湖南省长沙县实验中学2016届高三英语二轮复习书面表达复习重点话题指导专题15 生活习惯话题指导（教师版）

　　实例指导1— How to make writing about First Aid

　　     【写作任务】

　　一天放学后，张磊和凌峰看到一位骑车的老人摔了下来，伤了腿，流着血，不少人围了过去。有人建议将老人抬到树下，张磊不同意，说不能动，要检查一下。这时老人没有呼吸了，张磊让凌峰给急救中心打电话，他为老人做人工呼吸，另一工人帮助止血。没过十分钟，老人开始能动弹了。急救中心的医生们赶到，说张磊做得对。

　　注意：1. 开头已经给出

　　2. 字数：120—150

　　One day,

　　after school was over,

　　Zhang Lei and Ling Feng were walking in the street when they suddenly saw an old man fall off his bicycle.

　　3. 本文应该属于记叙文写作范畴，因此时态相对统一：多用一般现在时和一般过去时，有时为了表达的需要会在个别地方采用其他时态；一般采用客观表述，避免主观色彩；叙述格式比较固定。

　　4.用过渡词将上下文的逻辑关系体现出来。需要注意的是：使用上述过渡性词必须根据上下文需要的原则，力求自然，决不可牵强附会，让人感觉别扭。

　　5. 用浅显易懂的语言，通俗形象的文字表述，表述要客观准确、严谨，不能随意发挥。

　　●串联词语：fall off；first aid；breathe；ought to；mouth-to-mouth way；First Aid Centre；handkerchief；bleeding；within

　　●句型搜索：

　　1. sb. got badly injured /hurt  in the accident.

　　2. Be quick! His noise is

　　bleeding  

　　3. Don't rub the burned area，as this may break any blisters(水泡) and   the wound may get infected

　　4. It shows that a knowledge of first aid can make a real difference

　　5.It was sb’s quick action and knowledge of first aid that saved Ms Slade's life．

　　6. …saw an old man fall off his bicycle.

　　7. … suggested the old man be taken somewhere in the shade of a tree.

　　8. Leave the old man where he was.

　　       Another young man helped press a handkerchief onto the bleeding point．Within ten minutes, the old man began to move a little and the doctors and the nurses from the First Aid Centre arrived. They all said that Zhang Lei had done the right thing.

　　实例指导2— 介绍爱好习惯

　　写作任务:     假如你是某中学的高一学生李华,你想通过网络找一个英国笔友练习英语,交流心得体会。请根据下面表格里的内容,写一篇120词左右的短文,介绍你自己。

　　姓名 李华 性别 女 年龄网Z_X_X_K] 1 6 岁

　　性格 幽默、乐于助人

　　特长。X。X。K] 英语（曾在全校英语竞赛中获第一名）

　　爱好 音乐、集邮、足球、旅游等

　　first place in the English competition in my school. And I want to make greater progress in English. For this reason, I try to make every chance to practice English.

　　If you are interested, you can get contact with me. My E-mail is Lh-808@yahoo.com. I’m looking 成稿:

　　I’m Li Hua, a 16-year-old girl in Senior Grade 1. Being humorous and always ready to help, I get on well with my class-mates. English is my favorite subject, so I’d like to find a pen pal to practice English. We may, at the same time, share our feelings about hobbies. I have many different kinds of hobbies.

　　After school, I often play football with my friends. And traveling always brings me happiness. At the same time, I learn many things, and my body becomes much stronger. I also have a strong interest in collecting stamps, which enriches my life too. If you have spare stamps, we may exchange them. Furthermore, I’m fond of music, especially pop music.

　　However, all of these cannot be compared to my love for English. I once got the first place in the English competition in our school.

　　If you are interested, you can get contact with me. My E-mail is Lh-808@yahoo.com. I’m looking forward to becoming your friend.

　　实战演练

　　现实生活中，每一个人都想获得成功，但在生活中并非经常出现。有的人抓住了机会，而有些人却丧失了机遇，请你根据下面的要点提示，写一篇120字的短文。

　　大部分机遇出现时，我们忽视了。

　　有些人知道机遇的重要性，因此抓住了成功。

　　有些人在等待机遇，而不争取。

　　机遇对每一个人都平等，只要努力和聪明就能取得成功。

　　Everyone in the world wants to succeed. As a matter of fact, opportunity comes every once in a while. On most occasions, it appears without being noticed. Only when the opportunity is away from us, do we realize that we have lost it.

　　Some people know the importance of opportunity . They understand opportunity is a factor for winning a success. So they are always ready for an opportunity when it arrives.

　　However , some other people give up their efforts to seek for and opportunity and grasp it. They are used to waiting for opportunity coming up to their doors.

　　Opportunity is equal for all, but only the more intelligent and work-hard people can finally seize it .

　　请描述漫画所反映的内容，并就此发表你的看法。字数：120-150

　　With the development of economy, Chinese people become richer. They have enough money to go abroad for travel. They feel proud when they hear Chinese is spoken in a France plane. It also makes the travelers happy when they hear the announcement is broadcast in Chinese. However, not knowing much culture in foreign countries, they experience embarrassed state in hotels, because they don’t know how to find the way to have breakfast. What’s more, some Chinese don’t think it’s important to have good manners, for example, spitting is often seen in public places. As a result, signs saying “no spitting” are set up in places of interest, which makes them feel deeply shamed.

　　In my opinion, we Chinese should pay more attention to our manners and get rid of the bad habits. It is every citizen’s possibility to keep our country’s image.

　　在我们的日常社会中，聊天（small talk）是一种非常重要的我们的生活内容了，请你根据本模块你学习的相关知识，从聊天的重要性和聊天时要注意的问题两个方面谈谈你的看法。

　　注意： 字数120――150 。

　　反馈：feedback

　　Nowadays, no matter what you are , I think , small talk is of great importance . It can make you relaxed when you have small talks with your close friends . It can even break the ice with people that they have not got on well . 

　　Small talk can be relaxing or effective , but you should pay attention to something . Firstly ,

　　have something interesting to put in and avoid long stories or giving a lot of detail in unimportant conversation.

　　Secondly , pay attention to your conversational partner by actively listening and giving feedback . Thirdly , keep eye contact. Never look about the room while they are talking to you. Last , maybe the most important , listen more than you talk.

　　Of course , in my opinion, as long as you are happy , it may be enough .

　　你们学校的英语校报招聘校园小记者,要求英语口语好,兴趣广泛。假如你叫王小英,请根据以下提示,以书信的形式写一段120词左右的个人简介去申请。1. 热情、大方、善于与人交流。2. 喜欢英语,曾经获得全市英语竞赛一等奖。3. 爱好音乐、绘画、摄影、体育等活动。