一篇经过“斧正”英语短文

刚才去一个英语学习论坛，看到nephewliang网友用英文写了一篇短文，大意是介绍他所在的办公室，然后请求其他网友斧正。果然没过多久，wing1978网友来了，举起大斧，给这篇短文正了正（笑）。我个人认为，这篇短文很有代表性，其中出现的一些错误，是国内英语初学者经常犯的，所以下面我想把这篇短文中有明显错误的一组句子挑出来，请各位看看原文是怎样写的（第一行），斧手又是怎样正的（第二行）。为便于初学者理解，我对文字做了适当的修改和简化，因此下面的内容与帖子的内容略有出入。

①When entering into the office，you can find everything is kept in good order.

②Stepping into the office，you will find everything is in good order.

③进入办公室，可以发现一切都井井有条。

①The file keepers on the left are put of data in classified way.

②The file cabinets on the left are used to store classified data.

③左边的文件柜用来存放分类文件。

①The white bookcases on the right are full of instruction and manual of different kinds.

②The white bookcases on the right are full of manuals of various kinds.

③右边的白色书柜装满了各种各样的手册。

①The ivory-white desks，decorated with bonsais，are shining in the lighting.

②The ivory-white desks，decorated with bonsais，shine under the lights.

③装饰着盆景的乳白色办公桌闪闪发光。

①Two air-conditioners are installed respectively near the front door and the back door.

②Two air-conditioners are installed respectively near the front and back doors.

③两台空调分别安装在前门和后门。

①The engineering office provides a good place to the engineers of the engineering department.

②The office provides a good place for the members of the engineering department.

③这个办公室为工程部的工作人员提供了一个良好的办公场所。

①Because of no stable working place，they worked only in the workshops.

②The lack of office space forced them to work only in the workshops.

③办公室空间的狭小迫使他们只能在车间中工作。

①It was difficult to get together to have a meeting or to make discussion for all.

②It was difficult to get together to have a meeting or discussion.

③大家很难凑在一起开会或讨论。