2016届浙江临安市高考英语二轮短文改错练习（4）

　　浙江临安市2016高考英语（二轮）短文改错练习（4）及答案

　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Sometimes in February, my teacher told us about the city speech contest, its topic

　　was “People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”. I thought of my grandma

　　would be my perfect topic. Then I carefully prepared for contest. A couple of weeks

　　later, after the first round I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists! The final was

　　held soon. I was the sixth to present the speech. How a relief when I finished it ! After

　　the last person finished, the judge made their final decisions and announced that I have

　　won first prize. The audience were going wildly clapping and cheering ! I was extremely

　　happy. It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember.

　　【参考答案】5

　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：请在答题卡上作答。

　　Dear Peter,

　　Thanks very much for invite me to your birthday

　　76.

　　party on Sunday. I’d like very much come but

　　77.

　　I had an examination on Monday morning. It is

　　78.

　　a very important exam but I can’t afford to

　　79.

　　fail it. I’ll spend all the whole weekend reading

　　80.

　　and prepare for it. So I’m really sorry that

　　81.

　　I won’t be able to come in this time. I hope you

　　82.

　　can understand. I’ll take this chance to wishing

　　83.

　　you a wonderful time in your birthday. Happy

　　84.

　　birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day!

　　85.

　　Yours,

　　Li Ming

　　【参考答案】4、

　　短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）

　　文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　As is known by all，the Internet is playing a more and more important part on our daily life．On the Internet，we can not only read news at home or abroad but also get much information as possible．For an example，we often send e-mails and make telephone call to our families and friends．What’s more，they can go to school on the Internet，read different kinds of books and even teaches ourselves English．We can also listen to music，watching sports and play computer games．We can even do shopping without left our houses．

　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　Dear Iric ,

　　I’m glad to accept your letter . After the college entrance

　　76. ________________

　　examination , I will have long summer holiday. I would like

　　77. ________________

　　to plan my holiday as follow .

　　78. ________________

　　First of all , I’d like to take a driving course because of driving

　　79.________________

　　is considered to be a necessary skill in modern society . Beside ,

　　80. _______________

　　I would like to become a volunteer teacher in a rural area so

　　81. _______________

　　that I can put that I have learned to good use by teaching kids .

　　82. _______________

　　To tell the truth , I eager to make a long journey to some

　　83. _______________

　　distant places and explore new cultures , and I don’t have to

　　84. _______________

　　travel at my parents expense .

　　85. _______________

　　【参考答案】

　　76. accept—receive

　　77. 加 a

　　78. follows

　　79. 去 of

　　80. Besides

　　81. √

　　82. that --- what

　　83. 加 am

　　84. and --- but

　　85. parents’

　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：请在答题卡上作答。

　　In my hometown there used to a temple with a 76.

　　history of more than four hundred years. It lies in a

　　77.

　　valley with green hills around it. It was such beautiful 78.

　　and famous that many tourists came visit it every day. 79.

　　They took photo; they wrote down their names on

　　80.

　　the walls; they were brought food and drink and left rubbish 81.

　　everywhere. One day some tourists did a fire to cook 82.

　　food near the temple. All of sudden, a strong wind 83.

　　blew. The wooden temple caught fire. Soon the wholly 84.

　　temple was burned out and only a little walls remained. 85.

　　The beautiful temple disappeared.

　　【参考答案】5.

　　76．后加

　　77．lies→lay

　　78．such→so 79．came后加to80．photo→photos 81．were

　　82．did→made

　　83．of后加a84．wholly→whole85．little→few

　　短文改错 (共10分,每小题1分,满分10分)

　　该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。

　　修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

　　This morning I got up early and went to school as usually, only to find there were nobody in the classroom because it is Sunday. “How a bad memory I have!” I couldn’t help laughing. Stand in front of the school gate, I began to wonder what to do next. Suddenly a good idea occurs to me. “Why not get together with some good friends for a picnic in such a fine weather?” I immediately telephoned some of my best friends, but they all agreed to join me. About two hours late, we finally arrived a pleasant park with trees and flowers here and there. We really enjoyed us greatly.

　　【参考答案】

　　1改错:

　　1.usually-usual 2.were-was 3.how-what 4. stand-standing

　　5. occurs-occurred

　　6.such a把a去掉 7.but-and 8.late- later

　　9. arrived∧at

　　10. us-ourselves