考研英语作文范文批改(155)

　　I am a student of this University who is interested in English. I would like to request(这个词是要求恳求的意思，用在这里稍显不恰当) some information about English Club.

　　First of all, whether the English Club needs its members have a good command of English. Secondly, what is the size of the English Club,(加连词) what after-class activities they will be held(主语是they，就不要用被动语态了，或者去掉they)?

　　Thirdly, what are the dates which these activities will be held? I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information. Thank you for your time. I look forward to your reply.