2016届湖南湘乡高考英语二轮复习短文改错精编（4）

　　2016湖南省湘乡市高考英语短文改错（二轮）精编（4）

　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Christine was just a girl in one of my classes. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange. She didn’t talk many. Her hair was black and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater, although in the summer. She was, in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed care what the rest of us thought about her. Like the rest of my classmate, I didn’t really want to get closed to her. It was only when we did their chemistry project together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did .

　　【参考答案】4.

　　试题分析：本文叙述了作者的同学Christine在大家的眼里是非常奇怪的一个人，她穿着奇怪的服装，话语不多，也不在乎别人对她的看法，可就在作者与她进行一次化学的合作项目时，才理解为什么她总是把自己打扮成那个样子。

　　【小题1】考查短语。句意：除了她是非常的奇怪，我对她了解不多。except for +名词或代词，不跟句子，所以应去掉for，except that+句子。

　　【小题2】考查固定短语。句意：她的话语不多。这里用来修饰动词用much， many修饰可数名词。

　　【小题3】考查动词。句意：她穿着黑色的运动鞋。worn是wear的过去分词，它的过去式是wore，这里短文叙述的是过去的事情，所以应该用过去式。

　　【小题4】考查副词。句意：她穿着黑色的运动鞋及黑色的毛衣，甚至实在夏天。although后跟句子，even是副词，后可跟介词短语。

　　【小题5】考查形容词。句意：她实际上很招人喜欢的。attractively是副词；attractive是形容词，在这里作表语。

　　【小题6】考查动词短语。句意：她从不考虑其他的人是怎样看她的。这里是seemed to do似乎做某事。

　　【小题7】考查名词。句意：像我的其他同学一样我真地不想接近她。classmate 是单数；classmates是复数，因为the rest of+可数名词的复数，故用classmates。

　　【小题8】考查固定短语。句意：像我的其他同学一样我真地不想接近她。get close to sb接近某人。是固定短语。

　　【小题9】考查代词。句意：就在我们在一起做化学项目时，我才真正地理解她为什么打扮成那样。这里their他们的；our我们的。形容词性物主代词应该与主语we一致，所以用our。

　　【小题10】考查动词。句意：就在我们在一起做化学项目时，我才真正地理解她为什么打扮成那样。根据前面的谓语动词was与did 可知这里叙述的是过去的事情，所以应该用过去式began。

　　短文改错 共10小题 每小题1分 满分10分

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（A )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（ )划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Time flies as an arrow. I’m already in Grade 3 after I realize it. It is only a little more than seven months before I graduated from our school. At the present, I’m busy review my lessons in order to take the college entrance examinations. I hope attend Beijing University, that is considered to be one of the best. Most of my classmate are studying very hard to realize our dreams. I do believe everyone will be able to enter a very well university.

　　【参考答案】5.

　　as –like

　　after—before

　　graduated—graduate

　　at the present --the 去掉

　　review—reviewing

　　hope后加to

　　that—which

　　classmate—classmates

　　our –their

　　well---good

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线〔〕划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Dear Editor,

　　I'm writing to tell you about a shocked incident that happened in Beijing Zoo in the afternoon of Feb 23rd.

　　I was visiting the zoo that afternoon while I heard bears roaring terribly. I hurried to the place where the bears lived at. I saw the black bear badly injured and one of them roll on the ground painfully. It was hurt too serious to move a foot. The people around was shocked, angry and blaming the wrongdoer. I learned that was a student from a famous university in Beijing who caused the trouble. He pulled sulfur and acid onto the bears or pretending to feed them.

　　What an shame! Animals are our friends and something must be done to prevent them from being injured.

　　Sincerely Yours

　　Li Hua

　　【参考答案】6.Dear Editor,

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　　【2016模拟题】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线（

　　），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Last Saturday the students of our class made a bike trip to a small town by the Tai hu Lake. We set off earlier in the morning. After getting to the town, we visit some places of interest. At noon, we had picnic near the town.

　　Everybody was attracted by the beautifully scenery and we took a lot of picture there. In the afternoon, some of us went fishing, some rowed boats on the water, but others flew kites. We both had a wonderful time! It was a pleasant trip for them, during which the boys were offered the girls a lot of help. We have learned to help, understand and sharing with others. In a word, we have got quite a lot from it.

　　【参考答案】短文改错

　　71、earlier改为early

　　72、visit 改为 visited

　　73、had ^ picnic 中加 a

　　74、beautifully改为 beautiful

　　75、picture 改为 pictures

　　76、but 改为 and

　　77、both 改为all

　　78、them改为 us

　　79、were 去掉

　　80、sharing改为share

　　【2016模拟题】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分, 满分10分）

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文, 文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处, 错误涉及一个单词的增加、删减或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　The teacher I loved most was my English teacher at senior high. She was one of those strict teacher but she was very patiently with us and cared about each one of us. Thus we guys all respected for her. She told us many stories about English history and spent a lot of time teach us literature and how to write. She always writes helpful suggestions for writing, organizing and presented better work. She encouraged us to read and write for pleasure, that gave us confidence. She always made us to feel happy in his class. She made big difference to our lives. That’s why I teach now.

　　【参考答案】短文改错

　　1. teacher改为teachers

　　2. patiently改为patient

　　3.去掉for

　　4. teach改为teaching

　　5. writes改为wrote

　　6. presented改为presenting

　　7. that改为which

　　8.去掉to

　　9. his改为her

　　10. 添加a

　　第一节：短文改错 (共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。

　　删除: 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　As is known, that it is interested to teach children to swim while they are still babies. Most large town in Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe which, in several countries, special courses were now offered to children who are from 7 to 24 months old. The first step is to have a child get rid of the fear with water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can master the technique and push him forward through water.

　　第一节：短文改错

　　1.去掉that

　　2.interested---interesting

　　3.town---towns

　　4.particularly---particular

　　5.which---where

　　6.were---are

　　7.with---of

　　8.teaching---taught

　　9.with---without

　　10.him---himself