雅思写作评析

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　　Some people think traditional games are better than modern games in helping children develop their abilities. To what extent do you agree?

　　I

　　INTRODUCTION

　　II

　　Traditional games cultivate certain abilities.

　　1 SOUL

　　The ability to cooperate with their peers

　　2 MIND

　　The ability to think independently and the skills to develop their competitive strategies

　　III

　　Modern games also foster specific skills.

　　1 TECHNOLOGY

　　The skills to operate electronic and digital devices adeptly

　　2 EMPLOYMENT

　　Familiarity with video games can actually lead to careers in video-game and animation design as video games have become a major industry in many countries.

　　3 SOUL

　　Modern games nurture team spirit and the ability to collaborate with others as well

　　IV

　　CONCLUSION

　　Modern games are more reliant on the equipment, which just reflects how dependent the modern society is on technological innovations. Traditional games are not necessarily better than modern games in training childrens skills as the definition of skills evolves over time.