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　　As I am planning to study abroad for my further academic education.(这不是一句话，要把句号改成逗号) I have decided to apply for admission into a famous foreign university with a due consideration of many aspects.

　　Firstly, what are the qualitifications(拼写错误) do I need to follow a course of study in your esteemed school? I have already had a bachlor(拼写错误) degree from Beijing University, but I wonder if there are any other requirements. Secondly, how much is the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships for international students. Thirdly, what is the situation of accommodation?

　　I would like to be grateful for your essential information. I look forward to your reply and to hearing from you soon.