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　　My family is planing(双写n) a family trip to Kyoto during the summer of 2014. It will take us two weeks. As the official tourism board, we wonder you must be able to provide the information we really want. (以下内容另起一段)Could you send to(去掉，send是及物动词) us a brochure or a pamphlet which listing(用第三人称单数形式，在从句中作谓语) the tourist attractions of Kyoto and a map for there.

　　Because we are all interested in the cultural traditions of japan(首字母大写), and thats why we choose Kyoto of Japan. We want to know more about the local culture and life via the place you recommend to us.

　　Please send the two items to us by the address above. We are very glad to know your agency add this bonus service recently, and appreciate what you do for us who plan vacation in the area(建议去掉).