三段:谈及不同意的观点的合理性,再加以反驳:
Some people, however, might remain suspicious of my standpoint. After all, every individual needs to have a unique approach to get relaxed and savor pleasure. An argument might be hold by some people is that a man with great courage is supposed to dare to constantly try and experience new things including those adventurous sports events. However, I want to argue that we can never seek excitement at the cost of suffering from injury or pain.
翻译:有些人也许怀疑我的立场,毕竟,每人都有自己独特的方式来放松自己,品味快乐。有人也许认为,有勇气的人应该敢于不断自我尝试,体验新鲜事物,包括一些危险的运动。但是,为了追求刺激而受伤害太不值得。
尾段:再次亮明观点 + 总结理由
In the final analysis, my would like to stress my view that it is a hasty proposal to allow and encourage dangerous sports activities because those who dive into those adventures might get hurt, meanwhile,some risky sports activities might become the excuse of popularizing violence.
翻译:总之,我再次强调我的立场,允许和鼓励危险性的运动是很草率的建议,因为那些从事冒险活动的人也许会受伤,同时,一些危险性的运动会成为暴力传播的借口。
薛鹏全文点评:和华丽文风版形成对比的是,朴素版极限运动的创作所用词汇皆来自高中3500词汇。两个版本,一是支持极限运动,二是反对极限运动。文无定法,只要论证有力,可以自圆其说,观点无所谓对错。小鹏哥想要证明的是即使高中生使用简洁词汇,有限句法,也可创作出主题明确,逻辑清晰,论证饱满,句型变化的高分作文。烤鸭加油,小鹏哥原创语料库以及雅思预测不断更新,欢迎持续关注新东方网雅思频道。
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