2016届浙江永嘉县高考英语二轮短文改错精练题（3）

　　浙江永嘉县2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）精练题（3）及参考答案

　　【2016四川省资阳市第一次诊断性考试】

　　短文改错 （共10小题；每小题分，满分分）

　　文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除把多余的词用斜线）划掉。

　　修改在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意

　　1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者从第11处起不计分。

　　Dear Editor,I used to be a happy little girl and now I’m shy and say a few words.

　　When I was eleven, I lost one of the front teeth and it replaced by a false one. No one

　　knows about it except two of my friend. However, I found it hard to face them because they

　　know my secret. When I speak at them, they often stare at my mouth, what makes me feel

　　uneasy. I am afraid of make new friends as I think they will laugh at me. Sometime I even want

　　to kill me indeed. What should I do?

　　Li Hua

　　【参考答案】

　　Dear Editor,

　　I used to be a happy little girl and now I’m shy and say a few words.

　　but

　　When I was eleven, I lost one of the front teeth and it ∧ replaced by a false one. No one

　　was

　　knows about it except two of my friend. However, I found it hard to face them because they

　　friends

　　find

　　know my secret. When I speak at them, they often stare at my mouth, what makes me feel

　　to

　　which

　　uneasy. I am afraid of make new friends as I think they will laugh at me. Sometime I even want

　　making

　　Sometimes

　　to kill me indeed. What should I do?

　　myself

　　二、评分意见

　　1. 未标注符号或符号标注不规范一律不给分2. 答题位置（需修改的词下方或需添加位置的下方）不对（如答在上方或相距甚远的位置）一律不给分。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。I went to the Summer Palace last week．At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists．I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat．I got know that they were college students traveling in China．Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine．They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years．After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time ．We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in future．They thanked us again and again．I was very glad to have chance to praticing my oral English．

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Three years ago, I became a student in an ordinary school． Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I find the teachers patient and considerate． However, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class． I decided to make the best for it． I worked hardly and got along well with teachers and classmates． Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available． Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated．

　　My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determine who you are．

　　3.

　　1.disappointing—disappointed

　　2． find—found

　　3.However—Besides或Also

　　4． for—of

　　5.hardly—hard

　　6． teachers 前加my或the

　　7.student—students

　　8． what—which

　　9.去掉but后的that

　　10． determine—determines

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡相应的位置上萄一个勾(、／)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多—个词：把多余的词写在答题卡相应的位置上，用斜线(、)划掉·

　　此行缺—个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该加的词，并附带前(后)词·此行话一个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该错词和改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　I was a honest child indeed. I didn’t dare to tell lies.

　　1.

　　because of my eyes often let the secret out. I remembered 2.

　　telling a lie to my parents, and I could hard fix my eyes on

　　3.

　　my father’s face, to let alone my mother’s eyes. I glanced

　　4.

　　here and there, up and down, nervously.

　　5.

　　However, after I came to Beijing, I no longer have to

　　6.

　　worry my nervous eyes because everything I wanted to say

　　7.

　　was sent by letter. I found myself often tell small lies. I wrote

　　8.

　　“I’m well in Beijing. I enjoy the food selling at the university.

　　9.

　　And at weekends, I often buy fried chickens or pork to eat.”

　　10.

　　【参考答案】4.

　　1.a honest child改为an honest child .because of改为because

　　.hard改为hardly .To let改为let

　　.√

　　6.have to 改为had to.worry改为worry about

　　8.tell改为telling .selling改为sold

　　.chickens改为chicken

　　2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 ( 从第11处起 ) 不计分。

　　例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I

　　the

　　was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday.

　　am

　　on

　　Nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining the heavy traffic. It has serious influenced people daily life and economic development. To solve the problem，some pieces

　　of advice is put forward. Some people suggest that more streets and roads are built. By this

　　way，the traffic density can be speeding up the flow of buses and cars.

　　Some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars. This can decrease the traffic

　　flow. But on the other hand, this will effect the consumption and makes buses more crowded.

　　In my opinion，the number of private cars should be put under control. And at the same time，buses should have their own special routes cannot be used by other vehicles. 

　　【参考答案】改错（共10分）

　　Nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. It has seriously influenced people’s daily life and economic development. To solve the problemsome pieces of advice are put forward. Some people suggest that more streets and roads should be built. In this way，the traffic density can be

　　speeding up the flow of buses and cars.

　　Some people advise limit the number of bikes and cars. This can decrease the traffic flow. But on the other hand，this will affect the consumption and make buses more crowded.

　　In my opinion，the number of private cars should be put under control. And at the same time，buses should have their own special routes which cannot be used by other vehicles.