2016届安徽芜湖市高考英语二轮书面表达选析（4）

　　S安徽芜湖市2016高考英语书面表达【二轮】选析（4）及参考范文

　　2016书面表达训练

　　高中生考入大学后，是否要立即为其配备笔记本电脑呢？对此，有人赞同，有人反对。请你根据下列表格的内容写一篇英语短文，并发表你的看法。

　　支持者

　　反对者

　　是对子女奋发努力取得好成绩的肯定和奖励

　　方便今后的学习，随时随地地可以上网查阅资料 给有些家庭增加了经济负担

　　大学学习条件比较优越，有足够的计算机房供学生使用

　　你的看法（至少两点）……

　　注意：1. 对所给要点逐一陈述并适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

　　词数100左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

　　Is it necessary for freshmen to have a laptop when they go to university?

　　Different people have different ideas.

　　【参考范文】

　　Is it necessary for freshmen to have a laptop when they go to university? Different people have different ideas.

　　The supporters think that students deserve a laptop as an award for their great efforts and achievements. In addition, having a laptop in hand will bring more convenience to their studies and easier access to the Internet, which will in turn absolutely benefit them.

　　The opponents believe it would add to the financial burden of some families. Besides, many universities are equipped with modern facilities, providing students with adequate computers for use.

　　As far as I am concerned, it is not necessary to buy a laptop for freshmen. The reason for this is that they can have free access to the computers in universities. Furthermore, they may be addicted to computer games because of lack of self-control, which will have a bad effect on their studies and health.

　　【2016陕西省商南县高级中学高三上二模】

　　书面表达（满分30分）

　　假定你是李华。你的笔友Jane最近因为学业繁重，身体感到不适，严重影响了学习。因此，她发e-mail给你，寻求你的帮助。请你根据以下要点提示予以回复。

　　写作要点：1．合理的饮食；2．适度的锻炼；3．充足的睡眠。4.

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　　注意：1．短文词数不少于100；2．开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；

　　3．可根据情况增减细节，详略得当；

　　Dear Jane,

　　I’m sorry to hear that you are feeling ill these days.

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　　Best wishes.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　【参考答案】书面表达：【One possible version】

　　Dear Jane,

　　I’m sorry to hear that you are feeling ill these days. In your letter you asked me how to stay healthy and keep attentive in class. Here is my advice.

　　First, have three meals a day and never neglect your breakfast. Keep a balanced diet. For example, eat nutritious food like fresh vegetables, fruits, eggs and fish. Second, taking morning exercise every day is a nice choice. As we all know, everyday exercise helps build a strong body. You can do some sports, such as running, walking, or playing ball games to refresh yourself if weather permits. But, remember not to exercise outdoors in a smoggy day. Finally, don’t stay up too late to make sure you have a good sleep every night.

　　If you do accordingly, I believe you’ll feel well soon and you can listen to your teacher energetically and attentively.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　（2016新课标I）

　　假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）

　　注意：1．词数100左右；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　3．参考词汇：住宿-accommodation

　　【考点】考察应用文（书信）写作

　　【写作指导】

　　本文属于应用文中的书信，李华写信给英国的一个培训中心询问暑假培训的详细内容。使用第一人称和将来时为主的时态。

　　要点：1.你计划去英国学习英语；2.看见了对方的广告，引起你的注意。想询问具体信息。3.该校培训班的开始日期，班级规模，周课时，费用以及食宿方式。4.期待对方的回信。

　　写作时要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，多注意灵活使用定语从句，包括非限制性定语从句等高级句式。

　　【一句多译】

　　我是一名来自中国的学生，我计划在假期里到英国参加一个暑期培训班。

　　（1）I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.

　　（2）As a student from China,

　　I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Sir/ Madam,

　　I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course. First when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included Would there be host family or university dormitory?

　　I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　书面表达（25分）

　　最近中国的食品安全问题成为大家瞩目的焦点。近来频发的染色馒头、毒奶粉、瘦肉精、地沟油等事件震惊全国。人们愤慨的同时也对自己的饮食环境充满担忧。我们现在所食用的食物还有哪些是安全的?这些“有毒”食物对我们的危害究竞有多大?请以“The Quality And Safety Of Food In China”为题，对这一事件做一下简要介绍并发表自己今后对如何确保食品安全的看法：

　　1．政府应怎么做?

　　2．食品生产商该怎么做?

　　3．作为消费者又要注意什么?

　　注意：1．字数120左右（文章开头及结尾已给出，

　　不计入字数）

　　2．染色馒头tainted steamed buns

　　毒奶粉poisonous milk powder

　　瘦肉精lean meat powder

　　地沟油illegal cooking oil

　　The Quality And Safety Of Food In China

　　Recently，China’s food safety issues have become the focus of people’s attention．

　　Only in this way will we be able to build a more secure and harmonious society．

　　【参考范文】

　　书面表达

　　高一（4）班学生，请根据下列材料写一篇报告，介绍有关调查情况，并发表自己的意见。

　　1．2．1．2． 注意：不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥。词数在120左右。

　　Recently I have made an investigation on whether money is the source of happiness.

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　　【参考范文】

　　Recently I have made an investigation on whether money is the source of happiness. The students have different opinions.

　　Some students think that money is the source of happiness. Money is important and we can use money to solve any problem. Without it, we can do nothing. Besides, it enables us to live a comfortable life.

　　Others, however, are against it. In their opinion, money doesn’t mean everything. We can buy happiness with money. If someone focuses too much attention on making money, in time he will lose his healthy, friendship and even love.

　　To be honest, I think we should not regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that can help us solve problems. What we should do is to use it properly. In this way, all of us can lead a happier life.