2016年6月英语四级作文点评，附范文

A Letter to My Friend

此次大学英语四级写作部分考查应用文——书信的写作。本道试题则是要求考生写一封感谢信给一个朋友，就你曾身处困境时他给你提供的帮助进行感谢。本题难度偏易，是一个大学生普遍有话可说的话题。值得注意的是，大家不应忘记了书信体区别于短文写作的格式要求，字数应在120至180之间。

在篇章结构方面，除去开头的称呼语和结尾的署名之外，建议考生采取三段式写作。

第一段：表明写信目的。开门见山，写出为何写这封感谢信(I am writing this letter in the purpose of…)，这里需要同学适当发挥想象力，试想大学生在校园里会遇到什么困境(…when I can't adapt myself very well to the college life)

第二段：说明感谢理由。考生应陈述困境的具体情况(As for me, it is the first time that I have been apart with my loving parents and come to a thoroughly strange place.)，以及朋友在帮助其度过困难中做了些什么(It is you who see through my weakness and stand by me in the darkest days.)。

第三段：总结展望。表述希望友谊长远发展的愿望(After all we have been through, I hope our friendship would go further and further.)，并阐述自身立场，希望朋友在遇到困难的时候自己也能从旁支持(Just remember that I would be there for you if you need any help.)。

此外，考生还应注意书信体的口吻，写信对象是同辈的朋友，因此，语气应当亲切友好。以上为2016年6月大学英语四级作文点评。

感谢信的写作注意事项(文都教育版)

我们先来看一下这次作文的要求吧：

四级真题作文一：(感谢老师)

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to one of your school teachers upon entering college. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

四级真题作文二：(感谢家人)

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to your parents or any other family number upon making a memorable achievement. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

四级真题作文三：(感谢朋友)

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to one of your friends who helped you most when you were difficulty. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

通过题干我们可以分析出，针对感谢信的写作要求，我们应该注意以下几点：

1. 格式要正确。与其他应用文写作一样，书信体裁需要在正文的前面加上称呼，在正文的末尾加上结束语，落款和署名。

2. 标点符号要正确。Dear+称谓的后面一定要用逗号，不能用冒号。还要注意英语的句号是实心的，并且涉及到书名、电影名或者作品名的，要大些，英语中没有书名号。

3. 考生需要根据题目要求完成写作。在这一部分，考生需要注意字数的要求是120-180字，不能少些或者超出。另外，虽然题目中并未对落款人作过多要求，但是考生还是有必要把敏感的人名、地名和学校名去掉，以防作弊嫌疑。

4. 通过三个题目的要求，我们都要明确表明我们的感激之心，表述时要目标明确，语言贴切、充分，内容言之有物，句子流畅地道。

感谢信的黄金句式(文都教育版)

下面，文都英语老师给大家分享一些我们课程中的黄金句式，仅供大家参考。

开篇语：Dear+称谓，

首段：开篇语的黄金句式

1. I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for the continuous assistance you offered to me these years.

2. I would like to extend my heartfelt thanks to you for your unselfish love shown to me during my preparation of College Entrance Examination.

3. I am writing to express my appreciation for the generous help you rendered to me since I entered this university.

中间段：具体感谢内容表述的黄金句式

1. On the one hand, your generous help made it possible that I can gain a splendid academic achievement in my study career. It is because of your encouragement that now I can study in one of the leading universities of our country, and serve as chairman of Student Union.

2. On the other hand, with your help, I could get along well with my friends and have good cooperation with other members during work.

3. I will always remember your kindness and painstaking labor. Besides, It is really an honor for me to be your sister and I will cherish the goodwill you showed to me wherever I go.

4. You give me emotional security, care and love and support my study, which is part and parcel for my school days.

5. Without your assistance and care, I can not make good performance definitely. I take this opportunity to express our deep appreciation for the kind assistance you rendered me.

6. Your generous help made it possible that I pass my college entrance examination and obtain the good result. I will cherish the good will and family affection you showed me.

7. Your encouragement is my best drving force. Please accept my most cordial thanks for your best love, which I will always remember.

8. On the one hand, it is because of your encouragement and continuous assistance that now I have obtained a splendid academic achievement in my study career, and serve as chairman of Student Union.

9. On the other hand, with your help, I could get along well with classmates and have good cooperation with other members during work.

10. I will always remember your kindness and painstaking labor. It is really an honor to be your student, and I will cherish the goodwill you showed to me wherever I go.

尾段：结束语的黄金句式

1. In a word, my appreciation to you is beyond words.

2. In the years to come, I will make more effort to repay your kindness and refresh our family affection.

3. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your kind assistance.

4. In a word, my heartfelt gratitude to you is beyond words. In the years to come, I will study harder to repay your kindness and make more progress.

落款：祝福+姓名

Lovely yours, Sincerely yours, Yours sincerely等

姓名不要写自己的名字。 Kevin，Li Ming，Li Hua 都可以。