湖南省长沙县实验中学2016届高三英语二轮复习书面表达复习重点话题指导专题16 素质教育话题指导（教师版）

　　实例指导1—规范高中补习办学

　　【写作任务】

　　继严禁公办高中学校招收复读生以后，山东省教育厅去年七月份又出台了规范高考补习学校办学行为的通知，要求复读生晚间、双休日不得上课，学生每天睡眠时间不能少于8个小时。

　　你认为这种做法有什么意义?请你用英语写一篇120—150词的短文谈谈自己的看法。

　　本文要求围绕山东省教育厅出台的规范高考补习学校办学行为的通知即要求复读生晚间、双休日不得上课，学生每天睡眠时间不能少于8个小时这一话题来写，我们可以分三部分来写。第一部分：

　　引出话题。这部分考生容易犯的错误是把写作背景当写作要点来写。所以，在写作时一定要注意。第二部分：

　　谈谈出台这项政策的意义。我们可从以下几方面来考虑(1)减轻了学生的学习压力，增强了学生的自信心；

　　(2)有利于学生的成长与身心健康；(3)为每一位考生提供了发展自己的平台。第三部分：谈谈自己的看法。

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　　写作时要注意条理清楚和上下文的衔接，恰当地运用高级词汇和重点句型，为文章增添亮点。【学生习作】

　　At present, return students in Shandong Province are not required to stay at school at night and

　　weekends. They have two days off per week and spend enough time ①to sleep every day.

　　As a matter of fact, it's of great benefit to all the students. For one thing, it's good for students to build stronger and healthier bodies because it's very import for teenagers to grow up. For another, it helps studeents reduce pressure on study, which is ②benefit to their health and self-'confidence. Last but not least, all students have the same schedule, which provides them equal opportunity of study. In other words, the competititon among students that they are

　　③admited to universities will be fair.

　　1 hold the view that this regulation is good for students as well as teachers, which will contribute to a harmonious atmosphere of study in the long run.

　　【教师点评】

　　本篇习作结构比较好，内容充实，结构紧凑。

　　1．开篇点题做得很好，上下文衔接很自然，同时还运用了一些高级词汇、短语结构与重点语法点。本文最大的亮点在于多处使用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句。

　　2．文章在列举出台政策的意义时条理清晰，使读者看起来一目了然。

　　文章的不足之处在于多处出现了知识性错误如：①处应为短语spend time doingsth， ②处应为短语be benefical to ，③处的admit的过去分词应该双t加ed。 如此多的知识性错误给人感觉是作者的基功不够扎实，写作中应尽量避免这一点。

　　实例指导2---高考分数“隐私化”

　　【写作任务】

　　山东省高考分数查询时要输入身份证号码等验证码才能进入电话和网站的查询系统。早在分数公布之前，山东就发布禁令，要求高考分数只能提供给考生个人，禁止各地表彰奖励高考升学率，禁止有关高考录取数量的考核、奖励与公布。请你针对山东高考分数“隐私化’’这一做法谈谈此做法的意义及自己的看法。用英语写一篇120-150词的短文。

　　2、确定主题，写出提纲。根据审题得来的信息和内容要点，确定文章的主题，然后外出提纲。同时要注意认真回顾题目要求，保证提纲是紧紧围绕题目要求所写。根据本写作任务的要求，考生可很容易地了解到如下信息：(1)谈高考分数隐私化这一做法的意义 ，本部分从以下几个角度来写①实行高考分数“隐私化”是破解高中应试教育难题的一个措施②打破各地、各学校之间排名的基础，釜底抽薪，治理应试之风③把对高中教育、学生成长产生重大意义的高中教师从追求升学率的压力中解脱出来，学校也敢于吸引特长生来学习，有利于各所高中形成百花齐放的教学特色。(2)谈谈对这一做法的看法。

　　3、组织语言，展开写作。根据所列提纲按一定顺序进行写作。写作时要注意以下几方面：①运用熟悉的英语词汇、句型等。注意长短句结合，简单句与复合勾结合。对于没有把握的地方要变换说法，或另辟蹊径。②灵活地运用英语思维，避免汉语式的思维。语言要准确，要符合英语习惯。③衔接紧凑，过渡自然。符合要求，注意书写。认真检查，查缺补漏。

　　【学生习作】

　　Nowadays，the scores of university entrance examlnation

　　are regarded as

　　individual

　　privacy．Students have to put in their number ofi identincation cardw when they want to know their scores．Great Changes have taken place since then．

　　The scores of university entrance examination as individual privacy of great significance in educatlon．Firstly，this can help quality –oriented educatlon put into practice better．Secondly，this rule protects students’ and teachers’privacy from biing of fended．Grades are not the only standard of assessing their abilny，which makes them feel more comfortable．Besides，this also reduces students’ stress．Last but not 1east，this can help students develop their innovation abilty．

　　In my opinion，we should pay more attention to the growth of students．Therefore，the rule that results of university entrance examination are recognized as indidual priivacy is

　　good for us．In brief,

　　it can make students at ease to some degree．Only in this way can every student grow healthily and happily.

　　实例指导3— Studying Abroad

　　【写作任务】

　　面对当前中学生“出国热”，请你以Studying Abroad为题，谈谈中学生出国留学的利与弊。(可以从以下几方面考虑，但不一定要面面俱到：年龄、生活经验、自理能力、生活学习费用、语言学习环境、传播民族文化、学习同外先进科学技术)。词数：150左右。

　　【写作指导】

　　该写作题日要求写——篇叙述文，叙述中学生出国留学的利与弊，并说明原因。文章可

　　采取分段写作的方式。首先，总体概括当前学生“出同热”的现象和理由，然后讲述出国的

　　“利”和理由，接着叙述出国的“弊”和理由，最后总结“利与弊”。

　　短文叙述当前中学生的出国情况，因而应使用一般现在时。此文所涉及的词汇和句型有：1． delighted

　　2．On one hand… on the other hand….

　　3. acquire

　　4．communicate with

　　5. have a great advantage over…

　　6．approve of

　　7．remind

　　8．disappointed

　　9. concentrate On

　　10 depend on

　　11．1ack

　　12．aa a result

　　13．in a word

　　14．rely on

　　[组句成篇]

　　组句成篇时要注意句子之间的衔接和文章的连贯性。如用in recent years引出话题；用on one hand和on the other hand引出中学生出国的“利与弊”并叙述其理由；最后用in a word进行总结并表达自己的看法。

　　【参考范文】

　　1. Recently we had a heated discussion on whether students should study abroad.

　　2. Some people think it necessary to go abroad.

　　3. In my opinion, studying abroad may /may not be good for someone.

　　4. While students are abroad, they usually need more money than they think.

　　5. However, if our parents can afford to send us abroad, we should put our studies in the first place.

　　6. Some students believe there are many good effects.

　　7. As the saying goes , every coin has two sides.

　　实例指导4— How to Reduce the Stress

　　【写作任务】

　　目前越来越多的高中生在学校总感到有压力。请你根据提示，用英语为你班的墙报写一篇约130词的英语短文，向同学们们介绍减压的方法。

　　1．无论在学习中遇到什么困难，保持良好的心态；相信自己通过努力能够学好各门课程；欣赏自己的微小进步。

　　2．充分分利用自己的兴趣抵消压力。假如擅长数学的话，当记忆英语单词感到紧张时，改做有趣的数学题。

　　3．户外做体育锻炼直到感到疲劳，或躺下来听轻音乐，有助于缓解压力。

　　How to reduce the senior students' stress in their studies is what we are often talking about. Here is some advice for students .

　　Firstly , They must keep in a good mood and never be nervous or worded when they meet difficulties in their studies. It is important to believe that they can learn all subjects well by studying hard and enjoy their progress even if there is a little.

　　“Here is…”为表示“存在”的句型，用来表示提出建议，就像把这些建议直接呈现在读者眼前一样，富有吸引力。

　　5. Secondly, they should take advantage of their best interest.

　　本句中的“take advantage of”意为“利用”，有“利用某种优势”的含义，用在本文中，表示利用个人的学科兴趣优势。

　　6. For example, if they are good at math. they can do a few interesting math exercises when they begin to feel it difficult to remember English words.

　　本句结构较复杂，含有if引导的条件状语从句中和when引导的时间状语从句。句首加“for example”，表示举例说明问题。

　　7. Thirdly, they will forget all stressful things after they take part in physical exercise outdoors till tired or he down and listen to pieces of light music.

　　本句结构较复杂，含有由after 引导的的时间状语从句和till引导的时间状语从句，而且在由till引导的时间状语从句中采用了省略句式，完整的句子是“till they are tired.”。

　　纵观全文，具有以下特点：

　　1． 多数句子采用了复合句形式，某些从句采用了省略句式，是书面语言的比较高级的表达形式，体现了语法的运用能力。

　　2． 句子开头用firstly, secondly 和last 来说明各条建议，条例清晰，有条不紊。

　　3．选词恰当，例如take advantage of , are good at ,enjoy ,whatever 等。

　　实例指导5—高三学生是否应该上体育课

　　【写作任务】

　　目前，由于高考的原因，很多学校不再为高三学生开设体育课。请根据下表提示，以“高三学生是否应该上体育课”为话题，写一篇英语短文发表你的看法。

　　赞同 反对

　　1．高三学生压力大，上体育课可以使学生劳逸结合，提高学习效率。

　　2． 做运动不但可以强身健体，还可以增进友谊。 1．高三学生时间紧迫，没有时间上体育课。

　　2． 上完课后学生很兴奋，很难迅速地进入学习状态，对学习有不利影响。

　　你的看法：……

　　【写作指导】

　　1．词语搜索：

　　heated; discussion; majority; PE class; devote…to …, relax; effectively; build sb up; character; deepen; friendship ; a waste of time; calm down; have an effect on. ;be good for ;consider; necessary; important; take … into consideration

　　2． 句型搜索：

　　We are for … (我们赞同……); We are against/object to... (我们反对……); As is known to all... (众所周知……) ; It is.. for sb to do... (某人作甚么怎么样); It takes time for sb to do... (某人花费时间做……)

　　1) Last. week, our class had a heated discussion on whether Senior 3 students Should have PE classes.【参考范文】

　　Last week, our class had a heated discussion on whether we Senior 3 students should have PE classes. The results are as follows.

　　The majority of us think we should have PE classes. As is known to all, we Senior 3 students devote all our time to our study, so we should have some time to relax. Having PE classes is a good way f9r us to relax. If we have PE classes, we can study more effectively. Besides, taking exercise can not only build up our bodies but also build our characters. What's more, it can deepen our friendship. However, some are against it. They think we should be busy with our study and it is a waste of time having PE classes. Meanwhile, it will take us a long time to calm down after having PE classes, which has a bad effect on our study.

　　Personally, it is necessary as well as important for us to have PE classes. It is good for both our tudy and our health.

　　实例指导6—校园生活变化假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Bob正在考虑来中国学习,但是他听说中国学生的学习生活非常紧张,经常考试,为此他感到很忧虑。请你给Bob写一封E-mail(词数不少于120),向他介绍国家提倡素质教育以后,你们校园生活所发生的巨大变化。

　　写作分析:

　　1. 本次写作任务是一篇书信体裁的作文。它要求学生能够将所学的知识充分运用到实际生活中去,能够清晰准确地用英语传达信息。

　　2. 本封信的内容是向你的一个外国朋友介绍你的校园生活。文章以第一人称为主,时态使用一般过去时和一般现在时。

　　3. 进行写作时,首先要问候对方；其次介绍原来国内中学生的学习状况；接下来介绍现在国内中学生的学习生活,包括课堂活动和课外活动两个方面；最后对Bob来中国学习表示欢迎。

　　4. 虽然题目要求写出国家提倡素质教育前后中学生学习生活的变化,但是切忌没有重点。要着重描述目前校园生活的多姿多彩。可适当发挥,增添细节。

　　初稿:

　　Dear Bob,

　　Hi! I heard that you want to come to China. I’m very happy to hear that.

　　  Now, I will tell you something about my school life. In the past, students had to face lots of examinations. We had many classes, homework and exams. The school life was very tiring. Besides, too much homework left us little time to rest. So we often felt sleepy in class. One night, I even fell asleep while doing my homework. Now, the school life turns colorful. In class, students can discuss the questions. Sometimes students can play the role of the teacher. Students have many kinds of activities after class. We read interesting books, do some sports, join in English Corner and so on. This kind of school life is interesting.

　　Welcome to China! Welcome to our school. I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.

　　I’ve received your letter, and I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China to study.

　　What you heard in the past about our schooling is true. We used to have a lot of homework every day, even on weekends and vacations. Having endless exams was another characteristic of our school.

　　However, now we have mastered studying, and our school life is getting more and more colorful and interesting. In class, we are active in discussing and solving problems. Sometimes one of the students is asked to teach other students. I love this kind of teaching method —it makes me feel I am a great student. After class, we enjoy a variety of activities, such as dancing, making speeches, and joining in English Corner. As far as I know, everyone is happy with their lives in our school.

　　I hope you come to my school to study. I’m sure that you will soon like it and we will become very close friends.

　　这封邮件格式正确,内容衔接恰当,给人一气呵成之感。介绍素质教育改革前后的状况时,主次分明,详细生动。最让人称赞的是,本文人情味很浓,读起来好像真的是给自己的一个朋友写信。这也是英语新课程标准对写作的新要求,即增加了情感因素。在准确流畅表达写作要领的同时,适当增加句子的人情味,使文章读起来更亲切,完全达到与目标读者进行交流的目的。例如:"As far as I know, everyone is happy with their lives in our school."表示作者对现在生活的喜悦心情。"I hope you can come to my school to study ... we will become very close friends."表示作者对朋友的浓厚情谊。

　　computer lessons. Also, I can go to bed earlier.

　　9. But now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raised by the teachers. After class, we enjoy different kinds of activities instead of doing endless homework.

　　10. I’m sure that our school life will be-come more and more colorful and interesting.

　　[实战演练]

　　随着素质教育的实施；中学生的假期越来越多，每周在校五天，周末双休。双休日期间，

　　有的同学看电视，有的上网，有的去购物，利用周末去锻炼身体或去图书馆看书学习的却很少、请你就中学生如何过双休日写一篇120一150词的英语短文来谈谈你的看法。

　　(参考范文见下期A4版。)

　　Recently, there is a heated discussion on how to spend weekends for middle school students: It is said that few students to cncentrate on their schoolwork. Instead, they prefer to surf the Internet, wati:h TV, go shopping rather than take part in sports games.

　　As far as l'm concerned, students are now free from heavy burden but their spare time is well arranged. They are expected to spend more time on what they have learned instead of hanging out. Moreover, they can spend their weekends not only on green fields but also in the libraries to build up themselves physically and mentally. Besides, students should take more interest to open their eyes and sharpen their brains so that they can become more creative eventually. All this will contribute a lot to a well-informed and qualified teenager.

　　In conclusion, students should try their best to do many colorful and meaningful activities on weekends.

　　　假若一个新西兰教育参观团要到你校访问 ， 他们想了解中国教育的基本情况，请根据以下图表和所给提示，用英语写一篇 120 字左右的短文，为来客介绍当今中国教育的基本情况。

　　Education System in China Today

　　Education in China today has been developing rapidly. Most children start school by the age of six. They spend five or six years in primary school and three years in junior middle school， which are compulsory education.

　　After that， some can attend professional school for two to three years before work. Some attend senior middle school for three years. Students have to pass a series of examinations before entering a college or university. The college or university life lasts two to four years. Now part of the cost is provided by with their families， although students can get the support from the college. After they graduate， they can go and find jobs.

　　Though great changes have taken place in the fields of education in China， there is still much to be improved.

　　假如你叫李燕。最近你班举行了一场以“教师应该收礼物吗？”为主题的讨论。请根据以下提示给报社写一封信，介绍讨论的情况并补充A、B两种观点的原因。

　　A、40％的同学认为老师不应该收学生任何礼物，因为……

　　B、60％的同学认为老师可以有条件地收学生送的礼物，如不贵重，学生自己做的没有交易意图的小礼物等，因为…….

　　注意：1、词数：100左右。

　　2、注意格式。

　　一二年级小学生不得留书面家庭作业。其他年级书面作业每天不超过１小时；初中书面作业总量不超过1.5小时；高中布置作业要涵盖所有学习领域且总量不超过2小时。请谈谈你对该规定的看法。

　　Recently, a new regulation on students’ homework is released in Shandong province, which says that pupils in Grade1 and 2 in primary school will have no after-class homework. The homework in higher grades will be not more than one hour. Students in junior middle school will be happy with homework not more than one and a half hours. For senior middle school students, the maximum is two hours. This is good news for students.

　　Nowadays, most students still have too much homework to do, which does harm to their development. The new regulation can free students from homework, in which case they have more free time to do whatever they like or take part in all kinds of activities. Only in this way can they live a healthy life both physically and mentally.

　　我们学校开设了新课程，包括音体美的各个课程都已经开齐，为了提高同学们的学习热情和端正学习态度，我们班展开了讨论，请根据讨论的内容写一篇120―150词的短文。

　　Recently , new courses have been started in our school , including Music ,P.E and Arts . In order to improve the students’ interesting on learning new courses , our class we held a class meeting to discuss whether Music ,P.E and Arts were important or not .

　　Some students thought that Music ,P.E and Arts were not important in our study . Firstly , Music ,P.E and Arts have a small mark when we have exams to enter a advanced school . Second , learning them will influence other major courses’ learning .