揭阳市2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（10）附参考范文

　　揭阳市2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（10）附参考范文

　　短文改错此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）；在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；该行错一个词，在错的词下划一个横线；在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　Li Ming, who has been working as postman for

　　．________

　　 two years, always wears a suit of green uniforms.

　　 ．________

　　 He worked with care as well as with effort. He

　　．________

　　serves for the people heart and soul. Every day he

　　．________

　　gets up early to deliver newspapers or magazines.

　　 ．________

　　He is so careful and he has never been wrong.

　　 ．________

　　One day he had to send a dead letter and it happened

　　 ．________

　　to be raining hardly outside. But he set out immediately．

　　 8．________

　　He had asked nearly everybody in the district after

　　．________

　　he tried to hand the letter to the right person.

　　．________

　　1．postman　a postman　．uniforms

　　uniform

　　3．workedworks　．for（删去）　．orand　．andthat

　　7．√　．hardlyhard　．afterbefore　．triedmanaged

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　　光明中学英语俱乐部最近在招聘英语角的组织者，假设你是李华，想申请成为英语角的组织者，请按下列要点写一封申请信：

　　1．擅长英语口语，参加过许多英语活动；

　　2．有信心做好这项工作；

　　3．申请成功后的打算。

　　注意：1．词数120左右；

　　2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　Dear Sir/Madam，

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　Dear_Sir/Madam，

　　I am Li Hua，a student in Senior One.I'm writing to apply for the position of the organizer of the English Corner.

　　I'm good at spoken English and often take part in various English activities.I am sure that this job will bring me a lot of experience in organizing activities and communicating in English.I believe I can be a successful organizer.If I become the organizer，I will organize a series of activities，such as English Song Singing Contest，English Lecture，English Movie Week and so on.

　　I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance.

　　Yours，

　　Li_Hua

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　　第二节

　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（　）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一个横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　Everyone can do something for our environment. For me, 76._______

　　I should try to save electricity in our daily life. For example,

　　77._______

　　if I am the last person leave the classroom in the evening,

　　78._______

　　I will always remember to turn on the lights. In order to

　　79._______

　　protect our forests, I will use paper wise. I should try

　　80._______

　　to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. I would

　　81._______

　　not use things like paper cup and disposable chopsticks

　　82._______

　　because they are made of wood. I believe that by doing all

　　83._______

　　these small things will improve our environment but help

　　84._______

　　make our world the much better place to live.

　　85._______

　　答案与解析

　　76. √

　　77.our→my。代词的错误。这里与主语保持一致，用my表示“在我的日常生活中”。

　　78. leave 前加to。非谓语动词的错误。这里用不定式做定语修饰the last person .

　　79. on→off。动词短语的错误。语境表示把灯关掉而不是打开，因此用turn on。

　　80. wise→wisely。副词的错误。用 而不是形容词做状语表示方式。

　　81. would→will。时态的错误。这里与语境保持一致，用一般将来时而不是过去将来时。

　　82. cup→cups。名词的错误。用复数名词cups表示泛指。

　　83.by删除。从句子结构看，这里的v.-ing结构做句子主语，应该将介词删除。

　　84. but→and连词的错误。这里表示顺接和递进关系，用连词and而不是but。

　　85. the→a。冠词的错误。这里表示“一个更好的地方”，用a better place而不是“那个更好的地方”；注意后面的place to live是正确的，可以将掉尾介词in省略。

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　　高考英语书面表达讲义：议论文写作

　　　7．The Most Important Thing in the World / money is everything

　　Directions：

　　A）Title：The Most Important Thing in the World

　　B）提示：有人认为，世界上最重要的东西是“钱”。许多人不同意这个看法。

　　请就这个问题谈谈你的意见。

　　C）Time limit：30minutes

　　D）Word limit：150～200words

　　E）Your composition must be written clearly on the Composition Sheet.

　　The Most Important Thing in the World

　　In my opinion，the most important thing in the world is TIME. However long one may live，his life consists of a certain number of years，and a year has only12months，a month30days and one day24hours.Once you waste one hour，you can not get it back no matter how much you would pay for it.

　　Even though you are the richest person in the world，you can not afford to waste your time，because it means that you are wasting your life.Even though you are the most powerful person in the world，one hour has60minutes for you just as for everyone else who struggles at the bottom of the society.

　　Some people think that the most important thing in the world is money.In their opinion，if you have enough money，you will have everything you want.I would like to ask them a simple question：Can you buy time？

　　The only thing with which we can win more time is efficiency.If you work with high efficiency，you can do more in a certain period of time than other people.

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　　3.下图描绘的是中国当前教育中存在的问题。请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述一下造成这种现象的原因并发表你的看法。

　　【参考范文】

　　3.

　　The two pictures look so similar at one glance, but they are totally different. In the first picture, a peasant boy, carrying a heavy bundle of rice straw hopes to have a school to attend. In the second picture, a student is on his way home from school, a heavy bag of books on his back. He wishes he didn’t have to go to school any more.

　　The two pictures show some problems in the present education system in China. In the poor countryside, there are no buildings for classrooms, let alone good teachers. They are sometimes forced to leave school because their families cannot afford the necessary fees. However, although the children in the cities can have regular education, they have to face endless homework, which puts so much pressure on them that some students don’t want to continue their studies.

　　Therefore, measures should be taken to deal with this problem. For one thing, things must be done to ensure that children in the poor areas can receive education. For another ,

　　We should try to reduce the pressure on the students. In a word, the whole society should work together to make some contributions to our education.

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　　假如你是新华中学的一名学生。你校拟招聘一名外籍教师。请根据下面的要求写一篇招聘启事。

　　对应聘者的要求：1．母语是英语，大学毕业；

　　2．身体健康，交际能力强；

　　3．有教学经验者优先，工资面议。

　　工作条件：1．学校交通便利，环境优美；

　　2．每周工作五天，提供住宿。

　　有意者请在八月底之前联系李老师。联系电话：010­88663528或发邮件至：Mrli2011@sohu.com。

　　注意：1．词数120左右；

　　2．参考词汇：应聘者applicant。

　　English Teacher Wanted________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　参考范文：

　　English Teacher Wanted

　　Xinhua Middle School plans to invite a foreigner to work as a teacher of English.The applicant should be a native speaker of English and has graduated from university.He or she should be healthy physically and mentally，with great ability to communicate with students.Teaching experience is preferred.He or she has to work 5 days a week.

　　Xinhua Middle School lies near the center of the city，so the traffic is very convenient.There is an apartment for foreign teachers to live in.

　　If you are interested，please contact Mr Li at Mrli2011@sohu.com before the end of August，2012．The salary can be discussed during the interview.

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　　(201*成都检测)

　　My father and I am taking a camping trip in July1.________

　　and August. We will travel for about two months but2.________

　　will tour the United States and parts of the Canada. We3.________

　　have decided to camp because it does not spend as much4.________

　　as vacationing in hotels, but we had to plan carefully. I5.________

　　think the car what we are going to drive is very small, so6.________

　　we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them7.________

　　and as few camping things as possibly. We will take some8.________

　　medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us, and also9.________

　　some food for picnics. I'm sure that we will have fun.10.________

　　答案与解析：

　　1．am→are　本句的主句是my father and I，所以谓语动词用复数形式。

　　2．but→and　此处表示的是顺承关系，而不是转折关系。

　　3．删去第二个the　一般情况下，表示国家的单个词语前不加冠词。

　　4．spend→cost　本句的主语不是人，而是it，所以用cost。

　　5．had→have　短文全篇叙述的都是现在和将来的情况。

　　6．what→that/which或删去what　“that/which we are going to drive”是定语从句，修饰先行词the car，关系代词在从句中作宾语，可以省略。

　　7．them→us　根据文章的开头部分可知这里指的是作者本人和作者的父亲，因此应用us。

　　8．possibly→possible　as...as possible表示“尽可能……”。

　　9．prevent前加to　此处是不定式短语作目的状语。

　　10．√

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　　***写作指导*********

　　多使用过渡性词语。这样使文章更加连贯、更具有逻辑性。

　　（1）表示增加的过渡词：also，and，and then，too，in addition，furthermore，moreover，again，on top ofthat，another，first second third等。

　　（2）表示时间顺序的过渡词：now，then，before，after，afterwards，earlier，lat er，immediately，soon，next，in afew days，gradually，suddenly，finally等。（3）表示空间顺序的过渡词：near（to），far（from），in frontof，behind，beside，beyond，above，below，tothe right left，around，outside等。

　　（4）表示比较的过渡词：in thesameway，justlike，justas等。

　　（5）表示对照的过渡词：but，still，yet，however，on theotherhand，onthecon trary，in spite of，even though等。

　　（6）表示结 果 和 原 因 的 过 渡 词：because，since，so，as a result，therefore，then，thus，otherwise等。

　　（7）表示目的的过渡词：forthisreason，forthispurpose，so that等。

　　（8）表示强调的过渡词：in fact，indeed，surely，necessarily，certainly，withoutanydoubt，truly，torepeat，aboveall，mostimportant等。

　　（9）表示解释说明的过渡词：forexample，in fact，in thiscase，foractually等。

　　（10）表示总结的过渡词：finally，atlast，inconclusion，asIhaveshown，inoth erword，in brief，in short，in general，on the whole，ashasbeen stated等。