2016届安徽芜湖市高考英语二轮书面表达选析（6）

　　安徽芜湖市2016高考英语书面表达【二轮】选析（6）及参考范文

　　2016书面表达训练

　　学生会将举办一次以“校园生活创意无限”(Innovation on Campus)为主题的创意作品展评活动。

　　请根据以下内容，用英语写一份书面通知。

　　Notice .

　　In order to enrich your life after school and provide you with a chance to show your talents, we have decided to hold an exciting event “Innovations on Campus”. Note that your works must be school things and created by yourselves. Along with your wonderful works, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use. All the collections will be on show from May 3 to 9 in the gym, the top 10 of which will be awarded. So don't miss the chance and for any questions, call Li Hua at 88235791.

　　Come on, everybody! It's your show time.

　　【2016界虹口区质量监控测试题】Guided Writing

　　Directions: Write an English composition in 120 – 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

　　请认真观察下面的漫画，然后简要描述漫画内容，并根据你对该漫画的理解，谈谈自己的思考和看法。

　　参考词汇：缸vat；

　　漏出来leak out；

　　漏洞loophole

　　【参考范文】作文：

　　In the picture, four people are trying to fill a vat with water. Two men are carrying water while two others are pouring water into the vat. However, with so many loopholes at the bottom of the vat, they’ll never store any water, because no one tries to mend the holes.

　　It reminds me of the problems in our study. While studying, we always try to read more books and do more exercises. However, we seldom pay attention to the mistakes we’ve made, nor do we try to correct them. Therefore, “holes” are left. Day by day, the “holes”, or rather the shortages, become more and more. No matter how many books we’ve read, we have never mastered any knowledge. They have leaked out because of the hole.

　　So we should pay attention to the mistakes we’ve made and the holes we have in our study. Only in this way can we learn much knowledge and fill up our mind with it.

　　（2016浙江卷 ）

　　学校图书馆需要购置一批新书， 现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书（popular science books）和文学类图书（literary books）。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100—120词的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。

　　注意：信的抬头与落款已给出（不计入词数）。

　　Dear Mr. Wang,

　　_______________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Yue

　　【考点】考察应用文写作

　　【写作指导】

　　本文属于应用文中的书信，所以需要注意书信的特殊格式以及特殊用语。要求以李越的口吻向图书馆王老师推荐科普类图书（popular science books）和文学类图书（literary books）。要点：1.你向王老师推荐这两类书。2.理由：科普类图书帮助我们理解科技的基本原则，引起我们的好奇心和发展意识。文学类的书可以提高我们的文学素养。鼓励我们批判类的思维。

　　本文对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

　　【一句多译】

　　那就是我我推荐另外一种书：文学作品。如古典文学，大师作品。通过精彩的故事和语言呈现伟大的思想。

　　（1）That is why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language.

　　（2）That is the reason

　　why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language.

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Mr. Wang,

　　Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.

　　What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.

　　In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.

　　I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Yue

　　书面表达（满分2分）’m Li Hua from Fujian.

　　I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Sir,

　　I’m Li Hua from Fujian, When I was reading the advertisement, the aim of this activity impressed me greatly. I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.

　　As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, good at English and have experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12. I think it is a kind of win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care of the children. For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.

　　I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Sincerely yours,