新疆新源县第八中学2016高考英语备考复习课件：英语作文

　　My uncle experienced a bad accident yesterday. my uncle and his friends had great dinner together last night. My uncle didn’t drive back home until late at night. He was obviously drunk ,but he didn’t admit it and insisted on driving home himself. ?

　　My uncle soon found he couldn’t control his car and he could not see the road clearly. Then he lose sense of danger and he drove into a tree along the road and got seriously injured. ?

　　Luckily enough, Uncle was sent to the nearest hospital quickly. He woke on the hospital bed, and found a policeman was waiting for him. He told my uncle that his driving license would be revoked. ?

　　The dangerous driving after drinking almost killed him! I hope public should obey the traffic rules .

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　　My uncle experienced a bad accident yesterday. It all began last night when my uncle and

　　his friends had great dinner together. It was not until late at night that my uncle started to drive back home. It is obvious that He was drunk, but by no means would (意愿) he admit it and insisted on driving home himself.

　　My uncle was so drunk that he soon found the car out of his control and he was not capable of seeing the road clearly. What was worse, alcohol made him lose sense of danger. As a result, his car knocked into a tree along the road , seriously damaged. ?

　　When引导的定语从句 强调句和not until句型

　　相结合。 It is obvious that

　　否定词在句首倒装

　　So…that 结果状语从句 Out of control作宾补 Be capable of

　　过渡词 what was worse As a result Knock

　　into

　　分词作状语

　　Luckily enough, Uncle was

　　rushed to the nearest hospital. He came back to life on the

　　hospital bed, only to find a

　　policeman waiting for him. The

　　officer told him that his driving

　　license would be revoked.

　　The dangerous driving after

　　drinking almost cost him his life! public awareness are supposed to be raised to obey the traffic rules .

　　Only in this way can we lead a better life with no regret remaining.

　　Be rushed to sp Come back to life Only to do表出乎意料的结果状语//分词作定语

　　Cost sb. sth Be supposed to do Raise one’s awareness of Only放句首倒装 Lead a better life With复合结构 Further polish your essay on happiness and rewrite it on your composition exercise after class. * * * * * * * *

　　My

　　university

　　life

　　University is our life the most important for us ，In my university life ，we can join some activities on other times ，I hope my university have many activity . we have to learn lesson and pass the computer class. give me chongdian, I want to become an artist ,my dream is become an artist. Now I have to hard study and to achieve my dream .I hope I will become a good

　　university student If I go to university. I will to do my like things I can to do many interesting

　　things, For university ,I have to hard study

　　come

　　on

　　. University life in my heart I think go to college is our dream , university life is difficult and important life , at school we should join in many interesting clubs and obtain happy

　　and we should join many activities It is a weak thing to grow up , when you study hard , you can also make yourself clever and clever by computer If I go to college I will do something I like ,such as reading , practising

　　grammar

　　I

　　know we must be study hard , so I believe I will be successful （蔺娟） Lead in What does a good composition consist of ? Good

　　composition 近年高考英语写作高分卷的五大特点 行文逻辑科学，条理性好；

　　巧用过渡词汇，逻辑性强；

　　巧用高级词汇和复杂句式，文章品味高；

　　妙用变通式表达，文章错落有致；

　　书写规范工整，整体效果好。 火眼金睛 Which one is better?

　　Why? She always sings while doing her work.

　　She always sings when she does her work.

　　After everything was finished, they began to

　　chat with the elderly people.

　　With everything

　　finished, they began to chat with the elderly people. I lost a book . Its cover is red.

　　I lost a book whose cover is red. （状从省略） (with复合结构) 定语从句 1. 2. 3. (A) (B) (A) (A) (B) (B) To his surprise, the little girl knows so many

　　things.

　　What surprises him is that the little girl knows

　　so many things.

　　I passed the English exam because of your help.

　　I

　　would have passed the English exam

　　but for your help.

　　(名词性从句) （虚拟语气） 4. 5. (A) (A) (B) (B) 6. (A) (B) The businessmen from over the world were present at the meeting.

　　Present at the meeting were the businessmen

　　from over the world.

　　(倒装句)

　　What are good sentences： 高级词汇：所学词块和短语

　　2.变换句式：三类从句（定语从句、 名词性从句、状语从句）祈使句，倒装句， 省略句，强调句，虚拟句及其他句式。

　　3.非谓语动词 概括总结 1. 通过使用网络与家人联系是很方便的。 It is convenient to keep in touch with your family by using the Internet. 2.我们所需要做的是冷静下来,反思我们的学习方法。

　　What

　　we need to do is to calm down and reflect our learning method. 3. 只有以这种方式， 我们才能进步。 Only in this way, can we make progress. 熟能生巧 Translate the sentences 走近高考范文 Fill in the blanks （2009 山东） 1.______________

　　(众所周知）that China is a country with a long history. 2._________________________________

　　(随着春节的临近），people will hold all varieties

　　of activities. 3. ___________________________________________

　　(自从我见过史密斯先生已经好久了）and I miss him a lot. It is well known With the Spring Festival drawing near It has been a long time since I saw Mr. Smith 2分 4分 5分 6分 3分 7分 2分题 用it做形式宾语： ★我们发现提高作文并不难，只要你掌握王老师教给我们的词汇和句型。 We will find it not difficult to improve our

　　composition, if we master the vocabulary

　　and sentence patterns.

　　用倒装句和定语从句翻译句子(2’)

　　出席这次会议的是王教授，他将做一个可再生资源的讲座。

　　______________________________________

　　_______________________________________

　　Present at the meeting is Mr. Wang, who will

　　give us a report about the renewable resoures 4分题

　　他花5块钱买了那本书。 ①He paid _________________________________. (1’)②He spent__________________________________. (1’)③He bought ________________________________. (1’)④The book_______________________________. (1’)

　　⑤He was__________________________________. (1’) 5 yuan for that book

　　一句多译 5 yuan on that book

　　that book with 5 yuan

　　cost him 5 yuan charged

　　5 yuan for that book. 5分题 10分题 Your tasks today To describe something according to pictures To learn how to write an article on what incident happened

　　How to write an essay on what happened according to picture? Detailed

　　information (Supporting ideas, details and examples) Part 1

　　Part 2

　　Part 3 Outline

　　Your ideas about your article (What is your description?) Your conclusion 请根据下面四幅图画内容，写一篇短文，记述昨天发生在你叔叔身上的事。 注意：1.词数150左右。2.参考词汇：吊销驾照revoke a driving license 小试牛刀 Key words and expressions

　　My uncle experienced a

　　had great dinner together

　　My uncle didn’t drive back home

　　because My uncle soon found he couldn’t control his car and Then…… Luckily enough……. and found ……. He told my uncle that………. * * * * * * * *