2016届高三英语二轮随堂训练课件：专题6 书面表达 6.4

　　第4讲 漫画开放类 【典例】(2015·福建高考) 请阅读下面图画, 按要求用英语写一篇短文。

　　内容要求: 1. 描述画面; 2. 概述其含义; 3. 谈谈个人感想。

　　凿壁偷光 注意: 1. 短文开头已给出, 不计入总词数;

　　2. 可适当发挥, 使文章内容充实、行文连贯;

　　3. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 参考词汇: 凿, 钻bore In the picture, _________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【解题思路】 第一步: 依体裁谋篇章　结构对　第一关 内　容 描述图画“凿壁偷光” 段　落 第一段描述图画; 第二段阐述图画的含义; 第三段谈个人感想 第二步: 列要点选句式　要点全　及格线 要点一: 描述图画含义__________________________________________ _______________________ 要点二: 剖析图画内涵__________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ ______________________________ 要点三: 谈个人感想____________________________________________ ________ In the picture, we can see a boy, who was reading a book with full attention. The moral of the story is that we should spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning. 第三步: 扣主题拓展句　句式美　优秀分 要点一拓展: 添加孩子衣着以及读书环境 ______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ________ In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes, who was reading a book with full attention. He was sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it and a weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall. 要点二拓展: 添加故事的来源以及凿壁偷光的原因 __________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________ This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom. The boy, being poor, couldn’t afford even a candle, so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor’s house to read at night. The moral of the story is that we should spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be. 要点三拓展: 进一步强调故事的寓意以及收获 __________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ___________________________________ It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts. Hard work pays off. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future. 【现场阅卷·作文升格】 学　生　答　卷 我　来　阅　卷 该生习作为三档作文, 得分为14分。三段式的写作结构很好, 清晰了然; 原文词数略少, 只有81词; 句型单一, 简单句比重太高; 文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑, 结构缺少组织。

　　1. 第一句read应改为reading, 谓语动词错误, 此处是看到小男孩正在读书, 故用现在分词作宾语补足语。 2. 第三句He is really work hard应改为He is really working hard, 谓语动词错误, is和work都是谓语动词不能连用, 故把work改为现在分词形式构成现在进行时态。 3. 第四句Nowdays应改为Nowadays, 拼写错误。 4. 第五句resulting in应改为so that, 连词错误, resulting in不能直接跟从句。 5. 第八句use前添加you, if引导从句缺主语; succeed改为success, 此处成分为宾语, 应用名词形式。 五　档　作　文 In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes, who was reading a book with full attention. He was sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it and a weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall.

　　This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom. The boy, being poor, couldn’t afford even a candle, so he bored a hole in the wall to“steal”light from his neighbor’s house to read at night. The moral of the story is that we should spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.

　　Of course, things are totally different today. It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts. Hard work pays off. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.

　　一、漫画开放类作文的解题技巧 1. 图文结合定主题。看图作文分析要透过现象看本质, 挖掘隐含信息, 揭示图画的真实含义。主题思想必须明确, 要力求通过“小故事”提炼“大道理”。

　　2. 分析图画定文体。图画类作文的图画包括组图、对比图、单张图三类。组图有点像连环画, 一般由多幅图片构成, 通常要写记叙文; 对比图要求观察出两幅或三幅图之间的不同, 并分析产生这种变化的原因; 单张图通过生动的图画传递深刻的思想, 需在描述图片的基础上发表感想或分析问题, 通常要写议论文。

　　3. 合理联想巧发挥。议论性看图作文可以从举例去发挥, 常用现在时态; 叙事性看图作文可以从人物的心理活动等着手, 增强叙述的连贯性和故事的完整性, 常用过去时态。 二、漫画开放类常用词汇、句型及模板 (一)常用词汇 1. notice vt. 注意到　2. convey vt. 表达 3. reveal vt. 展示; 揭示

　　4. judge vt. 判断 5. resource n. 资源

　　6. survey n. 调查 7. description n. 描写

　　8. cartoon n. 漫画 9. imagination n. 想象力 10. cooperation n. 合作 11. obvious adj. 显然的 12. unfortunately adv. 不幸地 13. vividly adv. 栩栩如生地 14. put up a banner竖横幅 15. take practical measures采取实际的措施 16. take immediate action立即采取行动 17. follow traffic rules遵循交通规则 18. mirror a common phenomenon反映一种普遍现象 19. sign up for报名参加 20. beautify the environment美化环境 21. remind sb. of sth. 让某人想起某事 22. convince sb. to do sth. 说服某人做某事 23. play an important role in在……扮演重要角色 24. be fooled by被……愚弄 25. appeal to sb. to do sth. 呼吁某人做某事 26. make a difference起作用; 有影响 27. turn a blind eye to对……视而不见 28. impress sb. with sth. 某物给某人留下印象 29. as a result of作为……的结果 30. prevent. . . from happening again防止……再次发生 (二)常用句型 1. 精彩开头 ①(2016·江苏高考)From Picture 1, we can see that a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.

　　从图片1, 我们可以看出……然而图片2展示了…… ②(2016·北京高考)I think the picture is telling us that there is usually a difference between one’s dream.

　　我认为这张图片告诉我们…… ③(2016·福建高考)It can be seen from the picture that a family of three are walking on a long red carpet.

　　从图片中可以看出…… 2. 正文佳句 ①(2016·江苏高考)The message conveyed here is that actions speak louder than words.

　　这里传达的信息是…… ②(2016·北京高考)Just like the man in the picture, instead of the big fish he wishes for, he actually catches a small one.

　　就像在图片中的……一样, …… ③(2016·福建高考)The picture shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families.

　　这张图片展示出如今的一种普遍现象…… 3. 余味结尾 ①(2016·江苏高考)Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.

　　只有当我们……时, 我们才能…… ②(2016·北京高考)In my opinion, people need to learn to accept the reality and keep on trying.

　　依我之见, 人们需要学会…… ③(2016·山东高考)The drawing bears a deep meaning in it that parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves.

　　这幅图片里蕴含着很深的含义…… (三)常用模板 第一段: 描述图画 As is vividly shown in the picture above, ___________. The picture

　　tells us that_______________________.

　　图画的内容 这幅图画大致反映的意思 第二段: 解释、说明和分析图片 The implied meaning of the picture should be taken into account

　　seriously. First/To begin with, ___________________. Second/What’s

　　more, ___________________. Last but not least/Finally, ___________ ____________________. And the social problem(如果是现象的话可以 用phenomenon) has aroused the great concern/care of our whole

　　society/world/all the people.

　　揭示含义/原因/结果 1 揭示含义/原因/结果 2 揭示含义/原 因/结果 3 (如果有的话) 第三段: 给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法 In my view/point of view(or As for me), we should take some

　　measures as follows to deal with the problems shown in the picture. First, we should__________. And then we have to/must__________.

　　Only in these ways can we solve the problem of___________.

　　具体措施 1 具体措施 2 具体的问题