t help think of the “wolf father”.

　　Children will behave well if they are punishing when they do something wrong and that punishment should be physical punishment, which is an extreme important educational concept to many parents. But I think this violent way harms children mental growth and the forming of their good characters.

　　No one can avoid making mistake. Parents should help our children correct mistakes and encourage them make progress.

　　【参考答案】短文改错：

　　Not having passed the exam, Xiao Ming remained in the classroom after school. When asking, he told me he didn’t dare to go home because of he was afraid of being scolded or beaten by his dad. Hearing that he said, I felt sorry for him and couldn’t help think of the “wolf father”.

　　Children will behave well if they are punishing when they do something wrong and that punishment should be physical punishment, which is an extreme important educational concept to many parents. But I think this violent way harms children mental growth and the forming of their good characters.

　　No one can avoid making mistake. Parents should help our children correct mistakes and encourage them /make progress.