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　　I have arrived in China safely. Im writing to apologize to you for one thing wich(which) made me embarrassed. When I unclosed my luggage, i(大写) found your favorate(拼写错误) CD 21 GUNS(英语中书名等不用书名号或分号) was in it,(缺少连词) it must be that I had forgot to return it to you in hurry.

　　I plan to solve this problem with all my efforts. I intend to return this CD to you by DHL, please give(加me) your new address and post code. If you are not anxious about it, I would bring it back when I finished vacation and got your flat. Please E-MAIL me which way you prefer to .

　　Once again I would sincerely express my apology to you for any inconvenience I ever made. Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.