2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错58

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

　　1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

　　In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, richest man in the world, gave up studying in Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world．He set up a company and researching the computer software．An old saying go, “Interest is the best teacher．” I quite agree with this idea．I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl．I got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customs．To meet me curiosity, I read in English stories every day．It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day．As a result, I always did very well in English exam．Interest is the key of success．

　　2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：

　　1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　I will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago. One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale. They are quickly sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to food safety.

　　3.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除： 把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a bus. It was very

　　crowded and I had to stand. Besides me there was a woman held a little boy

　　in her arms. In front of her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be

　　sleeping. I heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with

　　the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man.

　　Beyond her expectations, the woman answered with a smile, “Be quiet. This

　　uncle must very tired because of hard work.” The young man must have

　　heard the word. His face turned red and offered one seat for the woman at once.

　　4.第三部分:写作(共两节,满分40分)

　　第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误.请在有错误的地方增加删除或修改某个单词.

　　增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词.

　　删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉.

　　修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在改词下面写上修改后的词.

　　注意:1.每次错误及其修改均仅限一词;

　　2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

　　例如:

　　It was very nice to get your invitation to spend∧ weekend with you.Luckily

　　the

　　I was completely then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8:00p.m

　　am

　　in Friday evening

　　on

　　Dear Diary,

　　Here I am in the middle of a city 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else.I love in the world.To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I an awfully tiring, but I know I’ll never fall sleep.

　　Good night and remember you .dear diary.is my only souvenir from. Me past the end only friend.

　　Yours,

　　Roedmary

　　第二节:书面表达满分(30分)

　　请以“One Thing I’m Pround

　　of”为题,用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文.记述一件你自己认为得意的事情.要求如下:

　　记述事情经过;

　　简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示.

　　注意:文章的标题已给出(不计词数).

　　One Thing I’m pround of

　　5.第三部分 写作（共两页，满分35分）

　　第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late agternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cupswithout handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.

　　第二节 书面表达（满分25分）

　　假定你是李华，自制一些中国结（Chinese knot）。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：

　　1.外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）

　　2.象征意义

　　3.价格

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3.开头语已为你写好。

　　第一节：

　　6.I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.

　　I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.

　　 试卷答案

　　1.In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, ∧richest man in the world, gave up

　　the

　　studying in Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world．He set up a company and researching the computer software．An old saying go, “Interest researched或去掉and

　　goes

　　is the best teacher．” I quite agree with this idea．I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl．I got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customs．xtremely

　　and

　　To meet me curiosity, I read in English stories every day．It seemed to be the best“meal” of a day．As a result, I always did very well in English exam．Interest is theexams

　　key of success．

　　2.1.story后加that/ which, 2. classmate — classmates, 3.enjoy 后加the, 4.our—their, 5.are—were, 6.but—and, 7.before—after, 8.to realize 去掉to, 9.strong—strongly, 10.pays—pay

　　3.

　　This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a

　　bus. It was very

　　删除

　　crowded and I had to stand. Besides me there was a woman held a little boy

　　Beside

　　holding

　　in her arms. In front of her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be

　　occupied

　　sleeping. I heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with

　　curiously

　　the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man.

　　that或去掉if

　　Beyond her expectations, the woman answered with a smile, “Be quiet. This

　　my

　　uncle must∧very tired because of hard work.” The young man must have

　　be

　　heard the word. His face turned red and offered one seat for the woman at

　　words

　　to

　　once.

　　4.

　　5.第二节

　　6.

　　1.holding----hold

　　此处used to意为：过去常常，to是不定式符号，故用动词原形。

　　2.passes----passed

　　根据前面was可知为一般过去时态。

　　3.much----well/ clearly

　　根据句意可知，我很清楚记得我的爷爷。此处very much是多的意思，不合题意。

　　4.shoulder----shoulders

　　根据常理，人有两个肩膀，故用复数。

　　5.toward----to/ into

　　根据句意，这里指：黑胡子变成白胡子。所以用短语turn to或turn into。

　　6.himself----him

　　句意：他的深沉的声音把他和别人区别开来。故用him。

　　7.he前加and

　　根据句中结构可知He had a deep voice…和he was strong and powerful是并列关系，故用and连接。

　　8.去掉fact前a

　　固定短语：in fact。

　　9.during----when

　　during为介词，后不能接句子；应用when这个连词引导时间状语从句。

　　10.never----ever

　　语义错误。根据句意：他是我认识的最温柔的人。可知将never改为ever。