郑州市 2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（13）附参考范文

　　郑州市 2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（13）附参考范文

　　Passage ***

　　Fred and I haven’t many in common. I sometimes　 . __________

　　wonder why we were friends at all. Fred is　 . __________

　　always busy make things. Everything he makes is　. __________

　　so perfect that I sometime feel envy at his skill.. __________

　　My trouble is that I’m one of those lazy people. . __________

　　Outside my work at the office, the only thing which　 . __________

　　interests me is listening to the music. I have a . __________

　　big collection of records but all day long the 8. __________

　　only thing I can think is when I’m going to　9. __________

　　get home listen to a new piece.. __________

　　【参考答案】Key 12 1) many--much　 2) 3) make

　　making 4) sometime--sometimes　 5) right　6) which – that 7) 8) but

　　and 9) think 后加about10) listen 前加to (2)(25 min.)

　　假定你在参加一场英语辩论赛。你是正方辩手，试用英语简要地表明自己的观点。词数：不少于120。

　　主题 Shall a senior student take a part­time job in holidays？

　　观点

　　1. 高中生重视功课，而对社会知道甚少。

　　2. 假期做兼职是很好的社会实践。

　　3. 通过书本学到的东西不如通过实践学到的东西有效。

　　4. 通过社会实践，我们可以在知识和能力两个方面取得进步。

　　5. 假期做兼职的报酬或多或少对家里有些帮助。

　　结论 高中生……

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　　【参考范文】One possible version：

　　Dear friends,

　　Here are my points. We students of today have to pay much attention to our lessons and know little of society though it's not our fault. A holiday is the best time to make up for that. Taking a part­time job is a good form of social practice. What is learned in books can't have the same deep effect on us as what is learned through experience. In social practice, we can surely make progress in both knowledge and ability. Besides, taking a part­time job, we may get paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say a senior school student should take a part­time job in holidays, if possible, of course.

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　　短文改错

　　(2010*保定调研)

　　Last Sunday I went to the Bird's Nest Stadium. At gate1.________

　　I happened to meet some young America tourists.I greeted2.________

　　to them in English and then we began to chat. From the chat3.________

　　I learned that they were college students traveling in Beijing4.________

　　but most of them were fond of Chinese culture. They were5.________

　　busy taking pictures and they seem to be much impressed by6.________

　　the changes which had been taken place in the past few years.7.________

　　After come out of the Stadium, we went to the Water Cubic(水立方)8.________

　　and had a good time there. We exchanged our email address so that9.________

　　we could write to each other later. They thanked us again and again.10.________

　　I was very glad to have the chance to practise my oral English.

　　答案与解析：

　　1．gate前加the　此处表示特指，指的是鸟巢体育馆的大门。

　　2．America→American　应该用形容词来修饰名词。

　　3．去掉第一个to　greet是及物动词，可直接加宾语，不必加to。

　　4．√

　　5．but→and　来北京和喜欢中国文化为并列关系而非转折，应用and表示并列。

　　6．seem→seemed　根据事情发生的时间last Sunday和全文的时态可知，此处也应用一般过去时。

　　7．去掉been　take place无被动语态。

　　8．come→coming　介词after后要用动名词形式。

　　9．address→addresses　交换的是双方的邮箱地址，故此处应用复数形式。

　　10．us→me　是“我”帮助了他们，因此用me。

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　　假设你将要参加学校举办的英语作文比赛，请你根据右图，写一篇120词左右的英语作文。内容包括：

　　1．描述图画的主要内容；

　　2．分析出现这种现象的原因；

　　3．谈谈我们应该如何保护地球，拯救野生动物。

　　参考词汇：北极熊polar bear；企鹅penguin

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　　参考范文：

　　From the picture we can see a polar bear sitting on a small piece of ice with a penguin on its head.It shows that our environment is worsening day by day and some wild animals are in great danger.

　　In recent years，with the development of science and technology，the Earth is faced with a variety of environmental problems，including global warming.As a result，many animals have lost their natural habitat.

　　I think it is time that we took effective measures to protect the environment.We should avoid using fossil fuel to reduce green house gas，and we can plant more trees to take in carbon dioxide.

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　　【2】

　　It’s easy to see how the sawfish got its

　　name．These frightful creatures can grow to be more than 6 meters long．Their bodies are flat and winged，like underwater airplanes．And their noses are shaped like chainsaws．

　　Sawfish are food hunters of the sea．When a sawfish is hungry，it waves its sharp­toothed snout (口鼻部) through a group of fish．Then，it lifts its nose and uses its mouth to draw the injured victims．

　　Hardy (适应力强的)population of sawfish thrived in warm waters along coastlines around the world for thousands of years．Over the past 200 years，however，human actions have severely endangered sawfish．Threats include fishing nets that trap the huge animals，often by mistake．

　　Some people collect sawfish’s snouts as prizes：One snout recently sold for nearly $ 1,600 online．In some Asian cultures，the toothy snouts are used in ceremonies to drive evil and disease away．And sawfish are also delicious．A growing demand in Asia for the fish’s fins for a pricey soup has contributed to the fish’s loves．Compared with other fish，sawfish give birth late in life and at slow rates，which makes it hard for them to recover from overfishing．

　　New efforts now aim to restore sawfish population．Beginning next month，an international agreement will provide protection for all seven of the world’s sawfish species．Scientists are hoping that it’s not too late to save the sawfish．

　　Until 1998，“this fish had never been formally studied in the United States，”says Tonya Wiley of the Mote Marine Laboratory in Sarasota，Fla．“We didn’t know such basic things as where they live，what habitat they use，how often they breed，how many young they have—even what age sawfish are when they begin breeding．”

　　Through historical studies and field research，scientists have become aware of how much the fish’s numbers have decreased．Today，there may be 90 percent fewer sawfish than there used to be．Wiley estimates that only 3,000 to 6,000 sawfish remain in US waters．Sawfish

　　1．

　　Size 2．

　　3．Body：Flat and winged Nose：Like a chainsaw

　　Ways to hunt for food Attacking fish with 4．

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　　Drawing the injured victims with its mouth．

　　sawfish’s disappearance 6．

　　Sawfish’s snouts relates business．

　　Asians’ interest in eating fish．

　　Its 7．

　　and slowly which makes it hard to recover from overfishing．

　　8．

　　Only 10% sawfish left

　　3,000 to 6,000 remain in US waters

　　Efforts 9．

　　Measure

　　To restore sawfish population 10．

　　to all seven of the world’s sawfish species

　　1．Descriptions/Features/Characteristics　2．Shape/Appearance　3．Over 6­meter long

　　4．its sharp­toothed snout　5．Factors/Reasons for/Causes of　6．People’s fish­catching activities　7．giving birth/breeding late 8．Present/Today’s situation　9．Aim/Goal/Purpose　10．Offering protection

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　　下列图描述的是Mr．and Mrs white购物后，到停车场取车时发生了一场误会。请用英语将下列图示叙述清楚。短文必须包括图画的主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使其连贯完整。

　　词数80—100。

　　参考范文

　　After shopping, Mr. and Mrs. White went back to the car park. Mr. White carried a lot of packets in his arms. And just as his hands were full, Mrs. White asked him where he put his key to the car. He told her that it was in his pocket. But she was unable to find the key in his right pocket. Mr. White told her it was in his left pocket and she got it. But when she was unlocking the door, the key just didn't fit in it. Mr. White was wondering what had gone wrong, when the owner of the car came up, asking angrily, "What are you doing to my car?" It was then that they realized it was a wrong car that was exactly like theirs.

　　Mr.

　　White answered, "We are very sorry, we've made a mistake."

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