湖南省长沙县实验中学2016届高三英语二轮复习书面表达复习重点话题指导专题22 自然灾害话题指导（学生版）

　　实例指导1—灾害

　　Class Committee

　　【参考范文】

　　Committee

　　实例指导2——捐款感谢

　　【写作任务】

　　假如你是李华，是发生8.0级地震的汶川县的一名中学生，下面是你灾后的经历：

　　1、目睹了人们奋不顾身救人，及时地运送食品及衣物。

　　2、在众多陌生人的帮助下，找回了自己失散的父母，也已经重返了校园, 正在重建家园。

　　3、现在我们更加珍惜这难得的学习机会，也更懂得尊重和体谅他人，学会了互相关心和帮助

　　4、要努力学习，用实际行动回报给更多的人

　　请你就以上内容向报社写一封信，反映灾后的情况，并对来自各方面的帮助表示感谢。

　　注意：1、字数：120-150

　　2、书信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear editor,

　　I’m a senior student that has experienced a great earthquake. I wrote to you to express my thanks to those who helped us when we suffered the disaster. During this time, I witnessed many strangers devoted their efforts to saving lives, providing food and clothes regardless of their own safety. Without their help, I couldn’t find my parents in such a short time, which makes me excited. Besides, only few days passed before the students returned to classrooms to have classes. New houses are also being reconstructed and it is not long before we moved into our new houses.

　　As a result, we all treasure the opportunity of studying in the classroom. The help from others taught us how to respect others and take others into consideration. It was also the help from strangers that made us realize the importance of helping and caring for each other facing disaster.

　　Now, I think what we should do is to study harder and help more people in return.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　实例指导3—— 捐款通知

　　【写作任务】

　　Remember to come on time.

　　Students’ Union

　　【参考范文】

　　NOTICE

　　Recently， an earthquake measuring 8.0 on the Richter scale jolted Wenchuan County, Sichuan Province in southwest China, resulting in many deaths. Unfortunately, we cannot prevent an earthquake from happening, but if we identified potential risks ahead of time and made advance planning, many lives would be saved. So this is the reason why our school has decided to invite experts to give a lecture. It will involve how to protect yourself and guarantee your safety before, during or after an earthquake. It starts at 2 pm, May 18 in the great hall and lasts about one and a half hour. All the students are required to take part in the lecture on time. Besides, paper and a pen are also needed in case you write down some important points. I hope everyone present will benefit a lot from it.

　　Remember to come on time.

　　Students’ Union

　　实战演练

　　假如你校正在开展"秋季防火"安全教育活动。请根据下面的提示,为你校校报英文专栏写一篇题为"A Forest Fire"的报道,并发表个人看法。(词数:120左右)

　　1. 时间:昨日深夜

　　2. 地点:大山林场(Dashan Timber Land)

　　3. 起因:一个过路人乱丢烟头(cigarette end)

　　4. 经过:消防队员立即赶到现场,经过5小时的奋战,终于控制住了火势

　　5. 后果:1/3的森林被烧毁,一人死亡,两名消防队员受伤

　　A Forest Fire

　　A terrible fire broke out in Dashan Timber Land at midnight yesterday. On hearing the news, the firefighters hurried there at once. Although the fire was very big and the smoke was heavy, they bravely fought against it. The fire lasted for five hours before the firefighters were able to bring it under control. To everyone’s sorrow, almost one third of the forest was destroyed in the fire. Worse still, one person was killed and two firefighters were badly injured. According to research, the fire was started by a live cigarette end thrown carelessly by a passer-by. The

　　Many people prefer to travel by air. This is because air travel has some advantages. In the first place, airplane, the miracle created by man, is the fastest means of transport. Secondly, traveling by air is convenient and comfortable. Friendly air hostesses are affectionate and considerate. They look after passengers all the way to their destinations. Moreover, on long distance flights there are films and music for people to entertain themselves.

　　As a popular saying goes, “Everything has two sides.” The same is true of air travel. For one thing, air travel costs a great deal. The average Chinese are not rich enough to afford expensive air fares. So they prefer to take a train, which saves a lot of money. For another, although passengers are assured（保证）of their safety, they are still

　　worried about it during the journey because flying always involves more or less risk.

　　写作内容

　　概括短文的内容要点，该部分的字数大约30词左右。

　　就“外出旅游采用乘飞机的方式好吗”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点，该部分的字数大约120词左右。

　　外出旅游的交通方式有多种；

　　人们对于乘飞机方式有不同的看法；

　　如果你去旅游你会采用何种交通方式？为什么？

　　你可以用实例或其它方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料。

　　人民也向受灾国家和人民伸出救助之手。假设你是班长，在全班提出倡议，向灾区人民捐款。用英语写一篇口头倡议，包括以下内容:

　　1.受灾情况简介;

　　2.尽微薄之力，奉献爱心;

　　3.捐款地点（学校门口捐款箱）。

　　注意：

　　1.词数：100左右；

　　2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.参考词汇：海啸tsunami捐款donate v.donation n.倡议propose v.proposal n.

　　参考答案

　　Everybody,may I have your attention,please?Here I’d like to make a proposal to you.As you know,at the end of 2004 a strong earthquake happened in the Indian Ocean,causing a terrible tsunami.The tsunami badly hit several countries in the Southeast Asia,leaving over one hundred thousand people dead and more than millions of people homeless.They are in great danger,asking for help.Now many countries,including China are trying their best to help them.As middle school students,we have duty to help those in trouble.Let’s do what we can to give them help.There is a donation box at the school gate.Please put your pocket money in it as soon as possible.You will be appreciated.

　　That’s all.Thank you.　

　　近来，你校开展“献爱心，送温暖”活动，号召广大学生向贫困或受灾地区捐款捐物。请你参考下列表格要点提示，以“捐款还是捐物”为题写一篇100-120字的英语短文。可适当增加内容。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

　　参考词汇：生活必需品 daily necessities

　　关于捐款 关于捐物

　　赞成 1．捐款可以直接帮助人们购买生活必需用品或用于重建家园等。 1．捐物可以旧物利用。

　　反对 2．中学生无生活来源，无钱捐献。 2．捐物可能造成浪费，因为有些人得到的捐物并非自己所需要的物品。

　　We often give money to the people in poor or disaster-stricken areas．But some students___________

　　作文评分原则

　　1.本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。

　　2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

　　近来，长江中学开展“献爱心，‘送沮暖”活动，号召广大学生向贫困或受灾地区捐款捐物。请你参考下列表格要点提示，以“捐款还是捐物”为中心写一篇120词左右的英语短文；可适当增加内容。

　　关于捐款 关于捐物

　　捐款可以直接帮助人们购买生活必需用品或用于重建家园等;

　　中学生无生活来源,无钱捐献. 捐物可以旧物利用;

　　捐物可能造成浪费,因为有些人得到的捐物并非自己所需要的物品.

　　参考词汇：生活必需品daily necessities

　　One possible version:

　　We often give money to the people in poor or disaster-stricken areas. Some students don't think it a good way to help people there .However ,some prefer helping the unfortunate with money. In their opinion, money can be used to buy daily necessities and can help people rebuild their hometowns ,while

　　I was on my way to the Taiyetos Mountains．The sun was setting when my car broke down near a remote and poor village．Cursing my misfortune, I was wondering where I was going to spend the night when I realized that the villagers who had gathered around me were arguing as to who should have the honor of receiving me as a guest in their house．Finally, I accepted the offer of an old woman who lived alone in a little house．While she was getting me settled into a tiny but clean room, the head of the village was tying up his horse to my car to pull it to a small town some 20 kilometres away where there was a garage．

　　I had noticed three hens running free in my hostess's courtyard and that night one of them ended up in a dish on my table．Some villagers brought me goat's cheese and honey．We drank together and talked merrily till far into the night．

　　When the time came for me to say goodbye to my friends in the village, I wanted to reward the old woman for the trouble I had caused her．

　　[写作内容]

　　学校举行了英语阅读读后感交流活动。阅读了上述故事后，你准备写一篇英语读后感的稿件以便明天发言。内容要求如下：

　　1．以约30个词概括本文的要点；

　　2．然后以约120个词谈谈你的感受，内容包括：

　　（1）表达帮助别人或在需要时得到别人帮助的感受；

　　（2）结合汶川地震、玉树地震等灾害发生时，你或你的朋友听到或看到的感人的事情，表达自己的观点。

　　（3）呼吁在别人困难时伸出援手。

　　[写作要求] 1．在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

　　2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　[评分标准]

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

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