湖南省长沙县实验中学2016届高三英语二轮复习书面表达复习重点话题指导专题03 辩论对比话题指导（教师版）

　　3．参考词汇：巩固strengthen：自学self study

　　Is Training

　　Class

　　Or

　　Family

　　Teacher Necessary?

　　More and more；middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers on weekends . There are two different viewpoints about it …

　　【写作思路】

　　本文为辩论式议论文。其格式和结构为：第一段，综述辩论的内容(本文已经给出)；第二段，表述正方观点及理由；第三段，表述反方观点及理由；第四段，陈述自己的观点。

　　【写作指导】

　　Is Training

　　Class

　　Or

　　Family

　　Teacher Necessary?

　　More and more；middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers on weekends . There are two different viewpoints about it.

　　表示“一些……，一些……”，用some…，others 来表示。

　　④动词原形不可以作表语，要用to make或making。

　　⑤if应改为whether，因为if不可引导主语从句。

　　⑥ be weak at中的at不可以省去，因为后面有宾语a certain subject。

　　【优秀范文】

　　Is Training

　　Class

　　Or

　　Family

　　Teacher Necessary?

　　More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers on weekends, There are two different viewpoints about it.

　　Some thinks it necessary. Firstly, it's more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly, it can strengthen what is learnt in class. Besides, they can learn a lot more. Others think it unnecessary . For one thing , students can easily become dependent.

　　For another, students need time to relax from time to time. What's more, the purpose of many training classes and family teachers is to make money.

　　Personally, I think, whether a training class or family teacher is needed depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe it's OK for you . But be sure to choose a good and suitable class

　　or teacher, Otherwise it would be a waste of time and money .

　　实例指导2—是否参加培训班

　　【写作任务】

　　如今，寒暑假甚至周末，许多孩子被父母送去各种培训班学习。对此现象，有以下两种不同的观点，请你根据提示写千篇短文，并发表自己的看法。

　　1．赞同者：参加培训班使孩子多才多艺，比他人优秀，且能充实孩子的生活。

　　2．反对者：学得多而不精；占用孩子的休息时间。

　　要求：

　　1．不要逐句翻译；

　　2．词数：120-150。

　　参考词汇：多才多艺的versatile

　　holidays . There are two opinions on the matter.

　　Some people agree with it. First, they think it is good for parents to make their children versatile. Second, they believe that attending training classes would make children more excellent than others. Howevel , some people disagree with it. In their opinion, if children spend too much time on study, they'll have no time to rest,

　　【参考范文】

　　Nowadays, many children are sent to attend varieties of training classes by their parents during their holidays. As to this, opinions are mainly divided into two groups.

　　On the one hand, people who are in favor of it hold the view that it is good for children to attend those classes. They think it can make children versatile. At the same time, they believe that attending training classes Would make children more excellent than others. Besides, children can enjoy every day. On the other hand, others are against the view. In their opinion, the burden of study on children is too heavy, so they wouldn't fully master what they have learned in their training classes. What's worse, they haven't enough 'time to take a rest.

　　As far as I am concerned, whether they should attend the training classes depends on children themselves. It is better.to arrange their study according to their own needs and make full use of the holidays.

　　实例指导3―电子游戏

　　【写作任务】

　　中学生玩电子游戏非常普遍。加入你是班长王军，你通过在校内进行调研，调查的结果如下表，现在要求你根据调查内容，你写了一个调查分析报告，寄给报社。(字数120左右)

　　一些同学认为 大部分同学认为 调查后得出结论

　　中学生玩电子游戏可以提高反应速度，促进智力发展。 中学生花太多时间玩游戏对身体健康和学习有害。

　　玩游戏是一种娱乐活动，在有足够的自制力的情况下，适当放松也未尝不可。

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear editors ,

　　As is shown in the table , computer games have become very popular in recent years. Whenever you go, you can see middle school students playing the games in clubs, stores or at home. Obviously , the game give great pleasure and satisfaction.

　　Some students think that the games can train them to respond to things quickly , improve their mind as well as interesting in science . But the mass think that the students spend too much time playing the games , which certainly does harm to their health and study .

　　In my opinion, computer games are a kind of wonderful entertainment . If you have enough self-control ability , you can get pleasure and benefit from them.

　　Your ,

　　Wang Jun

　　实例指导4—Are Paintings Worth Buying?

　　多人认为买字画是浪费钱财，他们说钱应该花在更有用的东西上；而有些人认为买字画值得。他们认为这些字画能给他们带来艺术的享受，而且买字画还可以赚钱。那么你的观点呢?现在请你根据以上内容，以Are Paintings Worth Buying?为题，写一篇120词左右的英语短文。

　　注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

　　Are Paintings Worth Buying?

　　About buying paintings，different people have different ideas．Many people think that ______

　　【写作指导】

　　本题可以从这几个方面去写：

　　1．提出需要议论的议题；

　　2．摆出正反两方面的观点；

　　3．表明作者持何种态度；

　　4．论证自己观点的正确性从而使读者接受自己的观点；

　　5．小结。

　　【学生习作】

　　Are Paintings Worth Buying?

　　1．总体许价：

　　作者能根据本文特点进行组材， 按照内容提示写出了不同人对于买画的不同观点，并发表了自己的看法，所写文章符合写作要求。作者所采用的句式结构灵活多变，全文的表达也很通顺，具有很强的可读性。美中不足的是文中出现了几处小错误。

　　2．亮点或采分点：

　　用了一些较复杂句式，如：宾语从句，表语从句和状语从句等，这些结构的使用提升了文章的档次。

　　3．错误更正：

　　①waste前加a。a waste of意为“浪费”。②better spend改为be better spent。根据句子结构，这儿应用被动结构。

　　③many pleasures改为much pleasure。pleasure当“乐趣”讲时，是不可数名词。

　　④去掉a。“以……为条件”是on condition that…。

　　⑤which改为出that。guarantee后接的是同位语从句，而不是定语从句。

　　【参考范文】

　　Are Paintings Worth Buying?

　　About buying paintings, different people have different ideas. Many people think that buying paintings is a waste of money. They say that the money could be better spent on more useful things. On the contrary, others think paintings are worth buying. They say paintings can give them much pleasure. What' s more, they can earn money by buying or selling paintings.

　　Personally, I think we can buy some paintings on condition that we have much money, I think a big

　　advantage of buying paintings is that people can get lots of fun and pleasure in enjoying paintings. But like any other investment, there is no guarantee that you will make huge profits by buying paintings.

　　So, the best piece of advice I could give will be -- buy to enjoy!

　　实例指导5— 如何礼貌地解释

　　【写作任务】

　　加入你是迈克，在一家小的公司上班，现在你打算离开这家公司，请你用150词左右来给你的老板希尔先生解释你离开的原因。

　　1. 希望在贸易方面，能获得更广泛的经验。

　　2. 照顾住在远地的年老母亲，而申请辞职。

　　3. 由于希望获得更高的职位负更多的责任，而离开现职。

　　注意：文章的题目和开头已经给出。

　　Reasons for leaving

　　Dear Mr. Will ,

　　I am sorry to tell you that I will leave our company …

　　【学生习作】

　　Reasons for leaving

　　Dear Mr. Will ,

　　I am sorry to tell you that I will leave our company . With the help of you I have had a good time here , so I

　　really don’t want to leave here , but for some reasons I have to make the decision.

　　Firstly , I think the main reason is that I am determined to get much more experience in trading . After all , our company is still a developing company , and I have not many chances to improve myself in treading .

　　Secondly , I am leaving our company to be with my mother and care for my aged mother in a distant city. She has been very ill for a long time , so she needs looking after very much .

　　Lastly , of course , I want to improve my position and have more responsibility in another company .

　　I wish you can accept my application . Thank you !

　　Yours,

　　Mike

　　实例指导6---援助与否

　　【写作任务】

　　假若你是四川地震灾区学生，你班在上周的班会上就“地震灾区人民是否应该接受社会援助”进行了激烈的讨论。请根据下表内容写一篇英语短文，并发表自己的看法。

　　多数同学赞同接受社会援助 一些同学反对接受社会援助 你的看法

　　1. 一方有难，八方支援。

　　2. 接受援助可以较快地重建家园，恢复正常的生活和学习。

　　3. 一年来，全国人民的无私援助给灾区真正带来了希望。 1. 虽然我们受了灾，但我们的精神依旧。

　　2. 活着就是一种幸运，我们应尽我们所能来进行重建。

　　3. 有的人为了得到这种援助，压力很大，这对他们有不良的影响。

　　……

　　注：1 不可逐条翻译，可适当增加所给内容，开头已写出，不少于120词。

　　2

　　参考词汇：earthquake-stricken areas灾区

　　Last week, our class had a heated discussion about…

　　【写作指导】

　　对比类写作是英语考试书面表达的一种常见的命题形式，也是近年高考写作的一个重要考查形式。由

　　这类题型通常采用现在时和过去时，如2001年南考全国卷的书面表达(对比“减负前后的周末活动”)，1999年高考全国卷的书面表达(“学校三年前后的变化”)。

　　二、正反观点对比

　　此类写作要求往往是对同一件事情表达不同看法，即正反两种观点。如2006年高考陕西卷书面表达(比较暑假“待在家中”与“外出旅游”之优缺点)。写作顺序一般为：提出问题—介绍两种不同观点——对两种观点的论据逐项进行对比――陈述自己的观点并简单说明理由。时态一般以现在时为主。

　　在写此类文章时，应尽量解释清楚要比较的两个或多个事物、地点、人或想法之间的相同点和不同点。清楚地描述相同点及不同点，会使读者更容易了解你所要比较的事物。

　　三、数据分析对比

　　这类对比写作主要通过对数据的分析和比较得出某种结论或说明某种现象。此类写作切忌将所给数据简单罗列(这往往是相当一部分考生的通病)，正确的写作思路应是通过所给数据进行分析比较得出某物(某人数)增加了或减少了，说明了什么趋势，从而得出何种结论。写作顺序一般为：提出所要说明的现象——数据对比一得出结论。时态一般以现在时为主，有时根据要求而定。

　　常见的关联词有：

　　正方观点：On (the) one hand，…

　　反方观点：On the other hand，…

　　支持某一方观点的过渡词：and，besides , in addition , meanwhile，what's more…

　　※ 典句积累

　　① 总起下文：

　　Different people hold different opinions.

　　People have different opinions on this problem.

　　People take different views on this question. ② 表达观点一： …of them hold the opinion that …. …of them are in favor of the idea that… People who are for/against the idea think …

　　③ 表达不同观点及衔接：

　　However, …of them hold a different view.

　　People who are against it don’t think so. However, each coin has two sides. ※ 写作步骤

　　审题

　　该文以表格形式出现，讨论的话题是地震灾区人民是否应该接受社会援助。从命题形式上确定这是一篇提纲作文；从文体上看，主要应用一般现在时；人称为第一人称和第三人称。

　　写提纲 列出较重要的汉语提示要点，用英语写出相应的短语和句型。

　　1）赞成：be in favor of ；“一方有难，八方支援”可以简单译为：Once someone is in trouble, others should give him a hand as soon as possible；恢复正常的生活和学习make … return to normal

　　2）反对be against；受灾suffer a lot from earthquake；活着就是一种幸运 It is lucky that we are still alive.

　　3) 在我看来，主要靠自己而不一味依赖他人 in my opinion, do the work by ourselves, depend on others

　　3. 连词成句 注意在整理上述信息要点时，不要生搬硬套，要灵活表达，在保持连贯的基础上，尽量使用1. 文章结构安排合理。全文分四个自然段。第一自然段提出要讨论的问题,再用Different students have different opinions过渡。二、三自然段采用总分式，先点出主题句，然后进行说理。第四自然段点出自己观点。

　　2. 以理服人。由于有以上的结构安排，加上合理发挥，对于是否接爱社会援助有明确信息。

　　3. 语言生动，具有较强的针对性，这正是对比性文体不可缺少的特点。如第一自然段的过渡句，第三自然段中which引导的定语从句，及结尾的Only开头的倒装句。同时全文使用了许多副词、形容词（如possible, quickly, lucky, mainly, simply等）更加强了这种针对性的语气，而however, in my opinion, only in this way等短语衔接上下文，使全文浑然一体。

　　4.恰当地运用相关典句，为全文增添了不少亮点。

　　实战演练

　　自“神九”返回以后，人们就“普通人去太空旅行”的话题展开了热烈的讨论。请你根据下表的提示，以“The Advantages and Disadvantages of Space Travel ”为题写一篇词数不少于100字的英语短文，并简要地发表你自己的观点。 太空旅行的益处

　　太空旅行的弊端

　　1．提供居住的新场所

　　2．给人类提供新能源

　　3．对人们更好地了解其他领域有好处 1．花费太大

　　2．人类住在其他星球上的想法不切实际

　　3．太空旅行有危险

　　你的看法

　　The Advantages and Disadvantages of Space Travel

　　There are several advantages of space travel . First of all, it could provide man with new places to live and new sources of energy. In addition, space travel helps people understand the universe better. Also space travel research is good for other research fields.

　　However, space travel also has some disadvantages. On one hand, it costs too much money which could be spent in other aspects. On the other hand, the idea of people living on other planets is unrealistic. What's more, space travel could be dangerous, too.

　　In a word, though there are disadvantages, I think space travel is a good thing. It is important for us to explore and learn about the universe.

　　时下，司机开车打手机现象已经变得越来越普遍，并备受关注。为此，你班同学就“司机开车打手机是否应该禁止”作了调查，结果显示如下表，，请你就此写一篇短文反映情况，并谈谈你的看法。词数120左右。

　　观点 比例 理由

　　赞成 30％

　　不应该禁止，手机作为现代通讯工具之一，它方便快捷，尤其是遇到有要事要谈时

　　反对 70％

　　应该禁止，开车打、乜话危险，容易引起事故

　　Nowadays, it has become more and more popular for drivers to talk on the cellphone while driving. But through the survey we did, we found that people have different Opinions about this practice.

　　Among those persons we interviewed, 30% agree with this practice. They say that being a modern means of communication, the cellphone is convenient and fast, especially if you-have something important to say. While the majority surveyed, about 70% are against the practice, saying that it is dangerous to talk on the cellphone while driving, and can cause accidents easily.

　　In my opinion, it would be better for drivers not to use the cellphone while driving for his safety and others'. If they do have something important to say, they should stop to talk.

　　注意：

　　摇滚音乐

　　rock-n-roll music

　　应说明你自己的观点；

　　可以适当增加细节，使文章连贯。

　　March 6th, 2007

　　Fine

　　Today our class had a heated discussion about rock-n-roll in two groups. We realize that, with the development of society, music has been closely connected with people’s life. Rock-n-roll music is a branch of music. But is it good or bad?

　　55% of the students think rock-n-roll music is a kind of popular music that spreads widely throughout the

　　world, reflecting characteristics of the changing times. It is a form of extremely good expressiveness through tunes and words. Not only learned people but also common persons can enjoy it, for it’s a lively way of free communications.

　　However, 45% of the students think that listeners might get too nervous and excited to relax themselves at the thrilling music. What’s more, lacking cultural context often makes it hard for it to stand long tasting.

　　In my opinion, some well-done rock-n-roll is very popular, but some will make people tired, so we should develop rock-n-roll music properly.