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　　I am a senior who will enroll in the graduate entrance examination this year and wants(主语是I，改成want) to pursue my degree in your department. And I am writing this letter for inquring(拼写错误) some relevant information.

　　Firstly, I would like to know how many students are you(这是个陈述句，用you are) planning to admit this year. Secondly, I wonder the number of applicants and the score of admission line recent years. I would express my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to privide(拼写错误) me the list of reference books.

　　Thank you for your time and explanation. I am looking forward your reply.Yours sincerely.