2016届安徽芜湖市高考英语二轮书面表达选析（5）

　　安徽芜湖市2016高考英语书面表达【二轮】选析（5）及参考范文

　　2016书面表达训练

　　假如你叫李华，不久前参加了美国文化委员会举办的一次语言竞赛活动，作为获奖者你得到了暑假去美国免费学习英语的机会。以下是校方寄给你的课程安排表，请你阅读课表，按要求给对方负责人Mr. Smith回一封信。

　　Schedule For EFLS Summer English Courses

　　注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数；

　　2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3.词数：100左右。

　　Dear Mr. Smith,

　　Thank you for your offer of inviting me to the free summer English course in your school.

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　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Mr. Smith,

　　Thank you for your offer of inviting me to the free summer English course in your school.

　　As for my choice of the two courses, I’d certainly prefer the three-week course for 40 hours, although it’s from July 12th to August 8. This would allow me more time to see your beautiful country while learning the language. I’d like to make a few new friends.

　　Of all the subjects I’m learning at school, I like English best. I’ve been learning English for six years and now I’m able to listen, speak, read and write. I hope to take this chance to improve spoken English as much as possible. I believe I’ll have a wonderful time in America this summer.

　　【2016界黑龙江省哈三中高三上第三次验收考试】

　　书面表达（满分25分）

　　假设你是张林，你班来自英国的交流学生John因病住院已两周，请你用英文给他写封信，主要内容包括：

　　询问病情，表示关切；

　　介绍班级近期活动，学习等情况；

　　表达祝愿。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3.信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。

　　Dear John,

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours,

　　Zhang Lin

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear John,

　　How are you getting along these days? It’s two weeks since you went to hospital. And we’re informed that you are diagnosed with a severe disease and have to be in hospital for a period of time. We are concerned about your health and miss you much. The students are engaged in reviewing lessons. We’ve had an exam and the majority of us have made progress steadily. Surrounded by an academic atmosphere, we encourage each other and spare no effort. Don’t worry about your studies, we assure you that we’ll help you to make up for the lessons you missed.

　　Cheer up! We are convinced and confident that you can overcome the disease and be with us soon. We are waiting for your backward!

　　Best wishes!

　　Yours

　　Zhang Lin

　　（2016新课标II）

　　一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文、

　　家庭

　　工作

　　业余生活

　　注意：1、次数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好

　　I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.

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　　【考点】考察半开放性作文

　　【写作指导】本文的话题是“十年后的我”，要求考生从家庭、工作和业余生活来想象十年以后的自己。文章应该使用将来时和第一人称。要点：1.十年以后的生活和现在是完全不一样，我会成为一个成年人，有了自己的家庭，甚至有了可爱的孩子。2.希望自己能够在自己喜欢的计算机行业工作，做一个程序设计师。工作顺利和同事相处融洽。3.在业余生活中经常参加锻炼，如游泳，登山等等。假期里出去旅游，生活多姿多彩。

　　本文要求考生充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

　　【一句多译】

　　我希望我可以在一家电脑公司里做程序设计师。

　　（1）I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer.

　　（2）I hope I will work in a company which produces computer, and I can design some kinds of very good computer。

　　【参考范文】

　　one Possible Version

　　I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.

　　cerely,

　　Li Yue

　　书面表达（满分5分）One possible version:

　　Recently my class took part in the social practice organized by our school, in which we conducted a survey among kids aged 5-14 about their extra-curriculum activities.The results are as follows.

　　As is illustrated in the chart, both boys and girls have a strong preference for electronic or computer games with the percentage ranking first at 100%. More boys than girls enjoy skateboarding or rollerblading, bike riding and watching TV or vedios as leisure activities, each accounting for nearly 40%, 70% and 80%. However, girls outnumber boys by almost 20% when it comes to art and craft.

　　We can draw a conclusion from this survey that according to the data, passive pursuits are far more popular nowadays than active ones and that those who choose creative pastimes are in the minority.

　　In my opinion, since the addiction to playing computer games or watching TV or videos is likely to do harm to children’s health, parents should be responsible for limiting the children’s time spent on passive leisure activities. In addition, more emphasis should be attached to activities that can encourage children to develop their creativity and build up physical health.

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　　书面表达(满分25分)

　　11月的第四个星期四是感恩节。2011年的感恩节是11月24日。某英文杂志社要举办一次征文比赛活动。活动主题是：“Learn to be grateful".假如你叫魏来，请根据下列提示写一篇120词左右的短文投给该杂志社。

　　主要内容包括：

　　1.为什么要感恩？

　　2.对谁感恩？

　　3.感恩实际行动（给父母泡一杯热茶或给他们一个拥抱；给老师作感恩卡；给同学和朋友发短信感谢他们的帮助……）

　　Learn to be grateful

　　The Thanksgiving Day in this year is on November 24th and

　　(已给出文章开头，但是不计入总数)

　　【参考范文】