2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错59

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

　　1.下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在该句下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：

　　1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realized my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

　　2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Dear Jenny,

　　Pm so worried when I see that you’re not a little tired and nervous about the coming College Entrance Examination; Here is some advices to help you prepare the coming exam.

　　Have enough sleep, whatever much work you have to do，or you’ll feel sleepy on an

　　occasion in class. A balanced diet will certainly help a lot. Having more fresh fruit and

　　vegetables every day are good for you. Which you know, a proper method of learning will

　　enable you to learn more and faster. To get better results, that is wise to be attentive and make

　　every effort to gain knowledge. And you were supposed to review your notes taking down after

　　class every day. Always remember to stay happily and optimistic so that you can be energetic

　　while doing the revision. I hope you’ll no longer feel tired and nervous.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours,

　　Li Ming

　　3.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Dear Alice,

　　I have just got a good news to tell you. I win a national prize for painting last week. My father was so pleasing that he suggested I go to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying there for half a month, visiting place of interest and practicing my English as well. We’ve been written to each other for nearly a year now. I have often dreamed of talk face to face with you.I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that time. Perhaps you will go out do some sightseeing together.

　　Best,Lily

　　4.短文改错

　　Snow came a bit later this year than usually. After school, we took a bus to go back home in noon. On the way, we were attracted by the amazing scenery — trees, houses, and even cars were covered with purely white snow. How desperately we want to play in the snow! However, when we got off the bus, we immediately ran to a square nearby to enjoy the very spirits what the snow brought us. Despite the cold weather, we had a great fun playing with the snow. Many passer-by watched us laughing and playing, with smiles on his faces. Occupying with our study every day, we would like to regard it a refreshing experience for us all.

　　5.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　We are going to take the College Entrance Exams in more than two months. Therefore, many students still don’t know how to balance their study, rest and physical exercises while preparing for the Exams. They usually devote too much time to go over their lessons, what results in poor health and low efficiency of learning.

　　As the proverb goes, early to bed and early to rise make a man healthy, wealthy and wise. We’d better leave us enough time to rest and sleep since it enables us learn our lessons more efficient. What’s more, a strong and healthy body is the base for our further study, future work and creative activities.

　　In brief, as we are preparing to the Exams, don’t forget that rest, exercise and study were equally important.

　　6.

　　下列文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Many teachers worried about the effects of television on young people． According to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school． Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves． No one worries much about the radio pro{;ram young people listen to, although radios can be very noise．Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials． On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown - ups to make children to want things that they don't real need．

　　试卷答案

　　1.

　　Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited ∧ a bus to come at a stop. 30

　　for

　　minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner

　　passed

　　foot

　　had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have

　　than

　　caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I

　　the

　　another

　　did

　　realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put

　　it

　　in.

　　possibly

　　w Now, henever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

　　losing

　　2.第二句：advices改成advice；prepare后加for。

　　第三句：whatever改成however；删去an。

　　第五句：are改成is。

　　第六句：Which改成As。

　　第七句：that改成it。

　　第八句：were改成are；taking改成taken。

　　第九句：happily改成happy。

　　3.

　　I have just got a(去掉) good news to tell you. I win （win→won）a national prize for painting last week. My father was so pleasing(pleasing→pleased) that he suggested I go to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying(staying→stay) there for half a month, visiting place(place→places) of interest and practicing my English as well. We’ve been written (written→writing) to each other for nearly a year now. I have often dreamed of talk (talk→talking)face to face with you.I imagine you’ll be at(at→on) vacation yourself by that time. Perhaps you(you →we) will go out (加to) do some sightseeing together.

　　Best,Lily

　　4.

　　Snow came a bit later this year than usually. After school, we took a bus to go back

　　usual

　　home in noon. On the way, we were attracted by the amazing scenery — trees, houses,

　　at

　　and even cars were covered with purely white snow. How desperately we want to play

　　wanted

　　in the snow! However, when we got off the bus, we immediately ran to a square nearby

　　Therefore

　　to enjoy the very spirits what the snow brought us. Despite the cold weather, we had

　　that

　　a great fun playing with the snow. Many passer-by watched us laughing and playing,

　　去掉

　　passers-by

　　with smiles on his faces. Occupying with our study every day, we would like to regard

　　their

　　Occupied

　　it ∧ a refreshing experience for us all.

　　as

　　5.

　　We are going to take the College Entrance Exams in more than two months.

　　Therefore(However), many students still don’t know how to balance their study, rest and physical exercises(exercise) while preparing for the Exams. They usually devote too much time to go(going) over their lessons, what(which) results in poor health and low efficiency of learning.

　　As the proverb goes, early to bed and early to rise make(makes) a man healthy, wealthy and wise. We’d better leave us(ourselves) enough time to rest and sleep since it enables us (加to)learn our lessons more efficient(efficiently). What’s more, a strong and healthy body is the base for our further study, future work and creative activities.

　　In brief, as we are preparing to(for) the Exams, don’t forget that rest, exercise and study were(are )equally important.

　　6.

　　Many teachers∧worried /about the effects of television on young people.According to

　　Worry/are worried

　　studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school． Many/some

　　Because∧so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability

　　of

　　删除

　　reading

　　to enjoy themselves．No one worries much about the radio proram young people

　　programs

　　listen to, although radios can be very noise．Teachers also wonder about the effects of noisy

　　television commercials． On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown - ups to make children to want things

　　删除

　　that they don't real need．eally