2016届山东省胶州市高考英语二轮写作赏析精编（2）

　　山东省胶州市2016高考英语（二轮）写作赏析精编（2）及参考范文

　　书面表达训练

　　最近，你校参加了某英文报纸正在开展的题为“中学生课堂注意力”的专栏讨论，并请你代表学校给该英文报纸投稿。下面的为你校的调查结果（中数据为学生人数百分比）。请你根据所提供的信息做简要说明，并根据提示给出改善的建议。改善注意力的建议：

　　不能够集中注意力 60％

　　课堂干扰 30％

　　睡眠不足与疲劳 70％

　　教室 通风、明亮

　　课堂 积极参与课堂活动

　　课间 适量活动或适当休息

　　Our school has made a survey about how long middle school students can fix their attention in class during each period. The result shows that only 40% of the students can draw their attention to the class, while the rest of them can not concentrate on the lesson. 30% of the students think the problem is caused by all kinds of noises in the classroom; the other part of students consider the lack of sleep and tiredness as the major causes.

　　Therefore, we advise that the classroom be bright and the air inside stay fresh. As for students, they should try their best to be active in class in order not to be disturbed by others. During the breaks, they can take some exercises or have a little rest in the classroom.

　　书面表达训练

　　假定你是李华， 暑假你参加了英国游学活动，住在房东Tricia家中， 回国后给房东写一封信表示感谢， 要点如下：

　　1、安全抵家

　　2、回顾英国游学体会

　　3、感谢房东的帮助

　　4、附寄两张合影

　　5、表达愿望

　　注意：1、词数100左右。

　　2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　3、结束语已为你写好。

　　Dear Tricia,

　　Looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours

　　LiHua

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Tricia,

　　I’ve come back home safely . Looking back to my stay in Britain, I felt so happy and satisfied. The beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot . I also benefited a lot from learning together with local stduents. More importantly , your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British culturedn adapt to the life there . So I’m so grateful to you .

　　By the way , attached to the letter are two photos taken with you , which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together.

　　You are expected to come to China soon.

　　Looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours

　　Li

　　Hua

　　2016书面表达训练

　　假定你是高一1班学生李华，在新的学校学习已一个月有余，请根据下列提示，用英语给你的朋友Jane写封电子邮件，谈一谈你的高中生活。

　　介绍你的学校和班级

　　你的作息时间

　　你的同学

　　你最喜欢的老师（请将你最喜欢的老师化名为Ms. Wang）

　　注意：100词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；开头已给出，不计入总词数。

　　Dear Jane,

　　I’ve been at senior high school for more than a month. I’m writing down my thoughts about my new school life.

　　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Jane,

　　I’ve been at Senior High School for more than a month. I’m writing down my thoughts about my new school life.

　　My new school is a well-known school with a long history. There are 50 classes, more than 300 teachers and over 3,500 students in my school. The classrooms are amazing. Every room has a computer with a special screen, almost as big as a cinema screen. And there are sixty students in my class, who are all hard-working. I’m getting on very well with my classmates. My favorite teacher is a very enthusiastic woman called Ms. Wang, whose way of teaching is nothing like that of my previous teachers. She has many ways to make her classes lively and interesting. I don’t think I will be bored in her class.

　　We usually get up at 5:30 and our class starts at 7:45. I always take part in colorful after-class activities and we go to bed at ten.

　　I am looking forward to hearing from you soon..

　　Yours

　　Li Hua

　　【广东省深圳高级中学】

　　基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）

　　【写作内容】

　　—5日

　　交通工具：火车

　　活动内容：

　　（1）参观“希望小学”(the Hope Primary School), 了解学生的学习条件；

　　（2）与村民同吃住，了解生活状况；

　　（3）参加田间劳动，体验农民生活。

　　感受：

　　（1）农民的生活条件改善了；

　　（2）因为政府免学费，众多好心人资助，没有失学学生。

　　【写作要求】

　　只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

　　【评分标准】

　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

　　2016书面表达训练

　　假设你是银川希望中学学生李华，得知2015年香港大学要在大陆进行自主招生的消息后，有意向香港大学申请，参加自主招生考试。请用英语写一封自荐信，主要包括：

　　1. 个人信息

　　2. 性格、爱好与特长

　　3. 学习情况

　　注意：

　　1. 词数100左右；

　　2. 信的开头已为你写好 (不计入总词数)；

　　3. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　4. 参考词汇：自主招生 independent recruitment

　　Dear Sir，

　　My name is Li Hua, from Hope High School in Yinchuan.

　　Yours, sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　Dear Editor,

　　I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether or not it is good for families to own cars.

　　With the improvement of people’s living conditions, more and more families have their own cars. Some of us think it’s good to own a car, as a car provides convenient, fast and comfortable transport. Also, the increase in the number of car owners shows that people are becoming richer, and that the country is becoming stronger. Thirdly, the fact that people buy cars makes other industries develop faster.

　　However, some other students have a different opinion. They think that cars give off waste gas and make the air polluted. They also said that too many cars would cause traffic jams, lead to more accidents and endanger people’s lives. Finally, they said that parking is another big problem.

　　In short, people should think twice before buying a car.

　　Yours

　　Zhao Kai

　　【广东省深圳高级中学】

　　读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）

　　阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文and do when he grew up.

　　The next day he handed it in to the teacher. But when the teacher returned it, he found on the front was a large red F. The boy with the dream asked, “Why did I receive an F?”

　　The best part of the story is that two summers ago that same schoolteacher brought 30 kids to camp out on his ranch for a week. When the teacher was leaving, he said, “Look, Monty. I can tell you this now. When I was your teacher, I was something of a dream stealer. During those years I stole a lot of kids’ dreams. Fortunately you had enough belief not to give up yours.”

　　【写作内容】【写作要求】

　　1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

　　2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　【评分标准】

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语句连贯。’s Fate

　　This passage tells us that Monty Roberts, who had such strong belief that he didn’t give up his dream all the time, eventually succeeded in owning a horse ranch.

　　For a person, belief always plays an important role in his life. As a saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Anyone who has strong belief can enjoy a colorful life. Otherwise, he will lose himself in his way of life.

　　From my personal point of view, it can be seen that one with firmly-held belief is likely to be successful and master his own life.