【考研英语高分写作】PartB历年真题范文

　　Directions: Your essay should cover all the information provided and meet the requirements below: 1. Write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon. 2. Give your comments.

　　According to the cartoon, various kinds of promises are often seen in advertisements, department stores and even public services. Even a hen has learned how to promise. It is clear that the hen is deliberately mystifying those who are interested in the eggs she lays. In our society, many enterprises try to fool consumers in much the same way that the hen does. In the first place, shop-owners and company managers in mounting numbers make use of promises and attempt to induce consumers to purchase their goods or services. In the second place, battles of false promise-making become increasingly severe in the commercial welfare, causing great harm to the society. As far as I am concerned, all we should lay more emphasis on is what we do and how we can virtually improve the level of service. As the old saying goes, Good wine needs no bush. Only in this way can we make people satisfied with what we do.

　　漫画显示，各式各样的承诺经常出现在广告、商店甚至公众服务中间。以致一只母鸡也学会了如何承诺。很明显，这只鸡正在有意迷惑那些对它所产的鸡蛋感兴趣的人们。 在我们的社会中，很多企业也跟这只鸡一样以同样的方式试图欺骗消费者。首先，越来越多的店主和公司经理们试图利用承诺引诱消费者购买其产品或服务。其次，虚假承诺的战役在商业福利中日趋激烈，给社会带来严重危害。 在我看来，我们所应重视的是做什么和如何真正提高服务水平。正如言语所说:酒香不怕巷子深， 只有这样才能使人们对我们的行为满意。