They are wasting resources, for example, time, energy and money.
上面这句话不错,只是转折词for example不妥当;应该这样:
They are wasting resources. For example, they use too much time, energy and money.
不然就要换一换转折词,改用such as或like:
They are wasting resources, such as (or like) time, energy and money.
不管任何语言,转折词(transitional words)都扮演着一个重要角色,就是:承先启后,使句子紧凑,段落相吸,对文章结构,有良性作用。但是有些人几乎没有采用转折词的习惯,结果文句松散,上下文七零八乱,应该避免。
现在把主要转折词,分类列下,供大家参考。
Ⅰ表示尤有进者的意思:
Again, also, then, besides, further, furthermore, moreover, next, in addition等,如:
① Jason teaches diligently. Besides, he writes a lot.
② English is a useful language. For one thing, it is an official language in the UN. Then, it is widely used in business, science and technology.
Ⅱ表示反意见:
But, however, still, yet, after all, for all that, in spite of, on the contrary, on the other hand等,如:
③ Jim is intelligent but lazy.
④ Singapore is not a big country.On the contrary, it is very small.
Ⅲ表示困果关系:
Therefore, so, hence, thus, accordingly, consequently, as a result 等,如:
⑤ Some people are over-ambitious. As a result, they are usually unhappy.
⑥ Tom did not work hard; hence, he failed.
Ⅳ表示比较关系:
Likewise, similarly, in a like manner 等,如:
⑦ You cannot writes without a pen. Likewise, you cannot cook without rice.
⑧ No one is allowed to speak Mandarin in an English class. Similarly, no one is allowed to speak English in a Mandarin class.
Ⅴ表示举例示范:
For example, in other words, for instance, that is 等,如:
⑨ There are some common errors in his composition. For instance, it is wrong to use he to replace the queen.
Ⅵ表示结束:
To sum up, in brief, in short, on the whole, to conclude 等,如:
⑩ Some say Singapore is a nice place to live in. Others say it is not so nice. It is too competitive. In short, some like Singapore; some do not.
少儿英语圣经故事101:Turly I am thy servant我真是你的仆人
少儿英语圣经故事63:Temptation试探
少儿英语圣经故事107:Covereth his sins遮掩过犯
少儿英语圣经故事75:Unbelief不信的恶心
少儿英语圣经故事70:Humble谦卑
少儿英语圣经故事83:If God be for us神若帮助我
少儿英语圣经故事92:Glorify God in your body在身子上荣耀神
少儿英语圣经故事66:Forgiving饶恕
少儿英语圣经故事44:Elisha以利沙(1)
少儿英语圣经故事84:Do choose做选择
少儿英语圣经故事73:Compain抱怨
少儿英语圣经故事100:Be content知足
少儿英语圣经故事96:I will come again我会再来
少儿英语圣经故事95:Seek the first Kingdom of God先求他的国
少儿英语圣经故事105:All things for god万事效力
少儿英语圣经故事89:Today he may或许在今天
少儿英语圣经故事85:Hunger in spirit渴望主
少儿英语圣经故事74:Sanctify圣洁
少儿英语圣经故事80:Obedience听话
少儿英语圣经故事102:He is lord他是主
少儿英语圣经故事93:An example of the belivever做众人的榜样
少儿英语圣经故事72:All things work together万事互相效力
少儿英语圣经故事67:Casting all your care upon him把忧虑卸给神
少儿英语圣经故事61:Jealousy嫉妒
少儿英语圣经故事76:Be not afraid不要怕
少儿英语圣经故事54:Daniel但以理(5)
少儿英语圣经故事79:Victory得胜
少儿英语圣经故事45:Elisha以利沙(2)
少儿英语圣经故事60:In the Beginning起初
少儿英语圣经故事81:Decision决定
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