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　　I have read your advertisement for an editor for your magazine Design and Fashionsseveral days ago, inoctober(October) 10th,51job daily(建议用常用的方法，in the newspaper/on the Internet等 ). I would be much grateful if you could give me a chance to work for you.

　　As a young man whose interest is in fashion designing, the position you offered is exactly like the kind of job I am seeking for. I graduated from Shanghai University with a degree in art, and worked in a relevant company for two years before. Whats more , I have a good command of English. I am an easy-going , hard-working and responsible people.