2016届高考英语二轮专题热点集训：专题17 书面表达

　　专题十七

　　书面表达

　　【命题趋势探秘】

　　命题

　　规律考查内容 考查度 ☆☆☆ ☆☆☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆

　　所占分值

　　2—3分 2—3分

　　命题

　　趋势2016·江西）

　　假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。

　　1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；

　　2.学会做人：真诚，友善；

　　3.学会其他：考生自拟。

　　注意：1.词数120左右；

　　2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总次数。Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on learning in senior high school.____________________________________________________________

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　　Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on learning in senior high school.

　　In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.

　　In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.

　　Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.

　　No pains, no gains. I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and harmonious environment.

　　That’s all.

　　Thank you!

　　重点词汇和短语：challenging 挑战性的

　　efficiently高效率地

　　get involved in参与

　　take part in参加

　　build up增强

　　高级句型：

　　1)It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.强调句式强调作状语的介词短语

　　2)I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and harmonious environment. that引导表语从句

　　【典例2】（2016·天津）

　　假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津，得知美国学生Chris作为交换生，下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件：

　　(1)表示欢迎；

　　(2)介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如天气、饮食等)；

　　(3)介绍本班情况；

　　(4)希望Chris做哪些事情，以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊。

　　注意：

　　(1)请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息。

　　(2)可适当加入细节， 使内容充实，行文连贯。

　　(3)词数不少于100； 开头已给出， 不计入总词数。

　　(4)参考词汇：交换生 exchange student

　　Dear Chris,

　　I’m Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. ____________________________________

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　　Yours,

　　Li Jin

　　【范文】

　　’m Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. I’m more than glad to know that you’re coming to be with us as an exchange student this coming term. In fact, all my classmates are kind and look forward to your coming, and are willing to accept you as one of us.

　　Besides, I hope that you’ll have no difficulty adapting to the food and weather here. It is generally not too hot in summer here and we have relatively warm winter, compared to that in America. We have rice and noodles as our main food, which I hope you’ll like.

　　Indeed, we feel excited in having you as our new classmates. For one thing, through daily contact we can have a better knowledge of Chinese and American cultures and social customs. In addition, we view this as a good chance for us to improve our English.

　　Hope to receive you soon as one of us.

　　Yours,

　　Li Jin

　　重点短语：more than，look forward to，be willing to，have (no) difficulty (in)doing sth，adapt to，compare…to，have a good knowledge of等。

　　高级句型：1)I’m more than glad to know that you’re coming to be with us as an exchange student this coming term. 使用了more than，that引导的宾语从句，以及现在进行时表示将来动作；

　　2)It is generally not too hot in summer here and we have relatively warm winter, compared to that in America.使用了and连接并列句，过去分词短语作状语，that表替代

　　3)For one thing, through daily contact we can have a better knowledge of Chinese and American cultures and social customs. 这个单句使用了过渡词语，短语have a good knowledge of以及形容词比较级。

　　【技巧点拨】

　　1.提纲类记叙文的写作中，要注意下面几个方面：

　　1)注意文章的体裁、格式、时态等，迅速组织写作素材。如果是半开放式的提示，则要求结合自己熟悉的生活或话题展开叙述；

　　2)注意领会提纲的含义，不能遗漏提纲要点，在展开叙述的时候也不能离题太远，要做到能展开，也能迅速收拢。

　　3)注意正确运用时态和人称。

　　2.说明文的写作一般来说大致可分为三个部分：第一部分提出主题，要阐述、说明的主要内容；第二部分对文章的主题进行展开说明；第三部分对文章的主题作归纳总结。在文章开始时提出需要说明的东西和观点，然后用first，second，…and finally加以罗列说明举例法用具体的例子来说明我们要表达的意思，常用for example，for instance，still another example is…等词语引出 比较法对两个对象进行比较，从而进行说明的写作手法比较相同点和比较不同点两种方法在比较相同点的时候，常用到similarly，also，too，in the same case，in spite of the difference等这样的词语however，on the other hand，in contrast，but，nevertheless等表示转折的词语常用来引导对不同点的比较….(在某方面). In…, there were …But by last year, the number of…had reached up to…(达到多少).

　　2. It can be clearly seen from the chart that the average number of…has reached…, with a rise of 20% for the past/last five years.

　　3. We can see from the chart that there is a tendency toward…, and the number of people who…has dropped/risen/increased from…to…, with an annual increase of…

　　第二段：说明原因

　　Several reasons may account for/have contributed to/lead to/have caused such changes/tendency. For one thing/To begin with…For another thing/What’s more…Finally…

　　第三段：陈述自己的看法

　　1.In my opinion,…

　　2. Therefore, it goes without saying that…

　　As is revealed/shown in the chart/diagram, there has been a sharp increase/decrease in the…From the sharp increase/decrease in the chart, it goes without saying that…

　　There are at least two reasons that account for this…On one hand,…on the other hand…. …is due to the fact that…In addition,…is responsible for…There may be some other reasons for…But it’s generally believed that the reasons mentioned are commonly convincing.

　　As far as I’m concerned, I hold the view that …

　　【典例1】（2016·广东·基础习作你接受一项写作任务，要为当地英语晚报写一篇报道。写作内容请根据以下信息写一篇英文报道，内容包括：人物：英国人查理德·阿维斯Richard Avis)

　　出生日期：1974年12月1日

　　：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人

　　目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义

　　相关信息：

　　●借助当地媒体寻找

　　●迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家

　　●职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等

　　●计划40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人●打算根据此经历写一本书 ★注：同年同月同日生的人：time twin

　　写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容

　　评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。___________________________________________________________________________

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　　【范文】

　　对于不同类型的图表，考生做到对图表描述的关键心中有数。包括图表的类型、表示数据变化趋势的动词和名词（如上升、下降、持平、波动等）、表示变化程度的副词和对应的形容词。句型上包括：图表写作的描述段（即开篇段落的句型表达）、表达对比、描述趋势等。一些图表写作特有的问题，如突出图表描述的重点、准确描述总趋势、注意时态使用（图表中经常有不同的年份信息）词汇和句式表达力求多变。情景作文假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇周记记述爸爸出差期间，妈妈生病，你照顾她的过程。

　　注意：1.周记的开头已经为你写好 词数不少于60________________________________________________________________

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　　【范文】

　　Last Monday, my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip. He would be away for three days. Just the next morning I found my mother wasn’t feeling well. She had a cold. I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her. With my special care, my mother recovered quickly. When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened. He praised me for what I had done.

　　I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.

　　重点短语：go on a trip出门；远行 prepare sth. for sb.为某人准备某物come back回来

　　高级句型：

　　1) When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened. when引导状语从句和what引导名词从句

　　2) I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.that引导宾语从句

　　【技巧点拨】

　　一．看图作文记叙文的写作

　　对于记叙文的看图作文，考生要仔细读图，弄清各图之间的联系，确定写作要点，并注意把握或拓展故事的时间线索，在审题时注意明确时态、人称、故事的发展等各环节，并且要列出相关的文字提纲，将图画内容转化为文字材料，这样更有利于有条理地展开叙述。

　　【2】（201 请根据你对以下两幅图的理解以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题用英语写一篇作文。

　　参考词汇: banner (横幅) stump (树桩)你的作文应包括以下内容1. 简要描述两幅图的内容2. 概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解3. 举例说明两幅图对你的启示。注意1.可参照图片适当发挥2.作文词数150 左右3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息如校名、人名等。

　　Actions Speak Louder than Words

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　　Actions Speak Louder than Words

　　People celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.

　　The message conveyed here is clear: “Actions speak louder than words.” Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate actions should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees, to better the environment.

　　Actions are important in other fields, too. Instead of shouting empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need. We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules, stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams. Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.

　　重点短语：put up a banner竖起一面旗子

　　suffer severe damage遭受严重破坏

　　take practical measures采取实际措施

　　better the environment优化环境

　　donate books捐赠书籍

　　follow traffic rules遵守交通规则

　　高级句型：

　　1. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees. while连接并列句

　　2.Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish. when引导状语从句，whatever引导名词从句，倒装句式

　　【技巧点拨】

　　二.看图作文议论文的写作框架

　　“三段式”作文是最理想的此类议论文的结构，具体的布局谋篇为：

　　1.第一段开门见山地叙述图画内容，此时一定要密切围绕图画展开叙述，交代图画中的人物、(地点、时间)、干什么；

　　2.第二段提出文章的主题，提出论点，围绕图画和主题展开叙述。此时要注意有条理地，一步步地展开叙述，而不要试图在一句话里涵盖太多信息，做到文理清晰，过渡自然。此时要注意把握句与句、段与段之间的连接方式。

　　3.最后一段，得出结论。此时可以用下面这些方式来结束文章：

　　(1)用几句话概括全文内容，进一步肯定文章的中心思想；

　　(2)引用格言、名言等总结全文，这样更显得有说服力；

　　(3)结合自己或自己身边的事例，发表自己的看法。

　　◇考点4开放类作文

　　【基础知识梳理】

　　与传统的“控制性作文”相比，开放式作文所给提示比较简略，要求学生根据所给图画进行简单描述后阐述自己的看法。学生在写作时要充分发挥想象力和创造力，自己拓展主题，组织篇章结构。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.

　　2.议论抒怀，如：请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。A mother said, “My son is always on the phone, sleeping, out with his friends. or in his room. He never has time to talk to me.”May 31, No Smoking Day, is drawing near. Now what do you want to say to the smokers to help them get rid of the bad habit?

　　4. 设计活动，如：You are talking with one of your close friends about your plans for the summer vacation. You say to him, “I’m going to enjoy myself in the summer vacation.” He asks, “what exactly are you going to do to have fun?”

　　5. 解释原因，如：Tell your friends why you are looking forward to the weekend.

　　6. 发表评论，如：In your English class, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain

　　【典例1】（2016·湖北）

　　请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.

　　注意：无须写标题；除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。___________________________________________________________________________

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　　【范文】

　　’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society.

　　I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.

　　As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.

　　重点短语：grow up into成长为

　　can well remember sth.对某事记忆犹新

　　drive off开车跑掉

　　高级句型：

　　1)I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. be about to do sth when表示“正准备做某事时突然”；which引导定语从句

　　2)Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.过去分词短语作状语；what引导宾语从句

　　【典例2】（2016·重庆·写作一

　　“My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry"

　　要求：(1)就此材料发表你的看法；

　　(2)紧扣材料，有明确的观点；

　　(3)词数不少于60；

　　(4)在答题卡上作答。

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　　【范文】

　　’t reach out our helping hands in time. By contrast, if our mobile phones are damaged and can’t work properly, we’ll feel sad.

　　There’s nothing wrong in keeping the mobile phone as our friends and taking good care of them is well justified, but we can’t go so far as to replace it with our friends. Anyway, friends are more important than mobile phones.

　　重点短语：be equipped with, keep in touch with,be addicted to, tend to do, in need, reach out, by contrast,be justified等

　　高级句型：1) Nowadays almost everyone is equipped with a phone, which has made it easier for us to keep in touch with our friends away from us. which引导非限制性定语从句

　　2) By contrast, if our mobile phones are damaged and can’t work properly, we’ll feel sad.介词短语by contrast表示对比，if引导假设状语从句

　　【技巧点拨】

　　开放性作文的写作步骤：

　　1.认真审题，提炼主题

　　审题对开放性作文的写作很重要，考生要注意通过审题确定文章的主题、时态和体裁。

　　2. 紧扣创造性阐述所谓阐述，就是评价图画信息，并表达自己的感想。在这一部分，只需用简单的语言，讲出平易、平实的道理，没有必要过深地挖掘图画信息，但有一点要做到，就是思想健康，积极向上。

　　3.过渡自然，结构紧凑

　　一篇好的文章，应该注意段落间的灵活过渡。因此，在“描述”和“阐述”之间，添加一个“过渡段”是不可缺少的。From the picture I can see…; As is shown in the picture等，“过渡段”可以是一句万能的套话，…或者“就我而言，这幅图很有意义”：As far as I am concerned, the picture is both meaningful and wonderful.或：In my opinion, the picture is meaningful and wonderful as well. 可见，过渡段扮演了承上启下的角色：wonderful呼应第一段，meaningful引出第三段。

　　请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。

　　When I Have a Different Opinion

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　　Writing 2（2015·福建）

　　请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。

　　内容要求：

　　1. 描述画面；

　　2. 概述其含义；

　　3. 谈谈个人感想。

　　(凿壁偷光)

　　注意：

　　1. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

　　2. 可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、行文连贯；

　　3. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

　　参考词汇：凿，钻bore

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　　Writing 3.（2015·重庆)

　　写作一(满分15分)

　　请就以下话题，按要求用英文写作。

　　If you could give your younger self one piece of advice，what would you say?

　　要求：(1)做出回答并说出理由；

　　(2)词数不少于60。

　　写作二(满分20分)

　　Bookcrossing.com 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享(wild release)，即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享(controlled release)，即直接传递给另一位参与者。

　　假设你是李华，请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包括：

　　• ●表明写信目的

　　• ●选择一种分享方式

　　• ●简述做出该选择的理由

　　• ●希望了解更多信息

　　注意：(1)词数不少于80；

　　(2)书信格式及开头已给出(不计入总词数)。

　　Writing 4.（2015·四川)

　　假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发帖，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。

　　1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；

　　2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；

　　3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议；

　　4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。

　　注意：

　　1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；

　　2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

　　Hi, Sharon，

　　This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.

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　　Li Xia

　　Writing 5. （2015·江苏）

　　请阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。

　　[写作内容]

　　1. 用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；

　　2. 结合上述信息，简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因；

　　3. 根据你的分析，从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。

　　[写作要求]

　　1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

　　2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

　　3. 不必写标题。

　　[评分标准]

　　内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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　　Writing 6. （2016·福建）

　　如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。

　　“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm."

　　—Sir Winston Churchill

　　内容要求：

　　1．你对该引语的理解：

　　2．你的相关经历：

　　3．恰当的结尾。

　　注意：

　　1．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数：

　　2．文中不能出现考生的具体信息：

　　3．词数：120左右。

　　This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that_________________________________

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　　Writing 7.（2016·广东卷基础写作共1小题；满分15分你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇时事快讯。

　　[写作内容]请根据以下信息，写一篇关于移民火星的快讯★火星[写作要求]

　　只能用5个句子表达全部内容[评分标准]

　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

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　　Writing 8.（2016·浙江）

　　请以“one thing I’m proud of”为题，用英语写一篇100—120个词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：

　　1. 记述事情经过；

　　2. 简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。

　　注意：文章的标题已给出(不计词数)。

　　One Thing I’m Proud of

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　　Writing 9.（2016·福建)

　　孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。

　　内容要求：1.描述漫画内容；

　　2. 分析漫画所揭示的问题；

　　3. 提出你的看法。注意：

　　1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；3.词数120左右；

　　4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

　　参考词汇：铺路pave the way

　　From the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet._________ ______

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　　Writing 10.（2016·辽宁)

　　一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英文稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。

　　写作要点：

　　1.它是中国传统节日之一；

　　2.家人团聚；

　　3.赏月、吃月饼；

　　4.还有旅游、访友等其他活动。

　　注意：

　　词数100左右；

　　可以适当增加细节，以使用文连贯；

　　开头语已写好，不总词数。

　　The Mid- Autumn Festival

　　The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar.

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　　专题热点集训十七

　　书面表达

　　参考答案

　　Writing 1（2015·浙江）

　　【写作指导】写好本篇文章一方面注意所给的提纲内容，不要遗漏要点，尤其是选好观点，举好例子。另一方面要把信息写准确，包括你的理由，段落要清楚。其次就是文章中要出现一些过渡表达，如：besides等会使文章更顺畅。同时最重要的是，要写出有“亮点”的短语和高级句式，如固定短语、定语从句和非谓语动词的使用。

　　【范文】

　　When I Have a Different Opinion

　　We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion，I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.

　　The main reason for my choice is that being brought in a culture emphasizing collectivism，I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once，we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum，but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation，I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.

　　Writing 2（2015·福建）

　　【写作指导】 本文是图画作文，要求学生就“凿壁偷光”的故事写出自己的感想，故应用一般现在时和第一人称。写作时注意以下几点：1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点； 2. 分析文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象，要依据提示词语来行文；3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态；4. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

　　【范文】

　　One possible version：

　　In_the_picture，we can see a boy in worn clothes，sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it. A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.

　　This is a well－known story from an ancient Chinese idiom. The boy，being poor，couldn't afford even a candle，so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor's house to read at night. The moral of the story is: spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.

　　Of course，things are totally different today. It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts. Hard work pays off. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.

　　Writing 3. （2015·重庆）

　　写作一

　　【写作指导】因为是给原来的自己提建议，故可以考虑从虚拟语气着手，如：

　　1. 宾语从句

　　I suggest/ advise that...I should...

　　I strongly recommend that...

　　2. 主语从句

　　It's strongly recommended that...

　　My suggestion/ advice to the younger self is that...

　　3. 条件状语从句

　　If I were three years younger，I would...

　　Were I three years younger，I would...

　　在给所提建议陈述原因的时候，可以用并列结构not only，but...as well连接

　　1. The reason why...is that...

　　2. Why I say so is that...

　　3. It is not only because... but...as well.

　　4. ...for the simple reason that...not only...，but...as well.

　　5. The reasons are as follows.

　　在文章的最后，可以表达对“回不到过去”的惋惜

　　How I wish I could be three years younger!

　　If only I would return to three years ago.

　　【范文】

　　Were I three years younger than I am now，I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals. As an old saying goes，living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. Compared with many abstract objectives，practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward. If only I could go back and reset my goals.

　　写作二

　　【写作指导】一、写信目的：得知消息，申请参加。可以采用的句型有：

　　1. I'm writing to tell you that...

　　2. The reason why I write (this letter) to you is that...

　　3. I am writing to you for the simple reason that...

　　4. My purpose of writing this letter to you is that...

　　二、选择一种分享方式：二者选一

　　表示选择的表达句式

　　1. Between them，I would like to choose...

　　2. Of the two，I prefer the latter to the former.

　　3. By comparison，I would pick the latter rather than the former.

　　4. Of the two，the latter is my preference.

　　5. Of the two，the latter wins my favor.

　　三、阐述理由

　　四、书信结尾(提出希望)。可以采用的句型有：

　　1. I am looking forward to more information.

　　2. I would appreciate it if you would offer more information.

　　3. Your detailed message will be much appreciated.

　　4. If you could provide more specific information，I would be much grateful.

　　【范文】

　　Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide，I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.

　　You've introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled release. Of the two，the latter wins my favor. By the means of controlled release，I only need to deliver books to other participants，not only books are shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.

　　If you could provide more specific information，I would be well grateful. Looking forward to your reply.

　　Writing 4. （2015·四川)

　　【写作指导】这是一篇提纲式的实用性强的文章。写好本篇文章一方面注意所给的提纲内容不要遗漏要点，尤其是写邮件的目的。另一方面要把信息写准确，包括提供帮助的意愿；胜任辅导的理由；讲好普通话的建议；提出你学习英语的具体需求等，但不要逐条翻译，要段落清楚。其次就是文章中要出现一些过渡表达，如：besides等会使文章更顺畅。同时最重要的是要写出“亮点”的短语和高级句式，如固定短语、定语从句和非谓语的使用。最后就是表达期望得到回复。

　　【范文】

　　Hi_Sharon，

　　This_is_Li_Xia._I_learned_from_your_post_that_you_want_to_improve_your_Mandarin.It's my pleasure to help you.

　　ou hear. Speak out loud and clearly with your true feelings. Don't be afraid of making mistakes.

　　By the way，you can teach me English in return.

　　Looking forward to your reply!

　　Yours_truly，

　　Li_Hua

　　that matter. It is everybody's duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.

　　Writing 6. （2016·福建）)

　　This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.

　　At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better.

　　Looking back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.

　　Actually, we can't succeed in everything we try. What's important is that we should stick to our dreams.Writing

　　7.（2016·广东’t wait to experience their new life there, saying they’re tired of life on the earth. They believe that they’ll turn hero once they make a success.

　　Writing 8.（2016·浙江）

　　One Thing I’m Proud of

　　I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.

　　The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skilful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.

　　I’m really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb “Practice makes perfect.”

　　Writing 9.（2016·福建)

　　From the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.

　　It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.

　　Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children’s development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.

　　Writing 10.（2016·辽宁)

　　The Mid- Autumn Festival

　　The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar.

　　As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.