11月9日雅思写作的解析以及原创范文

　　三段：谈及不同意的观点的合理性，再加以反驳：

　　Some people, however, might remain suspicious of my standpoint. After all, every individual needs to have a unique approach to get relaxed and savor pleasure. An argument might be hold by some people is that a man with great courage is supposed to dare to constantly try and experience new things including those adventurous sports events. However, I want to argue that we can never seek excitement at the cost of suffering from injury or pain.

　　翻译：有些人也许怀疑我的立场，毕竟，每人都有自己独特的方式来放松自己，品味快乐。有人也许认为，有勇气的人应该敢于不断自我尝试，体验新鲜事物，包括一些危险的运动。但是，为了追求刺激而受伤害太不值得。

　　尾段：再次亮明观点 + 总结理由

　　In the final analysis, my would like to stress my view that it is a hasty proposal to allow and encourage dangerous sports activities because those who dive into those adventures might get hurt, meanwhile，some risky sports activities might become the excuse of popularizing violence.

　　翻译：总之，我再次强调我的立场，允许和鼓励危险性的运动是很草率的建议，因为那些从事冒险活动的人也许会受伤，同时，一些危险性的运动会成为暴力传播的借口。

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