考研英语作文范文批改(228)

　　As I am planning to take part in the next January.(改成逗号，前边的内容不是一句话)I have decided to place an order of some essential books with due consideration of the good reputation of your store and high quality of your goods.

　　Firstly, enclosed with this letter is a list which details these books of my requests. Secondly, I also need to know how to pay for the books. Thirdly, I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver these books before November 1, 2014to Peking University.

　　I would like to express my sincere appreciation to you for(加your) time and consideration. Looking forward to your reply.